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Description A sequel to my previous short horror story!

I don't really care for how this one turned out (the story, I mean) since it feels like a rushed description of things better unraveled by some longer series. Maybe I'll attempt just that, some day.

--------------THE HOSPITAL (part II)----------------

I've lost track of the time since I first found myself in this latrophobic purgatory. All I wanted was a routine doctor's appointment, maybe a perscription for that tenacious cold I continue to be burdened with. I never figured out how I got here, either; I'd made the appointment, went about my day, and suddenly I was here, surrounded by stupid looking monsters in medical scrubs.

It's been months, maybe years since I first went looking for an exit. This "hospital" never ends, and never makes sense. Emergency rooms, operating rooms, radiology labs, admissions offices, stranger chambers I can't quite place...they just repeat, shift around and twist in on each other in endless defiance of physical law. Nothing looks like it should, either. Everything is the wrong material, the wrong proportions, weird and tasteless colors. Filthy, too, ranging from just very, very sticky to completely caked in dried blood and bile and worse. You can literally see the germs teeming over every surface, and I know the proper usage of "literally," thank you. I've given up trying to keep their cold and sticky little bodies from colonizing my skin. I've seen them the size of rats, protoplasmic globs slithering in dank corners, hairy cilia rippling.

Most of my time is spent dodging the staff, but every so often I get cornered and have to talk or fight my way out of another superfluous injection, another round of pills that will only blind me or turn my teeth into jelly, maybe another "emergency epidermal prolapse" or "reverse ocular enema." They're worse than they even sound.

The same small crew of "doctors" seem to be in charge of everything. They don't look human, to say the least. The boss calls himself Doctor Phage, which I finally recalled is a type of virus. He looks exactly like one, a sort of spider-legged jewel. The only thing I hate more than his stupid jokes are those obnoxious ties he's so fucking proud of. He's frequently accompanied by what I've come to refer to as the needlehead, and a slimy something in a wheelchair, obscured by boils. The cafeteria is run by, I shit you not, a giant hamburger, as moldy and maggot-ridden as the food he serves up, and you don't want to know what the janitor is made of. Every so often, I'll also spot Phage having coffee with some "esteemed colleague" of his, some big metal whatsit with chattering teeth. Scares the piss out of me, but for whatever reason, I seem to be completely invisible to that one. It's even walked right through me, like I'm nothing but a ghost.

I wish I could say the same for the nurses. I can dodge those slimy bitches for days, but I'm screwed when I finally lose my battle against sleep. They can smell me, or something, no matter where I hide, and I've seen them squeeze through a goddamn keyhole. They're almost nothing but nerves and veins, lidless eyes suspended in faces like tangled worms. Their icy touch numbs my whole body, then they drag me back to one of the operating rooms.

What will it be this time? Will I lose, or gain an arm? If they do another breast implant, is it actually going to be in my chest, for once? For a while, my brain was in some sort of plastic pouch I had to carry around, wires running back into my hollowed-out scalp. Sometimes the worst is waking up with a new row of stitches and never finding out what they did to me at all...at least until I'm sweating bleach or something tries to crawl back out the way it came.

They always say the same thing in our confrontations, that I "just need time to heal." That I can go home when I'm "cured." Obviously that's not going to happen when they keep butchering me, and don't even know how to treat a fucking cold. You can imagine how my suicide attempts have turned out...I wake up right back on the chopping block, patched together some new shitty way that shouldn't logically work.

The only thing I have to be grateful for is that I'm not the only patient. Don't get me wrong, I'm the only thing anybody could describe as a person in this freak show, but there's at least a hundred other "regulars" who come and go, always with the same problems. There's a brain, big as a buick, always bleeding from some sort of throbbing clot. A giant stomach haunts the cafeteria at every opportunity, trying and failing to keep anything down. When I can't shake the feeling that I'm being watched, you can bet it's one of the eyeballs, always dripping an all too familiar pinkish gunk.

A crooked spine, a fractured skull, a heart literally ripped in half. I think you get the pattern.

Talk to any of these things and you'll only get enthusiastic but useless puns.

"How do I get out of here?"

"Nobody NOSE!"

"Is this hell or something? Am I dead?"

"Don't LOOK at me, EYE just ROLLED on in!"

Infuriating, at first, but almost comforting after a while. At least they're generally unaggressive. Well, most of them are unaggressive, which brings me to "the special case," as Phage calls it.

"Special case" is the worst of them all. It scares me more than any of the doctors, more than the nerve-nurses, more than the mystery surgeries or any other ridiculous, mocking cartoon bullshit the medical maze might throw at me.

It's something I can only surmise has long ago succumbed to cancer, if it was ever truly anything other than the huge, formless mass of meat that it is now, immobilized by its own bulk but constantly groaning, always groaning. If anything organic so much as touches it, it gets absorbed and doesn't come back. The thing just gets that much bigger and adds another lifeless, withered appendge or blind, twitching eye to its growing collection.

One by one, patients are being picked off, and I could easily be next if I so much as brush one of the thing's root-like tendrils. I wonder if I would at least find the relief of death, or if I would just go on living...imprisoned for eternity in a diseased cyst. I don't dare find out, but it's becoming harder to avoid, its tissues reaching into more and more rooms. Groaning. Shuddering. Feeding. If it never stops, there might be nothing else left.

None of that is even what scares me, though.

Now and then, you see, I've heard them call it by name. A familiar name.

A very, very familiar name.
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Comments: 49

capraxissquared [2022-06-20 03:54:23 +0000 UTC]

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CalypsoDeCousteau [2022-04-22 22:57:03 +0000 UTC]

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SuperArtMaxim [2018-08-17 21:11:10 +0000 UTC]

www.bogleech.com/awfulhospital…

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peasant-patrol [2017-04-11 17:52:51 +0000 UTC]

embarking to the sinister biome was a bΜΆaΜΆdΜΆ FUN! idear.

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SomeRandomMinion [2016-01-07 14:44:12 +0000 UTC]

KILL IT KILL IT KILL IT KILL IT

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ssddmass [2015-10-20 21:36:06 +0000 UTC]

Why isn't this in the library section of the comic site?

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SuperArtMaxim In reply to ssddmass [2018-08-17 21:12:07 +0000 UTC]

It seems to contradict the story's canon at a few points. For instance, there's how they describe the nurse(s).

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Horus2299 [2015-01-02 20:35:34 +0000 UTC]

"Special Case" is going to be in your comic at some point, isn't it?

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SabiMado [2014-09-09 03:43:11 +0000 UTC]

"Maybe I'll attempt just that, some day."

Hhhehehhe

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AlgaeNymph [2014-09-05 19:12:54 +0000 UTC]

I see a doctor in blue and red and I immediately think of Eirin from Touhou.Β  I think she'd fit in well in a creepypasta.

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Omny87 [2014-04-28 13:18:48 +0000 UTC]

Hey, how come you didn't post this story to your new creepypasta page?

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EvolutionsVoid [2014-03-27 16:33:26 +0000 UTC]

I love your creepypastas, just how they can borderline silly and creepy at the same time. Where youΒ have body parts dropping punsΒ next to some freakyΒ cancer creature absorbing patients. It is such an enjoyable blend.Β Also love the references to your other stories in here.

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heartless-2 [2013-10-20 17:19:52 +0000 UTC]

I can only guess....but....his own name?? How does- What- Why- Ish confusing is it a part of him or is it Him?

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scythemantis In reply to heartless-2 [2013-10-21 23:13:02 +0000 UTC]

Yep, it's him!


It may be that time doesn't flow normally there.

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heartless-2 In reply to scythemantis [2013-10-21 23:23:28 +0000 UTC]

hmmmm....PERPLEXING! although enjoyable <3

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ProphetStorm [2013-08-09 19:33:22 +0000 UTC]

Nice! I love the design.

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Keyboard-Ninja [2013-05-27 03:09:26 +0000 UTC]

A well written, vivid and imaginative piece. There was only one small sentence that I thought sounded a bit off, but otherwise a smooth, enjoyable read.

Needless to say, I hope you write more of this. And maybe submit it as a lit submission?

Still need to properly read the first chapter, and the one about the meat-man--not really sure how that one fits into the sequentiality of these stories, but I guess I'll be seeing soon enough.

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scythemantis In reply to Keyboard-Ninja [2013-05-27 11:32:58 +0000 UTC]

they share a universe, but don't necessarily fit sequentially : )

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Orionide5 [2013-04-12 02:12:16 +0000 UTC]

Assuming this is meant to be a trilogy, I actually found this a very satisfying interlude between the narrative portions.

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scythemantis In reply to Orionide5 [2013-04-12 03:53:53 +0000 UTC]

yeah, I have some ideas for a third one, but it's not complete yet...it'd probably be a fairly short one, though.

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Arachnid95 [2013-04-11 23:46:23 +0000 UTC]

...aaaaaand?! The familiar name? Oh come on! Don't do that! AGH! I hate cliffhangers...

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scythemantis In reply to Arachnid95 [2013-04-12 02:08:19 +0000 UTC]

I thought "very, very familiar name" plus being so afraid of it would tip off well enough that it's his own name, which could mean a lot of things, but in that place, probably that it's his future self

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Arachnid95 In reply to scythemantis [2013-04-12 02:12:29 +0000 UTC]

...I feel dumb now.

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scythemantis In reply to Arachnid95 [2013-04-12 04:09:44 +0000 UTC]

nah almost nobody caught it

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Arachnid95 In reply to scythemantis [2013-04-12 04:15:04 +0000 UTC]

Ah well, we're all dumb, I suppose!

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snow-melon [2013-04-11 21:43:15 +0000 UTC]

I really like how this crossed over with the your other stories. It's gotta be my favorite of yours so far.

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TheLazyWriter [2013-04-11 19:01:46 +0000 UTC]

You know, I kind of like to imagine that Weird Al's "Like a Surgeon" plays in a constant loop over the speakers, both for black comedy value and for that whole "soundtrack dissonance" thingy.

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Omny87 [2013-04-11 15:11:36 +0000 UTC]

Why does Dr. Phage wear bow ties that look like they came from the 1970's?

'Cuz he's a RETRO VIRUS!

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scythemantis In reply to Omny87 [2013-04-12 02:08:44 +0000 UTC]

: O

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Omny87 In reply to scythemantis [2013-04-19 00:56:43 +0000 UTC]

I'll be here all week folks! *gets yanked off stage by a comically large hook*

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Trollfeetwalker In reply to Omny87 [2014-06-11 01:06:47 +0000 UTC]

*slide whistle*

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Oddsword In reply to Omny87 [2013-04-11 18:32:46 +0000 UTC]

My fucking sides.

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dodoman1 In reply to Omny87 [2013-04-11 16:06:06 +0000 UTC]

uuuuugh.

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Pirka [2013-04-11 14:04:38 +0000 UTC]

I thought it was a puke janitor. Cuz, you know, janitors clean up puke?

Dr. Phage is still my favourite thing.

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scythemantis In reply to Pirka [2013-04-12 02:09:58 +0000 UTC]

That'd make the most sense, dried up puke and sawdust

Since he describes grosser though, you never know!

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Luckydog34 In reply to scythemantis [2013-04-12 03:58:53 +0000 UTC]

but I thought something was more horrifying the more non sensical and absurd it was :c

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scythemantis In reply to Luckydog34 [2013-04-13 04:37:28 +0000 UTC]

Well, the narrator of this IS a germophobic neat freak and also thinks insects are revolting, so to him, "you don't want to know" could be a lot of things we wouldn't even find near as bad as the other monsters, or bad at all, like a pile of dead bugs.

On the other hand it could be made of severed penises or mutilated kittens or abortion scraps.

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Luckydog34 In reply to Pirka [2013-04-11 21:15:55 +0000 UTC]

I'd imagine someone would describe vomit before they'd describe feces.
And janitors clean up toilets to you know, and it's simply more grotesque, in the easy I see it.

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Luckydog34 [2013-04-11 13:36:56 +0000 UTC]

Turd janitor! yay!

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PERVERTALITY [2013-04-11 12:42:20 +0000 UTC]

interesting

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Sylizar [2013-04-11 11:37:17 +0000 UTC]

Great stuff, as usual. I gotta get back to writing stuff. Maybe after I'm done uploading all my new stuff.

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Crysomandiaz [2013-04-11 10:47:00 +0000 UTC]

Your stories are well-written, entertaining and so refreshing. You should get them published. And name?? What name??

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scythemantis In reply to Crysomandiaz [2013-04-11 11:18:34 +0000 UTC]

his own name!

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Crysomandiaz In reply to scythemantis [2013-04-11 14:05:25 +0000 UTC]

I kinda had guessed that, but I was hoping for something even more shocking! Like... Bush!

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Shuman100 [2013-04-11 10:20:11 +0000 UTC]

hello looks like the whole cast got in today

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Rasec-Wizzlbang [2013-04-11 09:22:43 +0000 UTC]

Ok, actual comment, I love the imagery here. Really hoping you do more with these characters.
... Were Brains and Guts mentioned in there?

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scythemantis In reply to Rasec-Wizzlbang [2013-04-11 09:28:20 +0000 UTC]

Nah a different brain and stomach

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Demialc-neeb-sah-em [2013-04-11 09:18:21 +0000 UTC]

An animated circulatory system?

Now THAT is an idea. Well played mantis.

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Rasec-Wizzlbang [2013-04-11 09:17:57 +0000 UTC]

HE-LOOOO NURSE

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