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Published: 2017-12-10 15:00:46 +0000 UTC; Views: 14135; Favourites: 121; Downloads: 342
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The girl in the shiny battle-suit released her suddenly. Gasping in a grateful lungful of air, Red immediately fell into a spasm of coughing. Her face turned beet red and she doubled over, her throat on fire and her eyes beginning to water. Only pride and embarrassment kept her on her feet; her ears were ringing and she'd come close to blacking out. She realised that Spew had entered the room, and that the two other girls were staring at one another.Just over an hour for this one, Daz 4.9 and iRay. I gotta work on a lot of stuff so not much time for renders; and lots of crappy renders done and rejected! This one's just I guess an extension of the Ellie experiments, seeing if I can get her head/body size about right.
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I just noticed Ellie's eyebrow scar. That's an amazing detail.
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Oh, I can't take the credit for that, the model of her comes with it. A few renders on from here I wanted to see if I could fix that, so she doesn't have it any more.
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Red's recovery is very well shown and communicated to the viewer. Great scene!
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She needs a seaside holiday!
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Nice outfits, probably just need a belt to make them practical
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Practical! Practical?! Yeah fair enough, a belt would be nice!
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Fantastic posing and material work, as always the realism is outstanding
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The render is great as always!
I just wonder what going on with Red!
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Thanks! She's just recovering from her choke hold, which came close to crushing her windpipe. She just needs a moment!
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I guess I have to go back to the previous scene then
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Thank you very much!
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Those shaders are gorgeous on Red's suit! That high gloss feel is a lot of fun! And the look on poor Red's face, tough it out, Red! You can get her back later. <3
I'd say Ellie's head is about right, it isn't jarring in any way! There's just something off about her body I think... I dunno, maybe it's just because of the tight shiny suit, but she seems emaciated. Maybe thicken her arms and hips just a smidge?
I -only- say that with the utmost constructiveness, SHD! Your renders are wonderful, just I know sometimes a neutral set of eyes can help. ^^
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Thank you Jolly! I wanted her to be thin and wiry, but I may just have gone a little too far!! The head/neck thing on Ellie was driving me nuts!
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I've run into that problem too. You want a specific look, and it tunnel visions you a bit. I've found sometimes that more is less, and a little weight on the hips can help give the impression of a healthy weight, even while leaving her wiry overall!
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