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Published: 2013-03-18 05:47:36 +0000 UTC; Views: 16471; Favourites: 98; Downloads: 105
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It's a time-jump, everybody! To about six hours later into the morning. I managed to work a spit-take and Spike into the same page, along with the Great wall of Text.I have no idea what they are eating, it started out as cornflakes, but it seems to have become some type of eggs, seeing as when I drew milk splattered all over Dash, it looked like something that was a good deal more provocative than milk. Like someone should start removing it with their mouth... I'll jump off a bridge now.
Sexual jokes aside, I made a page! So that's a thing. Also, this is the one year anniversary of this comic! That's a more impressive thing!
Enjoy things splattered on Dash, I'm going to enjoy sleep.
*Reuploaded*... Fixed typos. I need to proofread more, it seems.
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MLP by Hasbro and Lauren Faust
Story by Scherzo
Based off of the Alternate Ending by DarkJester
Adaptation and drawings by Yours Truly
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Pls hold me when i am trying to continue T-T
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You can say that again, book. Feather flu is awful. I had it once, and it sucked. It's a good thing I was living on the ground at the time.
I don't know if bringing Dash on the first visit is a good idea. Everypony's going to need some time to get used to not blaming her before they're ready to actually see her.
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And now, I shall resume commenting.
I get that Twilight's a bookworm but there's a time and place for everything. Reading up on medical books while eating is NEVER a good idea.
Also, on the 14th panel, RD's hair looks like something out of an 80's hair metal band.
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Pretty good. You draw pony upper arms too long though. They usually barely stick out of the torso from shoulder to elbow, and the visible arm starts at the elbow instead of the shoulder. The only exception is when they're wrapped around big things, but otherwise it's pretty much lower arm, wrist, hoofhand. Also this is a wicked crazy story you're tackling. I approve!
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Sorry it took so long to get back to you on this, even though replying isn't required... I still enjoy it.
I took some time to learn quadruped anatomy since this page, and while the characters are still, you know, cartoons, I now have a much better understanding of how the joints work.
Interestingly when drawing poses, I look at Feline structure, not Equine. These little ponies posses a much more comprehensive mode of movement than your standard run-of-the-mill horse, and Feline structure covers that range of motion.
I'm glad you like the story. After all, it is my own invention, what with all the modifications I've made.
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ERR MAH GERD! BERSQUERK!
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This comic is so cool and can you tell us when the next page will come out?
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Not with any certainty. All I can say is that it will come out, just not when. Sorry.
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I'm willing to bet that you'll have your Pinkie react differently from the one from the fic, right?
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Beautiful to see this continued.
The question is what part of RD's mind did these nightmares come from?
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Thank you, and you'll see later on.
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One does not simply go check on your friend when they have been attacked by you.
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ARAGORN U SO WISE
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Because I was bron this way. Like how i don't simply die from being shot three times.
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aw man you could but heads with gandalf
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do it and show the world just how badass you are
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Panel 5, you need to fix "wan't" into "wasn't", and panel 14, you need to fix "I" into "isn't".
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I like the comedy you added to this page, as a sort of small break from the serious tone.
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its time to confront the problem even if an apology is not enough you
have to demostrate that you regret all that you have done so go and
demostrate that you wont make a nightmare ruin your freindship.
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I like to see that you mix your own story with the original - RD talk to Pinkie and excuse her, and also telling about her new problem, with those nightmares. Nice.
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Happy anniversary.
Wonder how this will turn out...and is someone watching through the window?
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No, it's just a camera angle.
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I hope that doesn't meet applejack in hospital because it she could become a patient
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According to the original story, no one visit Pinkie, when RD and Twilight was there.
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Well, here comes the first step towards getting this whole thing sorted out. Here's hoping it goes at least slightly well.
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Dash's arm is a little awkward in the 9th panel, buuuuuuuuuuuuut this is still one of my favorite comics that I am following! Keep it up!
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Yeah, I totally agree with that. Sometimes you make their arms a little too big! Haha! But the comic is still great
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I realize that I do. SPAGHETTI ARMS!
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