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Description "The End of Pwincess Woona."


Tia did nothing to aid her sister, her duty as Princess held her back.


Woona had worked so hard to get her Cutie Mark just so that she could be at her sister's side, but none of it mattered, the Pegasi trained Woona ruthlessly until she was up to their disciplined standard of Princess. 

Woona was never seen or heard from again, and regal Princess Luna would emerge in her place almost a decade later.


The monarchy's plan was to divide the Royal sisters between the two most powerful tribes, Celestia to the Unicorn tribe, and Luna to the Pegasi tribe. Then when the two became of age they would be in leadership positions enabling them to unite the tribes once and for all, bringing harmony to the land of Equestria.


However the cultural differences between Unicorns and Warrior Pegasi were grievously overlooked.


Celestia was "groomed" by the Unicorns to become their leader.

Luna would be "forged in fire" by the Pegasi, Luna would not know fun nor happiness, nor would it be the last time Luna would be sent far away from her sister.



In the end all pony kind would be united in true harmony for a thousand years... 


...all at the cost of one scared and helpless little filly who just wanted to be with her sister.


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Original sketch by .

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Comments: 260

shadowfan216 In reply to ??? [2014-04-24 01:53:52 +0000 UTC]

Poor luna

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Pyruvate In reply to shadowfan216 [2014-04-25 08:34:15 +0000 UTC]

D:

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Yourmove17 In reply to ??? [2014-04-24 01:50:41 +0000 UTC]

List of Villains to Send to Pegasai for Abusing Luna:
-Bane
-Joker
-Dracula
-Jason Voorhes
-Freddy Krueger
-M. Night Shamalyn 
-One Direction
- Every Twilight film 'actor'
-Justin Bieber

I decided to end the list there, since I think it is the best I can do. Feel free to offer more!

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Pyruvate In reply to Yourmove17 [2014-04-25 08:34:23 +0000 UTC]

Yes. Yes indeed.

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NellzDaBlackKing In reply to Yourmove17 [2014-04-24 19:30:17 +0000 UTC]

The creators of Dragonball Evolution

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theassassin03 In reply to Yourmove17 [2014-04-24 07:39:32 +0000 UTC]

miley cyrus twerking 

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SHADOWtheHEJHOG In reply to ??? [2014-04-24 01:29:41 +0000 UTC]

No... No... NO! I don't care what that description says, YOU DO NOT END A COMIC THERE!

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Pyruvate In reply to SHADOWtheHEJHOG [2014-04-25 08:34:28 +0000 UTC]

D:

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newjoy8520 In reply to ??? [2014-04-24 00:04:44 +0000 UTC]

you serious??? the end? WHAT DA HECK this so short mean bullying comic is THE END!? like its not YOU that make comics what happened only mlp fim does. btw i hate mlp fim.




DON'T WATCH THE CARTOON CALLED MY LITTLE PONY FRIENDSHIP IS MAGIC



what? it sucks

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theassassin03 In reply to newjoy8520 [2014-04-24 07:40:43 +0000 UTC]

then what in the hell  are doing here?

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Pyruvate In reply to newjoy8520 [2014-04-24 01:21:16 +0000 UTC]

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o0Airheart0o In reply to newjoy8520 [2014-04-24 00:49:17 +0000 UTC]

If you hate it, then shut up and go on another deviation.

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CartoonMetalWarrior In reply to o0Airheart0o [2014-04-25 04:30:53 +0000 UTC]

Well, you know. Some people are such pathetic losers, they have to go around calling others the same. Unfortunately, some Bronies make for easy targets. If you ignore these idiots, and deny them the satisfaction of a heated response they'll eventually give up. I defend the Brony community when I can, but only with people with an ounce of decorum. I'm too old to get into a bitchfest with lesser human beings.

BTW, we shouldn't attack the artist. Whoever commissioned the artist is the one to be mad at. Me, I only invested a short amount of time in this comic so I can't really be mad. Though I too am dissapointed at the end.

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o0Airheart0o In reply to CartoonMetalWarrior [2014-04-25 04:57:18 +0000 UTC]

I just don't get why people look at art for fandoms they hate just so they can hate on it. It's very, very, irritating. I try to hold it in most of the time, but sometimes, it just...yeah.

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CartoonMetalWarrior In reply to o0Airheart0o [2014-04-25 21:58:07 +0000 UTC]

It's funny how many Brony haters know nothing about the fandom and have no personal experience with us. I'm part of a metal forum and had to defend us against people who believe we are perverts who wear pony costumes. The instigator admitted that he only found out about us from Reddit (who as we all know have a vendetta against us). I had to remind them that they know me and know I would never associate with a group who is only interested in pony porn. I assured them that most of us are better than that and that I would never push my Bronyness on the forum (as I've never pushed my furryness on them in the past). After stating that, they let the matter drop. Those are the kind of anti-Bronies I don't mind talking to. The trolls like the guy we're describing are not in that category.

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o0Airheart0o In reply to CartoonMetalWarrior [2014-04-25 22:46:18 +0000 UTC]

Honestly? I don't really care what other people think. I don't care if they like pokemon, naruto, or whatever. I'm not going to force them to like/dislike it, and they shouldn't force anyone else either. There are certain places where you can share opinions on certain things. That one blog Terrible Ponies is for sharing your opinion on Ocs that could be better. Youtube is a place where you can share what you think about people's videos. Deviantart is supposed to be a place where you share your opinion on art; not sharing whether you hate a fandom or not. Even then, you shouldn't just criticize something when you know next to nothing about it. For example, in real life, my friend in I had a little deal sort of thing: I didn't like the looks of that show "Digimon" (and I still don't), and he disliked MLP. Neither of us actually had seen the other show.  So, we both agreed to watch one episode of the show and see if we liked it. Though I still hated Digimon, he now had better feelings towards My Little Pony. And we were happy-ish.

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tahudude In reply to ??? [2014-04-23 23:22:41 +0000 UTC]

This adventure is not very fun, not at all...

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Pyruvate In reply to tahudude [2014-04-23 23:38:41 +0000 UTC]

It's fun for someone.

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tahudude In reply to Pyruvate [2014-04-23 23:51:33 +0000 UTC]

*mean face* No it's not.

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ponpon2323 In reply to ??? [2014-04-23 23:06:18 +0000 UTC]

um ... they can't do that to a princess ... ... she's a PRINCESS ... it's the princess who give orders ... not the garde ...

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MoppyPuppy In reply to ponpon2323 [2014-04-24 00:58:01 +0000 UTC]

The Pegasi establish that in their eyes she hasn't earned her crown yet.
Look on the bright side, at least Luna won't become like King Joffery from Game of Thrones.

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ponpon2323 In reply to MoppyPuppy [2014-04-27 05:11:59 +0000 UTC]

good point    

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Pyruvate In reply to ponpon2323 [2014-04-23 23:38:47 +0000 UTC]

D:

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Outflanks10 In reply to ??? [2014-04-23 22:47:39 +0000 UTC]

The art was amazing and keeps the same standard of brilliant quality I have come to expect from you.
Although, this comic doesn't really make much sense. Its like I am only seeing 1/2 of wants going on.

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Pyruvate In reply to Outflanks10 [2014-04-23 22:51:25 +0000 UTC]

Thanks.

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zaiali In reply to ??? [2014-04-23 22:37:49 +0000 UTC]

Wait what?? Why would they take her by force? 

. . .uuh.  I understand that it's your comic . . .but that doesn't play out right in my head. 

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MoppyPuppy In reply to zaiali [2014-04-24 05:29:06 +0000 UTC]

No filly would willingly leave her only family, especially to where Woona is going.

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zaiali In reply to MoppyPuppy [2014-04-24 22:10:50 +0000 UTC]

. . . Bed, Bath, and Beyond? 

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Pyruvate In reply to zaiali [2014-04-23 22:42:41 +0000 UTC]

T'was a commission, but indeed.

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Jesper6 In reply to ??? [2014-04-23 22:24:49 +0000 UTC]

These adventures aren't fun at all! I want Woona back...👍: 0 ⏩: 1

Pyruvate In reply to Jesper6 [2014-04-23 22:26:44 +0000 UTC]

D:

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Jesper6 In reply to Pyruvate [2014-04-23 22:28:29 +0000 UTC]

Give her back that sweet red bow you mean artist pony!
*sobs*

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Pennsylvania-Jones In reply to ??? [2014-04-23 22:00:31 +0000 UTC]

SUBMIT!!!

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Pyruvate In reply to Pennsylvania-Jones [2014-04-23 22:23:56 +0000 UTC]

Yes.

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NCbrony In reply to ??? [2014-04-23 21:48:51 +0000 UTC]

well in the comics she seems to be getting back to that cheery old filly

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Pyruvate In reply to NCbrony [2014-04-23 22:24:01 +0000 UTC]

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Fox0427 In reply to ??? [2014-04-23 21:42:35 +0000 UTC]

In the first few panels, One guard is a unicorn, the other appears to be an earth pony. However, in the second to last panel, the one who was a unicorn is now an earth pony and the other has different eye color and is a pegasi. Is this an error, or are they just different guards all of a sudden?

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MoppyPuppy In reply to Fox0427 [2014-04-24 01:03:25 +0000 UTC]

Pegasi team consisted of two Pegasi for transport and one Unicorn to facilitate containment. 3 guards in all.

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Pyruvate In reply to Fox0427 [2014-04-23 22:24:09 +0000 UTC]

MAGIC.

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Karach0s In reply to ??? [2014-04-23 21:16:36 +0000 UTC]

Want to raise a perfect princess? Indoctrinate her in a dungeon.

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Pyruvate In reply to Karach0s [2014-04-23 22:24:18 +0000 UTC]

Indeed.

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timgil In reply to ??? [2014-04-23 21:14:41 +0000 UTC]

They throw their princess into a dungeon?

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Pyruvate In reply to timgil [2014-04-23 22:24:24 +0000 UTC]

For sure.

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MoppyPuppy In reply to timgil [2014-04-23 21:27:22 +0000 UTC]

By Pegsasi standards Woona is not a leader of warriors.

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Nevel7 In reply to ??? [2014-04-23 21:13:49 +0000 UTC]

So where's part 5? The part where Starswirl appears, turns the guards into frogs and then puts them into a highschool biology class where they are dissected while still alive? *cracks neck* Ahhh, I feel better now. *bounces off like Pinkie Pie humming a happy tune* 

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Pyruvate In reply to Nevel7 [2014-04-23 22:24:33 +0000 UTC]

Yay.

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NicolasDominique In reply to ??? [2014-04-23 21:13:19 +0000 UTC]

I just hate you for that...

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Pyruvate In reply to NicolasDominique [2014-04-23 22:24:42 +0000 UTC]

u wot m8

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NicolasDominique In reply to Pyruvate [2014-04-24 06:07:01 +0000 UTC]

Hate.

You trolled me with that story.

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MoppyPuppy In reply to NicolasDominique [2014-04-25 06:22:50 +0000 UTC]

Just like Woona you should have paid more attention to what Tia was telling you.

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