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Published: 2016-05-07 22:28:55 +0000 UTC; Views: 1341; Favourites: 17; Downloads: 0
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"Stara, I have another favor." Sparkle said. "I can't take this egg, I would but after this, I can't. Not now. I need time to heal. And I just can't abandoned it. So......can you take care of it?"
"What?!" Stara gasped. "Sparkle, I can't! I-"
"Yes, you can." Sparkle said calmly. "You have Midnight and I have no one. It needs a mother and a father to raise it. Maybe when things calm down and I'm back on my feet I can take care it, but for now. I need you to take care it."
Stara stared at her in shock, but she then blinked and sighed. "I understand, but it depends what Midnight will say. However, I think he'll agree anyway."
Sparkle nodded and stepped back. "I'm sorry.......for this."
"Sparkle, it isn't your fault." Stara said. "Right now, take care of yourself and I'll look after this egg. Until you're better."
Sparkle only nodded it response and turned away. She looked at her necklace that was dangling from her neck because of the rain soaking her. She was still wet, but not soaked anymore.
"I'm sorry, Sparkle you had to go through this." Stara said in a calming voice. "Things will get better soon. You just need to let it go."
"I know...." Sparkle sighed. "But you guys were right all along. And I wish I believed you. He was a lie. All of this was a lie before it was even said."
The End!
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This is officially over.
Now quick question And some of you might have already answered through the poll, but still
**How did you like the story?
Was is good?
Was story wise ok?
Was there still questions about it?
Was it confusing?
Anything at all?
I want to know if this story was good. This is the first mini comic (besides Jolt's story) I have finished. And I just need to know.
Please and thank you.
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Comments: 10
The story is good so far
I feel that it goes faster, but we know what is going to happen so thats okay.
Good work ! :3
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Poor, poor, sparkle. But she did say one day she will be ready
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This was pretty good. Straightforward, not really confusing. The story was heart wrenching, especially when you already know how its gonna end
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To be honest, when I wrote Part 8 , it even got me to tears. I didnt expect it to make me cry
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heh sometimes that happens, you get so emotional about your work
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yeah, just to show it was alot better than my first one
That didnt really get to me
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well you only get better with time, right?
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yeah the first time I wrote this was like my Junior/Senior year, and I was like 16-18 at the time. Now I'm 21, geez where did that time go XD
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haha no kidding. high school doesnt feel like that long ago, yet im 25 now xD
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