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Plague-Doc-Matteo — Bionicle MOC: Crixus V.2

Published: 2014-04-28 05:35:30 +0000 UTC; Views: 4753; Favourites: 83; Downloads: 0
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Description About the MOC
Crixus is a rather old MOC of mine, he predates my joining Deviantart. His previous version was based off another MOC of mine I had done before him, Ootei . . I decided to rebuild Crixus on a whim. When I did so I didn't realize how difficult a build it would be. I worked on this MOC for about two weeks. His Midsection gave me many problems as did the torso in general.


As you can see his new form is completely new. Even his head which was just the Kanohi Olmak now has more embellishment to it. One thing I was pleasantly surprised to see was how the light hit the plume on his head and made it look like its glowing or on fire. That was a total fluke.
The general concept behind Crixus' new form is that it is modeled after a typical Inika build , which all the glatorian sets used. The "pistons" in his shoulders attempt to recreate the same ones molded into the Inika torso piece and the general feel of the MOC was aimed at being a larger functional version of the aforementioned build mixed with actual gladiator influences.
One thing I'd like to call attention to is his feet. I'm quite proud of the fact that I made feet wearing sandals, just like ancient Roman gladiators, though I wish I had had room for a 4th toe. We have 4 fingers+ a thumb and 5 toes, so it only felt right that he would have 3 fingers+ a thumb and 4 toes, but things didn't work out that way. Oh well.
I initially planned on completely reworking the character, changing the name as well as the entire build, but Crixus still works I suppose, and keeping the name makes this a true revamp. But the character has been completely revisited conceptually which influenced me building the MOC.

While working on him I noticed Crixus' shield is on the same side as his lost eye, which is his right side, which is the same side as my weaker eye. I didn't do this intentionally, but perhaps subconsciously, as my right eye is noticeably weaker than my left(20/70 vision in the left, 20/80 in the right). I found that rather amusing. I apparently make my MOCs more like me than I realize. I wonder what that says about me.

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Bio
Crixus is a Glatorian in the world of Spherus Magna after Mata Nui had reformed the world and united all its people. He is a world renowned Glatorian, winning many battles and earning himself the title "The Dragon Of Atero" as well as some of the finest grade weapons and armor. Crixus lost his eye early on in his career as a Glatorian in an arena Match. After recovering he continued to fight in matches as it was all he knew how to do and all he ever wished to do. The loss of his eye drastically effected his fighting style, and lead to him adopting the sword and shield fighting style.
Glatorian after the reforming of Spherus Magna and the migration of Toa   from the Matorian Universe bear more resemblance and duities to those of the Toa, and vice versa. Both races serve as protectors and warrors, though some Glatorian chose to live the lives of glatorian before the reformation and act as warriors who fight on behalf of villages in order to settle disputes. Many toa also chose this lifestyle rather than that of a sworn Toa. Crxius in one such Glatorian. He travels all over Spherus Magna fighting in arena battles against other Glatorian and Toa on behalf of the villages willing to pay his prices. Though he is not a complete opportunist, he will fight for a village when he believes the cause is worthy. It was this noble trait that lead him to the fight of his life and career.

Defenders Of Virtue
Crixus is the only Glatorian to be included in The Defenders of Virtue . His reputation was known all over Sperhus Magna as a great warrior with exceptional skills in hand to hand combat. While not the noblest or virtuous character, he had a clear sense of right and wrong, this made him sought after by Archimedes for the team of heros he had been trying to assemble long before the reformation of Spherus Magna that was sparked by Maktua Teridax 's reign over the Matoran Universe. Though his search was reignited with the uprising of a new enemy faction, The insurgence of Darkness . It is joked amongst the other member's of the Defenders that its Crixus who's the rational level headed one while Archimedes is the hothead, which is quite atypical of either types. Even though in Toa culture, the Fire tribe member is seen as the leader, Crixus harbors no desire to take over as the leader. His unique skills that he brings to the team is that of his singular combat skills. He is undoubtedly the most skilled fighter amongst the team and often trains the other members in weapons combat to help them improve their skills and be more well rounded fighters. When it comes to him doing the same, he tends to be a tad bit stubborn, often using the excuse "he can get by with his sword and shield." As a Defender of Virtue he is called upon when needed, but he serves more the teams "eyes and ears" through tending to his other duties as a traveling Glatorian along with Melanthios who also does a lot of traveling outside working with the defenders. The other members tend to stay relatively close to each other in the same part of New Atero

Weapons and equipment
The sword Crixus carries is one made especially for him to his specifications, it like many of the Toa's weapons can channel his energy through it as well as strengthens and sharpens the blade. However, the shield he carries is one he won in a match. It is referred to as a "blast shield." The green crystals on it store energy, when the center spike is compressed with enough force it sends out a quick flattened blast of energy which isn't very affective as an offensive attack, but as a defensive strike to throw the opponent off balance or leave them vulnerable to an offensive strike. The downside to such an attack is that the crystals typically break either by the opponent's attack, in the use of the shield or by being overloaded by the blast as that is essentially how the attack works. This makes the crystals good for or two, maybe three blasts before breaking. The technique of using a blast shield is quite effective against novice combatants, but against more experienced ones have to be used more strategically in battle. This is why Crixus carries extra crystals on sling that carries his weapons, though he doesn't wear it in an actual arena match. He also keeps a knife near his chest for quick defense when traveling to protect from any raiders brave or stupid enough to try and steal from him. The other items on his belt are a few keys, though only he know's what they they're to. He won't tell anyone who asks.

Fighting Style
As mentioned above, Crixus uses the sword and shield style within the arena, but is versed in many different styles of weapons. He is sufficient in non weapon hand-to-hand-combat but is far more affluent in weapons combat. Hew views guns and projectile weapons as lacking skill or tact, which leads to him and Gravix often clashing as Gravix is the total polar opposite of this belief. The Most Crixus will venture into projectile weaponry is throwing Javelins and any other hand held melee weapons designed to be thrown.
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Comments: 38

Sir-Iggs [2014-04-30 21:53:11 +0000 UTC]

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As promised, a critique on Crixus, at long last xD

I've seen this moc evolve from a pretty decent wip to this beast of a gladiator in a pretty short time and it was a cool thing to see grow and evolve, while being able to feedback on it.

The things I really like about this moc are the crazy cool chest and abdomen armor and the fact it tries to emulate an Inika build. As you've shown me, but are hard to actually see are those little details that dissapear in the golden armor such as the system keys you referred to.

Things of lesser greatnes perhaps are the long arms, which honestly are too long, the theme, which is quite overdone despite being done so well, and the flatness of the moc. Due to it being a reference to the inika bodies of old, the moc lacks a little in bulk particulary in his back and arms, both of which are pretty logical considering your limitations in terms of parts and the actual size of this thing.

I think you did well! It's certainly not my but it moc of yours, but it is alot better than for instance, Dala, who I unfortuneatly still don't like too much. Keep up the good work!

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snowy2137 [2014-04-30 15:50:26 +0000 UTC]

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Fairly good, but I wouldn't call it your best. The color scheme is good, fairly consistent with the red and gold which is great, but not neccesarily unique. The arms are a bit too lanky and thin. The crest on the olmac is awesome! The legs are too short and fat. The weapons are nearly perfect, I can't help but think he would be better off with a longer sword, but that shield is amazing! Finally, I like that torso, while a bit strange, it's pretty good. I don't mean to sound negative. It's a good moc I'm just being critical, lol. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=" (Smile)"/>

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Plague-Doc-Matteo In reply to snowy2137 [2014-04-30 22:57:40 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for the Critique Snowy. I know you're just being critical, that's the whole point of a critique.

I get what people are saying about the arms being too long, but that's because its really supposed to be a large inika figure. flic.kr/p/npHs2o as for thin, yeah I can agree with that to some extent. I was hard pressed for reds on this build I used what I had on hand. And I know it made the MOC suffer, but hey that's what revamps are for. Considering what he used to look like I'd say its a huge improvement.
As for the sword...the Gladius is actually a pretty short weapon. At first I wanted him to have a bigger sword, but he's a gladiator, they use Gladiuses when using a sword and its a small sword. So there ya go. I'm glad you like the shield to. I'm quite proud of that one.

The complaints are duly noted. Thanks for the feedback Snowy.

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snowy2137 In reply to Plague-Doc-Matteo [2014-05-02 16:29:39 +0000 UTC]

I'm sorry I didn't realize you were going for a gladius, in which case you did quite well.

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Plague-Doc-Matteo In reply to snowy2137 [2014-05-02 22:43:40 +0000 UTC]

Well I wasn't exactly, but its about the right size. So yeah. Its maybe a little bigger than a gladius? My point is, they actually had relatively small swords, and varying degree of shields. So I took that into account and was fine with his weaponry being on the smaller side. It fits given the theme.

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snowy2137 In reply to Plague-Doc-Matteo [2014-05-12 22:35:24 +0000 UTC]

Yes sorry, I see now, I find the gladius fitting now.

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Gale-OneOfMany [2014-05-14 04:39:47 +0000 UTC]

Whhhhooooooooooooooooooooo, Dave. This one is a doosie. I need to get around to properly commenting on a crapton of your stuff so I can clear it out of my inbox here XD I'll start with this one I guess. I know what you were going for here, and I think you nailed it perfectly. Perhaps a bit too perfectly. Inika proportions are only so attractive for a MOC, and I think having those just makes this guy seem....... awkward. I know you were trying to get those proportions, and I think you really nailed them perfectly here. But it just feels weird to me. Still though, can't deny those beautiful techniques, and DAT TORSO. Beautious work here, even with the awkward ape-like feel.

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Vampire-Na-Zan [2014-05-03 17:53:33 +0000 UTC]

WAh,so shiny~!O WO
   Like the little touches with the...dragon..wing....things....whatever t hey are used for his helmet and shin guards~! Ori is not a Lego piece expert, but they look nice~!xD

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Plague-Doc-Matteo In reply to Vampire-Na-Zan [2014-05-03 23:19:47 +0000 UTC]

He is indeed shiny.

Yeah those are dragon wings.They're an older part from when dragons were smaller in lego, or when something needed something that looked like dragon wings. I think they've been used on Minifigs to. Thanks Ori I'm glad you like them. On Crixus here, the one on his head is a plume, like some gladiators or roman soldier's helmets have. The other two are just decoration. Being a winning glatorian dude, I would think he'd be well decorated.

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Wretched--Stare [2014-04-29 22:08:50 +0000 UTC]

I think the sword and shield are fine on him, It just looks like he is using a short sword and buckler!

Nice job again my friend love the head!!   Wish I had dat sword for my collection. but bigger 

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Plague-Doc-Matteo In reply to Wretched--Stare [2014-05-03 23:27:14 +0000 UTC]

Thanks Greg. See you get it. The Gladius wasn't a large sword, and they had all kinds of different shields. I kinda would like the shield to be bigger, but that's the biggest dish piece Lego makes. I was able to make it a little bigger with some embellishment, but it doesn't add too much in terms of size, but damn does it look cool.

Thanks. HAHA I wish I had that sword but larger. Its a badass sword. Bonkles have some badass weapons yo. I look at them and thing "These fuckers would be violent as fuck if they actually used these things."

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Wretched--Stare In reply to Plague-Doc-Matteo [2014-05-04 02:48:27 +0000 UTC]

The buckler was a small usually round shield that sometimes had spikes on it , it was lighter and a fighter with a short sword or dagger could hit and block very fast as opposed to  one with heaver gear.  

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Plague-Doc-Matteo In reply to Wretched--Stare [2014-05-04 12:59:44 +0000 UTC]

Oh that's cool. I didn't know that. Link please?

Well I didn't know about it or what it was called, just that shields come in all different shapes and sizes, but hey, we'll go with that. he has a Buckler.

Thanks Greg! I should consult you about weapons more often I guess.

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Wretched--Stare In reply to Plague-Doc-Matteo [2014-05-04 20:15:07 +0000 UTC]

These dudes are at a lower level than I would have liked to show you but they are learning and there is some good footage at the end.   I was using medieval and Asian weapons since I was 11. lol   www.youtube.com/watch?v=BGt5s4…  


Here are some for sale this page has everything from big kite shield and the giant wall or Scutum shield to the buckler.       www.medievalcollectibles.com/c…


I haven't been able to find a photo of the buckler with the big spike in the middle but I will keep looking, I think they got banded  a few years ago because the were to dangerous, I had one and it had spikes all around the edges as well, wish I had it but it got stolen too.  

The Roman Gladius Sword cam in both short and long sizes but the shorter was used more often and the longer for horse and chariot warfare,  most gladiators and foot soldiers had the short version. and in my opinion was a perfect design and a very well balanced blade  , the katana may have been strong sword and good at chopping limbs off but my favorite wil always be the Gladius.

Some  theorist say that legendary Excalibur was a carbon Steel forged Gladius and that's why it overpowered the weaker and heaver iron swords the Saxon and Celtic swords of its day!  At the time Japan was already using carbon steel but had little or no know contact between the Roman empire   
Here are some Gladius swords for ideas and sizes  www.medievalcollectibles.com/c…

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Plague-Doc-Matteo In reply to Wretched--Stare [2014-05-05 10:58:45 +0000 UTC]

That's pretty neat. It does seem very effective even though it's small. I can see how a lot of people could underestimate a fighter with a shield like that. I think Crixus' shield is somewhere inbetween though. Sort of a large buckler/ small round shield. Being a big guy I think I would prefer a larger shield. There's a lot more of me to protect than a buckler would offer I'd say.

I dig that Trojan War shield. Its got those cutouts so you can stick your sword through. That's what they're there for right, like in a phalanx right? 

That sucks Greg. It got stolen from those Movers right? From what it looks there was one on the site called the Italian Buckler that had spikes on it.

I agree, you don't get much more well rounded than the Gladius. It was also a simple sword to. Nothing too fancy about it. You ever watch that show, Warrior Vs. Warrior? Would be cool to see a fighter using just a Gladius against one with a Katana. I think the Katana might win out though because its typically longer, just as light, and can strike very fast, especially from being unsheathed. I think the only thing that would save a gladiator or infantrymen's ass would be their shield,which the Japanese never really used.

Man I'm definitely going to have to Browse Medieval Collectable's Website more. There's so much cool shit there. I definitely prefer the wider shaped Gladius as opposed to the skinnier longer counterpart.  I'm kind of partial to this one www.medievalcollectibles.com/p… this one to www.medievalcollectibles.com/p… If I bought a sword like these, I want them to be able to cut a bitch for when the apocalypse goes down and I need to cut a bitch to protect myself. *Sees on news that shits going down> Grabs swords, gun, loads click racks gun, unsheathe's sword* "Lets do this." I kid, but really I would want a functional sword that's sharp and that I could actually use if needed. The beautiful thing about swords like that, you can still display them. My dad has a couple Katanas and some Shurikens in a display case out in his part. One sword is sharp and so are the Shurikens. The other is dull though...I think. My dad would tell you they're all sharp and that he's got more of them stashed away next to his arsenal of guns, but my dad's full of shit and lies to people to make himself seem more imposing than he really is. Unfortunately I don't have any pieces myself. Though I'd like a few at some point. I think a Gladius like these and a good Katana would be some good first pieces though.

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Wretched--Stare In reply to Plague-Doc-Matteo [2014-05-06 22:11:04 +0000 UTC]

They range in size some are very small and some buckles are almost like Captain Americas shield.



You could but it was to put spears through to for a blockade wall of spikes against soldiers on horseback.

Yep, I lost a lot of good stuff, I was angry now it makes me sad when I think of the stuff I never got back.

Warrior against warrior would be a tough call, the Katana was a strong steel sword and very good and both slicing and piercing but it was heavy and the size gave it reach but up close it was less effective that the shorter and wider  Gladius.
then we would have to talk armor Romans had leather for the light infantry  and heavy plate armor for the rest and the gladiators had really heavy armor but it didn't cover the who body but like you said they had shields too.

Samurai's armor was made mostly of wood and banded with rope, leather and some brass. The Gladius would have torn through it like nothing, the Roman armor would have deflected a slash but been vulnerable to piercing damage , thats where the shield would come in.  the rest is up to skill and in the gladiators case they were big strong crazy brutes for there day.

All me stuff is sharp, you should always have a wooden practice sword or a dull one when learning or you could chop off a leg or pee-pee LOL

I will always like the Gladius because it is well balanced in the hand and I like some short swords and dagger too.

For sure this one is nice for a starter www.amazon.com/Roman-Gladiator…

I love this one www.amazon.com/Maximus-Roman-G…


         
  

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Jedder77 [2014-04-29 19:10:45 +0000 UTC]

Cool titan! His proportions seem a little of, somehow. But, at least, he's built to be more full in body and not too skeleton-like.

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Plague-Doc-Matteo In reply to Jedder77 [2014-04-29 21:36:25 +0000 UTC]

Thanks Jedder.

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welcometothedarksyde [2014-04-29 14:26:26 +0000 UTC]

I was a bit confused by the long arms and such on him at first. But then I was looking through the Flickr gallery and remembered that you were trying pattern him off of an Inika build. So I guess you got the long arms correct I also really like the custom torso you did, and the fact that you used that large armor piece, which I find difficult to use. My main complaints would be that the back looks unarmored, I understand you were trying to mimick an Inika build, but I think it detracts from his appearance. It would've been cool for that detail just to be an Easter egg. And surprisingly I agree with Fatman below. The shield looks kinda small (Although I've seen Roman shields and they're small). Maybe it's his long arms making the shield look too small. From what I can see of his eyepatch it looks awesome! That and the mohawk really spice up the Olmak. I had trouble seeing what was actually going on with the mask though as you didn't include any close-ups in the Flickr gallery. However it looks like it's made from a visorak eye

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Plague-Doc-Matteo In reply to welcometothedarksyde [2014-04-29 21:36:04 +0000 UTC]

They are rather weird looking, but that's part of the Inika build, ridiculously long arms. And I can affirm that it is the fact his arms are so long as to why the shield looks weird. If I shortened them up I think it would all look fine and people would stop squirming about the proportions on this MOC. You put out an intentionally off proportioned MOC and people flip out about it a little bit. Iggy(RattrapsTail ), said the same thing about the back, but I was adamant on that staying "unarmored." I tried filling it in better but I also needed to leave space for things to move, like his shoulders. The don't work in typical ball and socket fashion, they rotate like his old shoulders did and the pistons rotate forward and backwards as well as move up and down to give him more shoulder articulation. If I had a bunch of armor back there that all would have been obstructed and then it might have well been pointless to have it there at all.
I at first wanted him to have a big sword and shield but he's a Glatorian, I.e gladiator. The Gladius is a small sword and like you said Roman shields can be small, or large, square, rectangular or round. as evident here .  So it looks weird on his long ass arms, but it is fitting. People are having a difficult time with this MOC because the proportions are so obviously out of whack and that seems to bother people. Everyone wants to try and correct it. "this is too long that's too short" nope its about right. Like I told Tom, the only thing that's actually off is the shins should maybe be about two or three studs longer. Other than that it's pretty much correct to an inika build.

On flickr Images in the new layout, you want the ellipsis symbol, that's a "more" menu, from there download/all sizes. You don't actually have to download the photo. That makes a menu pop up, click View all sizes and you get to this . You used to be able to get to that simply by right clicking on the photo, but now its a complicated mess of menu navigation. Fucking flickr. So you can see the image closer up and can see that his eyepatch is one of these held on by a red rubber band. Its not that I didn't have closeups. you've just gotta know how to get to the larger format of the photo, which like I said they moved around since fuckr updated and totally fucked over its layout.

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fatman380 [2014-04-28 22:42:39 +0000 UTC]

the sword and shield could be bigger.

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Plague-Doc-Matteo In reply to fatman380 [2014-04-29 02:58:50 +0000 UTC]

Swords and shields come in different sizes you know. They don't always have to be super big. Gladius which Gladiators used were small swords anyways. Besides Not really any way I could have made them bigger and they still look that good. That's the largest dish piece Lego makes.

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fatman380 In reply to Plague-Doc-Matteo [2014-04-30 19:35:46 +0000 UTC]

Hey am just saying, the shield and sword just looks a little dinkie in this guys hands and am not saying that the shield has to be the size of a manga or the sword the size of a spoon. am just saying they could be a tad bit bigger. well at least the sword as you say lego don't make dish's any bigger.  

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Plague-Doc-Matteo In reply to fatman380 [2014-04-30 22:04:28 +0000 UTC]

I know they could be, I Just luckily gave them to a gladiator, and they actually had kinda small weapons sometimes. I did try making one of the bet rectangular shields like a Provocator , but I ran out of axle joints to make a pattern for it. So I scrapped the idea and went for a round shield style.

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Shorjok [2014-04-28 18:15:23 +0000 UTC]

Being ill right now, I can't think too well so a long-winded critique wouldn't be easy for me. But if only one thing could be changed, from looking at the 1st and 4th middle-top pictures, it would absolutely have to be the size of those legs. The feet are fine, the torso is fine (if not both great) but those legs are far too short. It's a bit of a shame to see a MOC with awesome potential ruined by one aspect, especially when everything else looks so good.

x

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Plague-Doc-Matteo In reply to Shorjok [2014-04-29 03:58:21 +0000 UTC]

Sorry to hear you're ill right now buddy.

I was a bit worried they were too short. But I think its sort of the difference between a metru shin being the leg or one of the one stud longer ones, like the Inika shins which I used on Steve(I call him Steve Rodgers) and is what Crixu's shins were based on as well. So the shortness is off by about two or three studs. I'll revisit the, and see if a slight adjustment won't be too much trouble. If they are then I'll just leave it as is. 2-3 studs isn't that much.

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Shorjok In reply to Plague-Doc-Matteo [2014-04-29 19:14:00 +0000 UTC]

No worries man.

Why do you have to use 'default' parts for the legs though? Just make custom ones, that would be the only way to really make them long enough.
Are you saying that adding 2-3 studs of length would really be long enough? Because... just noooooooooooooo, dude. Just take a quick look at this:

i.imgur.com/mbnnx6T.png

All I did was stretch that part of the image, but it already looks 10 times better.
One other thing I noticed whilst doing this is that he would benefit greatly from even a little more gold on the shins and arms. Would love to see a Crixus V.2.5 or V.3.

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Plague-Doc-Matteo In reply to Shorjok [2014-05-02 03:05:19 +0000 UTC]

Aw come on, you know I'm going to worry mate. What's been ailing you?

I didn't though. Its just the visible part is the Hordika leg. Its on a lift arm that connects it to the Metru hip that makes the knee Joint. And the Piraka foot is connected to the hordika shin so if you move that down it moves the hordika foot and would create a gap in the armor. Its not so simple Tom.
And as it being my MOC and knowing the proportions of the Inika build I'm modeling it off of yes. Don't fucking tell me what's what with my MOC. You know I don't tolerate that shit.

And you're doing what everyone else is. You're trying to correct for the disproportions. His arms are unnaturally long, like that of the inika, and everyone's been saying they're too long or the legs too short, but that's not really the case. Like I said if anythings too short, its the shins, but only by about 2 or three studs. If I had put a Metru or Vahki shin on there it'd be about right. The size ratio is loosely a 2-1. For every one stud its about two or three on Crixus. Like I said, loosly. The size difference between the metru and vahki and any of the other variants is one stud. So that translates to about 2-3 at the most in his shins.

Completely agreed there. I was tapped out by the end of this Build though. All the gold I've got left are Zaktan's blades, six ninjago swords which I thought about making a tasset for him but it looked dumb, a HF 2.0 shield and one of the paws, then a couple of armor parts which didn't really fit any particular place. The things I'd like to fix most are the color discrepancies here, weed out the back for dark grey, red or dark red where possible. I definitely think a V2.5 or 3 is in order.

I did this MOC on a whim. I had no plan what so ever. It turned out to be a much more difficult MOC than I anticipated, and because I weeded out the Keetongu Yellow, I limited myself on some parts I could have used to fill in some spaces, and was working with a limited supply of the colors that are on him. It ultimately affected the MOC, not in a really big way, but in a small way that I'd like to correct when I can. So I appreciate the feedback Tom. Thanks for it.

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FrancisJeremyXavyer [2014-04-28 12:35:34 +0000 UTC]

Awesome armor, awesome shield, awesome sword, awesome model all around!

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Plague-Doc-Matteo In reply to FrancisJeremyXavyer [2014-04-29 02:59:05 +0000 UTC]

Thanks Jeremy.

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FrancisJeremyXavyer In reply to Plague-Doc-Matteo [2014-04-30 14:34:58 +0000 UTC]

np

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randomemaster360 [2014-04-28 06:18:17 +0000 UTC]

Now this is a total win. I absolutely love the overall look of him and the color scheme works very well do he kinda reminds me of Kyller's Toa Brutal but on steroids.
The shield and sword look just awesome, especially there designs and did I mentioned how tall he is, man he is a true titan, kinda like one of my current MOC, but obviously this guy overpasses him in term of complexity, not even I have so many red and gold parts ! Also love that you gave him fingers at him feet, don't see that very often at all.
Overall, this is an awesome and well built MOC !

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Plague-Doc-Matteo In reply to randomemaster360 [2014-04-29 21:44:06 +0000 UTC]

Thanks Random. WHy the fuck is Kylernuva so fucking popular? His MOCs suck ass. I don't get it.

Thanks. The sword isn't quite my design. Doubling up on the blades is something lego did with Laval, but the hilt is what adds the flair. I borrowed that idea from this guy . The shield though is all me. And I changed the sword around a bit to, added the jewels because that looked more fancy and fitting for Crixus. I used up my last bit of red sockets and a good deal of other red parts to. I only have a small handful left. Reds a useful color. Besides black(which can't be avoided) it probably has the most representation of any actual color in my gallery of MOCs.

Fingers on his feet? My friend those are call toes. Thanks man I appreciate it. He's gotten a lot of mixed feedback, but I understand why. His weird proportions are going to rub those who are anal about proportions being correct the wrong way. Its seriously one issue MOCers out there can't let go.

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randomemaster360 In reply to Plague-Doc-Matteo [2014-04-30 05:23:41 +0000 UTC]

No problem. Probably because he's one of the first and has an awesome story like Scottt ? I dunno.

Well it's good that those came out how you wanted and yeah I agree red is a pretty useful color, alongside black which goes with almost everything.

Yeah sometimes I tend to forget a specific word and have to use something similar ( it's a problem of mine ). But no problem and I see what you mean, it's pretty hard to give correct proportions to a large MOC without making it look a bit weird.

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Plague-Doc-Matteo In reply to randomemaster360 [2014-05-02 02:07:50 +0000 UTC]

If you say so. I think his stuff is subpar, but that's just me. :/

It is. I'm gonna have to take a group picture of all my Red MOCs.

Oh I see. I'm sorry then. I didn't mean to make fun of any kind of speech impediment you might have. I'm terribly sorry about that. That's not really true. The proportions is just about knowing how big to make a given area relative to the rest. Its just that this MOC is so intentionally out of whack but in a not in a way that its super apparent and throughout that people are saying the arms are too small, legs to short and so on because I think there's this urge to want to correct it. It visually goes against the grain.

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randomemaster360 In reply to Plague-Doc-Matteo [2014-05-02 03:44:14 +0000 UTC]

Alright ( I personally like his work do )

Ok because I'm looking to see that one.

Nah don't worry, it's nothing severe. And I can see what you mean but I think this MOC is great and I don't really care for things like that as long as the MOC looks awesome, which is the case here.

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MoonGoneDark [2014-04-28 06:03:31 +0000 UTC]

Oh man this is amazing! Nice job!

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Plague-Doc-Matteo In reply to MoonGoneDark [2014-04-29 02:59:13 +0000 UTC]

Thank you.

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