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Rackiera — Breakthrough - Ch 2 Prologue - Pg 7
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Not his back, but maybe a few ribs. Or multiple. That tail's muscular, after all
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Ah I see know! I got a little confused at the gaurds position and I thought Rakiter some how broke the guard's back, but now I see its a big tail slam
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Ohhh alright! Sorry for the confusion, but at least it's clear now. ^^
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I'm a bit confused with the last frame. I see the guard bent down, but why is there a cracking sound? Longwings have no tail spikes or any natural tail weapons, and as far as I recall, they have no weaponry on the tail ends.
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The "crack" comes from just the sound of the tail smacking so heavily against Rakiter's body. It was the best sound I could come up with, beyond "SMACK" which... didn't really come across as a sound to me. xD
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To me, crack means something breaking (bones mostly), while smack is indeed... smack xD
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I imagine the hard whip of the tail would've broken a few bones considering how fast Rakiter was traveling vs how fast the tail was traveling, but the actual "crack" noise I got from the sound of a whip cracking. I'm probably just going to edit the sound effect on the page so it is a bit less confusing, though. xD (Probably to what bython24 said - whack) I'm confusing people here
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I would have gone for "WHACK".
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Thanks for the suggestion, will probably edit the page to say that. This is what I get for rushing my sound effects I suppose.
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Force of impact most likely, "Annnnd there goes your ribs.".
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