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NaterRang — Core of the Apple Part 4
Published: 2013-11-20 04:11:40 +0000 UTC; Views: 135356; Favourites: 1217; Downloads: 823
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Part 1: naterrang.deviantart.com/art/C…Part 2: naterrang.deviantart.com/art/C…
Part 3: naterrang.deviantart.com/art/C…
It's finally here! Part four! We've come a long way, but there's still 3 parts remaining! Once again a big thank you to and Mallac for providing input and advice on this leg of the journey! Most of all though, I have to thank whose superb dramatic readings of my comics is the primary motivating force to finish this project.
This is also the first part of this comic that was entirely rendered in Manga Studio 5 EX.
Anyway, on to the next part! We're nearing the homestretch now!
EDIT:
Obabscribbler just finished the next part of the comic dub! Check it out:
www.youtube.com/watch?v=8Ly8vk…
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MOAR!!!!! XD i loved this comic '-'
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www.youtube.com/watch?v=FN-UFO…
there were many tears to be shed, I feel this makes it easier to cry
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Is it weird I had to subdue my innermost feelings and force myself not to cry, so instead of madly sobbing, I only lost one tear?
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*lots and lots and lots of sobbing* I'm sorry guys *sniff* I'll pull myself together...
I CAN'T TAKE IT ANY MORE. *continuously sobs loudly*
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It's okay, we all feel the same way *hugs* Let the feeling touch you, and know that your heart is kind, for feeling such sadness for this character
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Wow this legit made me tear up. I can't wait for next page. I hope there's RariJack- UH- I MEAN-
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Still working on it. Going slowly unfortunately...
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Beautiful....
But wait. Granny Smith lost....two children?
Um....I'm hoping that's purely in the platonic and not the actual familiar sense.
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Thank you!
What I meant to imply was that Granny thinks of all her younger family as her children. Which would include her son in law.
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I figured it was something like that.
Anyway, great story!
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That...omg that panel...with her mom and dad shimmering in the air around her...AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHH SO SAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAD
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I cried I can't stop crying I've cried for 6 hours now... WHY DID YOU MAKE THIS COMIC?! I LOVE IT!!! I just...
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gosh! i've never cried so much before! i had to slip this part before like the 4th panel! gosh im so sad!
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I-I-I almost cryed at a pony comic
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You made my cry at a pony comic... Well done.
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I just realised. Rarity thinks this is all her fault....Oh God.
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I'm surprised AJ doesn't hate her guts. I'm surprised the two of them could have EVER been friends after that.
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It's a testament to what a good heart she has I think. Instead of blaming Rarity, she blames herself since she was the one that started the argument.
I love Applejack but I have to admit, I'm really feeling for Rarity on this one. Imagine the guilt that's going through her thinking that she's the one to blame.
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It's in Rarity's nature to take on the burdens of others. Or is that more Fluttershy?
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Rarity I think. Fluttershy's nature is more of...Be unquestioningly nice.
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I PROMISED MY SELF I WOULD NOT CRY
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My heart burns with feels,moments when there is nothing more to do.Better to do then not to do,you sir made me shed manly tears today.I thank thee as a fellow homo sapien.
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I have no words to describe this, but... wonderful. This story is simply wonderful. The plot, the sequences, the characters' feelings it's... perfect.
Good work. Really, good work
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Thank you! I'm glad you're enjoying it so far. ^^
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I'm not gonna cry... I'm not gonna cry...
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I let tears out when she got her hat...
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Lie down... Try not to cry.... Cry a fucking lot.... ;-;
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wait granny lost 2 children where applejacks parends her children both?
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This was a little confusing, and relates more to my family experience.
Basically, Granny Smith considers all her younger family her children. That would include her daughter and son-in-law.
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and how about that one of the parents is that not one of her kids?
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Like I said: " That would include her daughter and SON-IN-LAW."
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o like that that is why they call them dad or mother i always tought that is not you dad that is your wifes dad X)
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I've seen/read some pretty sad pics/fics, but aside from Metal-Kitty's MLP comic, yours is the only one that can continually bring tears to my eyes.
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Well thank you!
Metal-Kitty is a lot faster than I am though. I wish I had her work ethic. XP
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