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Rackiera — Breakthrough - Chapter 1 - Pg. 24

Published: 2014-05-27 20:18:51 +0000 UTC; Views: 2474; Favourites: 14; Downloads: 5
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RusCSI [2014-05-28 05:54:38 +0000 UTC]

Oh, is the guard going after her? It's a bit difficult to tell, but judging by the spread wings, he probably is.
I like the perspectives here.

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Rackiera In reply to RusCSI [2014-05-28 18:44:38 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, he is. ^^ It was hard to get a gist of what was happening in this page, hence the motion lines in some areas

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RusCSI In reply to Rackiera [2014-05-28 18:49:13 +0000 UTC]

Maybe there could be a small panel where the guard's paw is shown to make a preparation move before jumping after her, I dunno.
It's fine anyway as I was told what's going on

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Rackiera In reply to RusCSI [2014-05-30 00:10:51 +0000 UTC]

Maybe, eh, oh well, I really don't want to go back and change things ; I learn as I go

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daleksuprem [2014-05-27 20:48:51 +0000 UTC]

ooooo just mist wa wa waaaa 

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Rackiera In reply to daleksuprem [2014-05-28 18:46:41 +0000 UTC]

He was so close too!

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daleksuprem In reply to Rackiera [2014-05-29 00:25:23 +0000 UTC]

ow well you win some you loose some 

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Rackiera In reply to daleksuprem [2014-05-30 00:10:54 +0000 UTC]

yep

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daleksuprem In reply to Rackiera [2014-05-30 00:14:02 +0000 UTC]

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