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NaterRang — Core of the Apple Part 4
Published: 2013-11-20 04:11:40 +0000 UTC; Views: 135360; Favourites: 1218; Downloads: 823
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Part 1: naterrang.deviantart.com/art/C…Part 2: naterrang.deviantart.com/art/C…
Part 3: naterrang.deviantart.com/art/C…
It's finally here! Part four! We've come a long way, but there's still 3 parts remaining! Once again a big thank you to and Mallac for providing input and advice on this leg of the journey! Most of all though, I have to thank whose superb dramatic readings of my comics is the primary motivating force to finish this project.
This is also the first part of this comic that was entirely rendered in Manga Studio 5 EX.
Anyway, on to the next part! We're nearing the homestretch now!
EDIT:
Obabscribbler just finished the next part of the comic dub! Check it out:
www.youtube.com/watch?v=8Ly8vk…
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No problem!
Where it concerns MLP comics and speed, it's never fast enough for me :3
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my desk currently: my crying has made a smile of tears
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gODDAMN i CAN'T STOP CRYIN'
Beautifully written, looking forward to part 5
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I cried during this entire series.
You have made me cry, 10 times over
This series combined with the talent of Scribbler could even make the most tough brony cry his heart out.
You are amazing
so
many
feels
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Why am i not crying? I know I should be balling my eyes out but for some reason i can't.
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aww, poor little apple jack. please don't cry...
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I can't...stop...crying
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My feels. Even after reading this. This many times. The feels are still felt.
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I can't stop crying........
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I can't read with all of these tears in my eye.
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I am so glad you've updated this. I love how this comic story is unfolding, as Applejack recalls how she lost her parents (Melrose and Tangelo, must be where Aunt and Uncle Orange came from eh?) because they were rescuing Rarity from that bridge. That she and AJ had fought and Rarity was coming to apologize. I know that Rarity and AJ aren't exactly like two peas in a pod (see Look Before You Sleep), but I wonder what they were fighting about. I can't wait to see how the younger Applejack mends fences with Rarity.
Also, I would to see the older Apple Bloom's reaction to this. Do you think Sweetie Belle would be included as well?
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We wait, for the next part.
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Man... That was so heartbreaking.
Poor Applejack... and poor Rarity. Both feel very guilty. 
Melrose and Tangelo... Not bad for names.
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Basically, Rarity was on the bridge because she was headed to Sweet Apple Acres to apologize to Applejack. Applejack feels guilty because she knows that if she'd been able to control herself and not start that fight with Rarity, she wouldn't have been on that bridge when it collapsed.
Thank you! Took me a long time to come up with those names. You are the first person to comment on them. XD
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Oh yeah... I can see that. Thanks for clearing that up for me.
You're very welcome. (Never thought I'd get your attention this way.)
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I read EVERY single comment I get. I'm just usually bad at replying. "What a great comment! I'll reply later..." XP
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Aw, that was really sad, but it's good that she finally got all the sadness out. Now she can finally move on. Let's just hope she can help Rarity, because she is probably taking there deaths as badly as AJ is
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I'm really excited for the next part
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"Ah wish ah'd fallen too!!" That part hurted my heart...
Another great part, beautiful job
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Heh...you're one of THOSE artists then...
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.....
It is very sad.... i am cry...
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I rarely read these for anything. I decided to read this one and I've gotta say I cried a whole bunch. But I love it. Can't wait for the next part!
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I almost thought there was never going to be anymore part. Although maybe I was mistaken, but I thought there was gonna be four parts and not three more after this one?
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No, plans can change. But the plan as it stands is for 3 more parts. 2 Story and 1 Wrap-up.
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This is excellent. I look forward to the next part.
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In the last panel. Is that supposed to be Rarity and Applejack as adults or still as fillies?
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It's so sad...But I love this so much! <3
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I was going through this fine and dandy, appreciating it but feeling fine. Then that shot of Applejack wearing the hat and her parents holding her, I couldn't help it. That was beautiful.
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I was going through this fine and dandy, appreciating it but feeling fine. Then that shot of Applejack wearing the hat and her parents holding her, I couldn't help it. That was beautiful.
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I cried when I read this
its really good
so it was never really was Rarity's fault.......
anyway keep up the good work
and I have an idea for a comic
-well I was wondering if you could make it-
the idea is that, Rarity does not seem to be as close to her parent's
as a filly I'm guessing she was like really really close, like a daddy's girl
but when sweetie belle came along everything changed, Rarity started to grow more distance from her parent's while they made sure there attention was always on Sweetie Belle -thus I think her calling her parents mother and father, from mommy and daddy to mother and father that's a big change, why not mum or dad, but that might just be here but I think she's distance from them- so to the present day it can show her parents with sweetie belle but then, they turn there attention to rarity and show that they loved her no matter want and they always will.
Well that's kind of my idea and since your so good at making heart warming comic's then who better to ask then you
so if your not to busy maybe you can use my idea for your next comic.
But if you dont want to then thats OK
Keep up the awesome work
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This...this is liquid pride, nothing to it...
....
...dammit!!
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I just can not wait for the 5 coming
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I *did* cry upon reading this... I defy anybody not to.
Wonderful work. THE FEELS...
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Part 5 Part 5 Part 5! Oh the tears! I need the 5th part! Oh I can't wait to see what happens next!
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I CHALLENGE WHO MADE THIS TO A DUEL AND IF I WIN YOU DRAW FASTER FOR PART 5! IF YOU WIN YOU CAN GO AT WHATEVER PACE YOU WANT! (
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Not me, I just saw it and it left on a cliff hanger. I was like *deep breathing* Finish!
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I NEED PART 5 AND UNTIL PART 5 COMES I'LL BE TALKING IN THE ROYAL CANTERLOT VOICE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Oh my goodness!!! So good! All the feels!
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so many feels man... so many feels
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