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EDIT: Reuploaded to fix those pesky typos.So, my new pre-readers did not reply in time, and this was sitting around for two days, so I decided to upload anyway. Next time, guys!
SO. Page 64. This whole idea kind of came out of when I was waiting for one of my friends to get done talking to someone, and since I had forgotten my phone, I began to stab the dirt with a stick. And then I drew a rough sketch of male genitalia, since I am, after all, an immature human male.
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fotland42 [2014-12-27 19:37:20 +0000 UTC]
Spike, I don't know if you should be talking about sitting on cockroaches right in front of Fluttershy. Insects are only mostlyΒ devoid of rights.
I cannot help but take that mysterious potion dirtily. I wonder what Twilight would think if I told her how I was interpreting her non-answer?
I just noticed that you're drawing Twi's cutie mark not entirely correctly. I can't deny that it's a complex mark, and it's probably a pain to draw it in all its detail, but I am kind of attached to the symbolism of its precise numbers. For one thing, there are 42 points, which is pretty meaningful. And besides that, there are six white stars, representing six friends, and overlaid on the central star is a purple star, representing magic, and each one of those stars has six points, representing the six Elements of Harmony. If you leave anything out the whole meaning just falls apart.
But, yeah, the main point: using the Elements. I don't think that's going to work without a state of harmony existing between Dash and AJ and Rarity. And at this point, Semnadstatica is probably too strong to let Dashie use her Element properly at all.
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NeoSpearBlade [2014-11-19 00:36:02 +0000 UTC]
"Although I wish I knew about the "No Fire in The Lobby" policy a bit earlier."
Twilight, it's a hospital. They ALL have a "No Fire" policy because the stuff they use to save lives can quickly become extremely dangerous when exposed to fire, not to mention the ponies in there that NEED clean air in order to stay alive and common sense telling us that a fire inside a building, regardless of its contents, is a bad thing. Shouldn't you know this already?
Sorry about that tangent but it irks me a bit when a character says that they didn't know about a policy when said policy is basic common sense.
Also, yeah it does feel like they use the Elements of Harmony too often to solve any big problem that they come across (Spike counted 6 events, including the potion, whatever that is). Hell, even fanfics aren't immune to this. Case in point,Β this one.
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seventozen In reply to NeoSpearBlade [2014-11-19 02:18:23 +0000 UTC]
The Cupcake Chronicles! That's my favorite fanfic series, actually!Β
And I seem to use fire as a source of humor too often. Everyone's going off the rails about the sign in the Canterlot tram from Parchment that says "don't set fire to the trolley". I need to make an explanation comic it seems.
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seventozen In reply to mirtar34 [2014-06-12 05:25:51 +0000 UTC]
Aren't you?
What could it possibly be?
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mirtar34 In reply to seventozen [2014-06-12 14:19:32 +0000 UTC]
Yes, what could it possibly be? Can ya tell me?
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seventozen In reply to mirtar34 [2014-06-16 06:12:48 +0000 UTC]
You know, I don't know what it was supposed to be anymore...
But I do remember it wasn't exactly something for discussion in polite company...Β
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mirtar34 In reply to seventozen [2014-06-16 18:07:14 +0000 UTC]
You need to put such things in notes, might make good use later on. Β in the meantime, if it does come back to your head, can you message me of what it is?
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seventozen In reply to mirtar34 [2014-06-19 00:56:30 +0000 UTC]
I remember, now. Sort of.Β
I imagined it to be some kind of "infatuation potion". It was a left over, unused idea for the comic's storyline. I scrapped it because I decided on something better.
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seventozen In reply to SolluxBeeDerpy [2013-08-25 15:53:56 +0000 UTC]
They are the two guys I chose out of a long list of applicants to be the people that proofread the dialogue and art before the pace is released. You can see who they are on my homepage. Sorry if you missed the casting call.
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alexwarlorn [2013-07-03 07:48:16 +0000 UTC]
The thing is that these nightmares seem more focused on making RD suffer than turning her evil.
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Imspartan9002 [2013-07-03 04:25:05 +0000 UTC]
Link for the normal ending? (When Pinkie is actually killed)
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seventozen In reply to Imspartan9002 [2013-07-03 05:04:24 +0000 UTC]
Fanfic Original or Comic?
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EagleSpartan888 [2013-07-02 11:53:20 +0000 UTC]
Looks like the next page is going to be good!!! Nice job!
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RandomJellyBean [2013-07-02 03:33:50 +0000 UTC]
WTF I THOUGHT THIS SERIES WAS DONE T.T
NEEEEEEEEEXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTT
please
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seventozen In reply to RandomJellyBean [2013-07-03 00:20:14 +0000 UTC]
By "done" do you mean just at the last page, or stopped in the middle.
Also I can't tell If you are ecstatic with joy or simply stuck with Royal Canterlock for the time being,
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RandomJellyBean In reply to seventozen [2013-07-03 03:36:02 +0000 UTC]
yeah please tell me your continuing?
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seventozen In reply to RandomJellyBean [2013-07-03 05:04:51 +0000 UTC]
Hell yeah! Why would I stop?
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RandomJellyBean In reply to seventozen [2013-07-04 21:22:07 +0000 UTC]
once some guy stopped making a comic I really liked at school IN THE MIDDLE OF IT !!!!
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RandomJellyBean In reply to RandomJellyBean [2013-07-02 03:36:03 +0000 UTC]
XD and twilights cutie mark ITS A STAR FISH XD
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SolluxBeeDerpy In reply to RandomJellyBean [2013-08-22 03:31:00 +0000 UTC]
Pokemaniac over here :3
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seventozen In reply to ChaoticFluttershy [2013-07-01 16:58:55 +0000 UTC]
In Linework. So another three days. A week at most if something doesn't come up first.
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squerpionstingjr [2013-06-27 03:57:20 +0000 UTC]
twilights cutie mark turned into a starfish!
just saying.
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seventozen In reply to squerpionstingjr [2013-06-27 21:11:09 +0000 UTC]
Let's say it's "artistic licencing", and leave it at that.
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sonicandmario826 [2013-06-25 21:41:53 +0000 UTC]
wit when did they use it on discord twice i guess if you meant freeing him then i guess that counts.
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cmara [2013-06-24 10:42:24 +0000 UTC]
It's a bit hard to read the writing in full view, it's fuzzy looking
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TheHoofedGhostwriter [2013-06-20 22:58:55 +0000 UTC]
Do go on. I'd complain about the damn cliffhanger, but it seems as though you like to do them every page : P
I've followed this since page 14!
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seventozen In reply to TheHoofedGhostwriter [2013-06-22 21:21:02 +0000 UTC]
Especially since I update every two weeks or so, It automatically makes every page a cliffhanger.
Also, you're a legacist! Page 14! That's!... a long time ago!
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touileasaso [2013-06-19 00:42:51 +0000 UTC]
Darn it! Cliffhanger! You're kinda mean making us wait a little longer for the next page.
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squerpionstingjr In reply to uncommentator [2013-06-19 18:18:27 +0000 UTC]
"and i also shot her with an AK47!"
(and yes, before you ask, i know the AK47 without joining the army because my brother owns a war game.)
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uncommentator In reply to squerpionstingjr [2013-06-20 06:05:45 +0000 UTC]
uuuuuuhhhuuuu...
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squerpionstingjr In reply to uncommentator [2013-06-27 03:53:57 +0000 UTC]
π random comments... FIRE!
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squerpionstingjr In reply to uncommentator [2013-07-02 01:30:56 +0000 UTC]
[link]
cockadoodledoo!
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uncommentator In reply to squerpionstingjr [2013-07-02 05:07:14 +0000 UTC]
lolz It sent me to a failed attempt at a mobile site
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LaughingOnLine [2013-06-18 05:45:00 +0000 UTC]
Getting better with every page; keep up the good work!
Also, what's the reference in the description?
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seventozen In reply to LaughingOnLine [2013-06-18 05:58:06 +0000 UTC]
A quote from my Grandpa. It means that over time, facts become distorted and changed. I like it because it describes memory pretty well.
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