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Description
My first attempt at designing the major characters for a graphic novel idea I’m working on with Michael and Cory being the main two.

(I apologize for the horribly lazy hands and shoes; those are unfinished. Please do not critique the fancy border thing )

Specific questions I have:
Cory has mild rosacea. Do his cheeks suggest a skin condition rather than blushing or whatever?
Pockets is supposed to look androgynous. Does she appear more like a boy or a girl, or does she pretty much look in the middle?
Does Reese’s face match the others? I struggled with the size of his eyes, since part of his heritage is Korean.
Holly is attractive, but not super gorgeous. Does her face need to be prettified at all?

General questions:
Do any of the characters look “out of place” in terms of proportions or how they were drawn?
Do any of the characters look too formulaic, as in having a design that’s overused?
Are any of the colors not working? What would you like to see instead of a certain color used?

-----notes-----
-- Cory has no outdoor clothing because he’s very tolerant of cold
-- Cory’s lame tattoos are placeholders until I figure out what they’re gonna be lol
-- Holly is Michael’s sister, her maiden name is in parenthesis
-- Haven't decided on ages, but they’re not all that far apart from each other (except Dustin)

Description
My first attempt at designing the major characters for a graphic novel idea I’m working on with Michael and Cory being the main two.

(I apologize for the horribly lazy hands and shoes; those are unfinished. Please do not critique the fancy border thing )

Specific questions I have:
Cory has mild rosacea. Do his cheeks suggest a skin condition rather than blushing or whatever?
Pockets is supposed to look androgynous. Does she appear more like a boy or a girl, or does she pretty much look in the middle?
Does Reese’s face match the others? I struggled with the size of his eyes, since part of his heritage is Korean.
Holly is attractive, but not super gorgeous. Does her face need to be prettified at all?

General questions:
Do any of the characters look “out of place” in terms of proportions or how they were drawn?
Do any of the characters look too formulaic, as in having a design that’s overused?
Are any of the colors not working? What would you like to see instead of a certain color used?

-----notes-----
-- Cory has no outdoor clothing because he’s very tolerant of cold
-- Cory’s lame tattoos are placeholders until I figure out what they’re gonna be lol
-- Holly is Michael’s sister, her maiden name is in parenthesis
-- Haven't decided on ages, but they’re not all that far apart from each other (except Dustin)