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So recently I was re-reading Warriors Enter the Clans. I decided to make a scene from one of the short stories on the warrior code. This is when Longtail and Darkstripe had to go hunting, but prey was scarce. Darkstripe pretty much influenced Longtail to eat a squirrel they caught instead of bringing it back to Poppydawn who was sick and needed something to eat. When they returned to camp, Poppydawn had died, and Longtail seeing this started to feel guilty.This is what I like about Longtail, he's a good cat although its not seen much at the beginning of the series. He has a sense of right and wrong, and although he was mean to Firestar at the beginning, as he got to know him more he changed and developed into a nice character.
Darkstripe on the other hand is a dirt. There is just evil written all over him, and that moment shows just how much of deceptive cat he is. Although thats just my opinion.
So what do you guys think? How do you feel about Longtail, and Darkstripe? What do you think about the decisions they made, or how they treated other cats?
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Comments: 57
daughterofspyro [2018-10-11 23:01:29 +0000 UTC]
darkstripe you mousedung you did this poor longtailΒ
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leirela In reply to daughterofspyro [2019-06-08 19:53:44 +0000 UTC]
at first i didnt like longtail because his personality, when tigerclaw was exiled a part of me expected longtail to follow him but after he reported about tigerstar and the dogs and showed he was loyal i started to like it hurt me that he died the way he did i always thought he deserved a Warriors death
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daughterofspyro In reply to leirela [2019-06-09 19:45:33 +0000 UTC]
and yet he gets blinded by a rabbit and then killed by a tree not a suiting death i was very happy he did not follow
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leirela In reply to daughterofspyro [2019-06-11 20:48:28 +0000 UTC]
i only wish he had a more fitting end to be remembered as a great warrior not a blind elder
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Leoparddream [2017-02-25 13:25:49 +0000 UTC]
Man i love LongtailΒ . forget DORKstripe, nobody likes himΒ .
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RubytheKatt [2016-09-01 16:59:45 +0000 UTC]
Darkstripe bad
HE killed Poppydawn
Longtail is just a smol bby that was badly influenced by his evil friend
Also did anyone else think that Longtail was Jayfeather at first (because of the lighting)? Because that really confused me until I realized that it was Longtail
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leirela In reply to RubytheKatt [2019-06-12 08:09:17 +0000 UTC]
evil friend and fomer mentor
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Painted-Velvet-Roses [2016-04-19 22:07:20 +0000 UTC]
Longtail is a smol bean and is adorable in this scene ( I think that this short story made him up on my favorite cats list ) And I wish we had got to see more of this Longtail before he got blinded :/ It would have been nice. But I still think him as an elder is so nice (and gives more reason to ship LongtailXMousefur too)Β Β
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Soft--Cookie In reply to Painted-Velvet-Roses [2016-04-20 10:22:09 +0000 UTC]
ayyyyyyy ;3
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Arcticwolf39905 [2016-04-19 03:59:23 +0000 UTC]
i swear, Nifty-Senpai did an animation on this.
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Soft--Cookie In reply to Arcticwolf39905 [2016-04-19 13:08:46 +0000 UTC]
She did, I've seen it. Her animations are great :3
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Arcticwolf39905 In reply to Soft--Cookie [2016-04-19 15:15:30 +0000 UTC]
Oh.
I swear it was Darkstripe's fault for Poppydawn's death.
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97FAtaLItythegamer97 [2015-11-04 03:32:05 +0000 UTC]
YOU JUST MADE LIFE BETTER WITH THIS DRAWING!!
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Albclaw [2015-10-15 20:32:36 +0000 UTC]
Darkstripe's a coward. KILLING KITS IS NOT COOL, MAN.Β
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Leoparddream In reply to Albclaw [2017-02-25 13:27:20 +0000 UTC]
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Werechicken22 [2015-07-30 14:19:26 +0000 UTC]
Same. Longtail have a good heart, and Darkstripe only cares about him.
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Swanbreeze [2015-05-26 11:59:21 +0000 UTC]
Yesh, Longtail was a cute character. easily swayed, but then again- easily swayed back. XD
Darkstripe, though ... nnng ... >
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thefiretailedweasel [2015-05-17 21:55:51 +0000 UTC]
Im really not a fan of Darky, but i hear him, longtail and grey/graystripe are related!! My reaction when i found out:
Β Β "NUUUUUUUuuuuuuuuuu Erin Hunter Y u do dis?!"
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Soft--Cookie In reply to thefiretailedweasel [2015-05-18 20:43:11 +0000 UTC]
oh really? I never knew that. haha, Thats really interesting
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Songbird3 [2015-05-09 20:23:12 +0000 UTC]
Imho, Darkstripe was as bland as tofu. Longtail is cool though
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Rinweed4 [2015-03-22 23:18:20 +0000 UTC]
No matter how mutch I hate Darkstripe... He has a point this time...
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StormFurCPI [2015-03-21 23:57:18 +0000 UTC]
Isn't Longtail like a pale cream color with stripes..?
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Soft--Cookie In reply to StormFurCPI [2015-03-22 06:33:28 +0000 UTC]
some people like to draw him that way. but he is described as grey with dark stripes
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Dustyclaus123 [2015-02-27 15:55:06 +0000 UTC]
am I the only one who gets mixed up with Darkstripe and GREYstripe?s
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Soft--Cookie In reply to sonic10122 [2015-01-07 23:46:50 +0000 UTC]
Her is Poppydawn, one of the thunderclan elders at the time. She was sick with greencoughΒ
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sonic10122 In reply to Soft--Cookie [2015-01-08 19:38:34 +0000 UTC]
oh that must suckΒ
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Meew3 [2014-12-29 18:18:36 +0000 UTC]
That's something I really liked about Longtail. He was one of the most human characters, he had his flaws, and he tried his best to fix them and learn from his mistakes. He wasn't just completely evil like Brokenstar or a goody-two paws like any other Warrior.
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ThinkingAboutPuppies [2014-12-24 16:18:12 +0000 UTC]
Guess what's next on my Favorites list? That's right, this one! I love all of the emotions! You can clearly tell that Longtail is distressed, and I can almost hear Darkstripe snarling at him.
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Soft--Cookie In reply to ThinkingAboutPuppies [2014-12-24 19:04:44 +0000 UTC]
aww,thanks!!
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ThinkingAboutPuppies In reply to Soft--Cookie [2014-12-24 19:20:06 +0000 UTC]
You're welcome
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xBlueMoon [2014-12-24 15:19:20 +0000 UTC]
Idon'tknowwhy, but I like this a lot. xD <3Β
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Jayfeather8 In reply to Soft--Cookie [2014-12-23 21:17:12 +0000 UTC]
Your welcome! It's so good!!
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FrostedStarlight [2014-12-23 00:07:11 +0000 UTC]
Darkstripe tried to kill a kit. And really he's such a coward most of the time. I really didn't like him.
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Soft--Cookie In reply to FrostedStarlight [2014-12-23 11:39:24 +0000 UTC]
Yeah, he's really sneaky about what he does. When did he try to kill a kit?
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FrostedStarlight In reply to Soft--Cookie [2014-12-23 12:30:28 +0000 UTC]
He tried to give Sorrelkit(tail) deathberries because she followed him somewhere where he wasn't supposed to be, I forgot.Β
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CreativeCanidae [2014-12-22 23:48:23 +0000 UTC]
Darkstripe, you dirtfurred criminal cat. Poor Longtail, he's suffering from bad peer pressure
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