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ravenf6 — Scythe vs Noa, part 2- color

Published: 2012-10-11 03:00:49 +0000 UTC; Views: 1268; Favourites: 8; Downloads: 9
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Raven: Okay, boys, I know you both know the rules, but just a quick refresher: We're going to treat this spar as a 4-round match. While the first round will be conducted under specific conditions the other rounds will be a straightfoward bout. Make sure to protect yourselves at all times. I don't want to see any headbutts or low blows. Is that clear?

Scythe: Yeah.

Noa: Yes.

Raven: *turns to Noa* I know you're used to fighting with different styles, Noa, but remember- the use of elbows, knees, and kicks are forbidden in boxing.

Noa: Right.

Raven: Good. *climbs out of the ring and walks towards the bell. * Here's how we'll do the first round. Noa, you're going to focus on offense. Scythe, you're on defense. Any questions?

Scythe: Nope.

Noa: None I can think of.

Raven: Then let's begin..

DING!!!

*round one starts with Noa and Scythe meeting each in the center, both with guards raised

Noa: *Thinking* Okay, no kicks or anything like that. Gotta focus on punching... here goes.. *Noa starts with a right jab towards Scythe's face, but the latter weaves out of range.

Scythe: ......

*Noa continues with a few jabs and striaghts, but Scythe blocks them without any trouble.

Scythe: *Thinking* Pretty good form, so far. But it doesn't look like he's trying....

Noa: *thinking* He's not bad, dodging and blocking so far... but let's see how he handles this-

*Noa fires off a left hook to the face, but Scythe ducks under the blow

Noa: *grins as he follows up with a right uppercut!*

WOOOSH!!!

*Noa's uppercut cuts through the air, but Scythe managed to weave out of range.*

Scythe: *thinking* That was a close one. Most other fighters would be taken by surprise. For someone one who studied in other martial arts, Noa knows what he's doing... looks like he's just warming up, right now.....


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While I used light blue in previous pages, I found a light cerulean blue that was a better fit for Noa's hair. I wanted to try a panel that told things at a glance, hence the 1st person view of Noa's incoming uppercut (seen from Scythe's point-of-view, so to speak).

This page took a bit more time since I wasn't used to scenes of that type of intensity. It was bit of work, but it came out like I wanted it to. I'm looking forward to seeing how the rest of this fight plays out.


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Comments: 13

Drax254 [2012-10-13 20:04:42 +0000 UTC]

Stay swift Raven.

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ravenf6 In reply to Drax254 [2012-10-13 20:09:28 +0000 UTC]

I'm not the one who's fighting- Scythe is. I'm just observing the match to make sure nothing goes wrong in this spar.

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Drax254 In reply to ravenf6 [2012-10-13 20:10:05 +0000 UTC]

Ohhh well, it`s looking good.

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Jose-Ramiro [2012-10-12 22:32:30 +0000 UTC]

Cool so far.

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ravenf6 In reply to Jose-Ramiro [2012-10-12 23:48:01 +0000 UTC]

Thank you.

I've arleady an idea of how to do part 3, but I don't know when I can get started, as of this moment..

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Jose-Ramiro In reply to ravenf6 [2012-10-13 01:29:04 +0000 UTC]

OK

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SuperAbachiBro [2012-10-11 11:22:55 +0000 UTC]

I'm liking the improved detail here. Line work's a bit more cleaner than before. Great job!

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ravenf6 In reply to SuperAbachiBro [2012-10-11 16:42:28 +0000 UTC]

Some things weren't easy to see in the liknes stage as with the finished results. Setting up Scythe's dodge was a pain in the 2nd panel, and Noa's uppercut gave me a little trouble, but it was worth it.

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xearsol [2012-10-11 05:19:55 +0000 UTC]

wow. this is awesome man. your anatomy skill is getting better.

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ravenf6 In reply to xearsol [2012-10-11 16:43:05 +0000 UTC]

Thank you. I haven't really done much since last time, but I should study the back, a little. I don't know if I'll set up more shots like that, but it wouldn't hurt for me to do it.

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MasterSaruwatari [2012-10-11 03:45:41 +0000 UTC]

nice defense.

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ravenf6 In reply to MasterSaruwatari [2012-10-11 03:48:23 +0000 UTC]

It' have to be a nice defense, or else that uppercut would hurt...

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MasterSaruwatari In reply to ravenf6 [2012-10-11 04:19:30 +0000 UTC]

yeah that's true.

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