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ThirdEcho β Naruto OC Tutorial - Ninja Stats and Jutsus
Published: 2012-02-26 19:25:58 +0000 UTC; Views: 20650; Favourites: 286; Downloads: 431
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This is an over simplified god-mod killing guide for the actual stats. Nothing more. I'm not a mass researcher (outside of class, anyways), so any tiny nuances have been left for for simplicity's sake.**Note for my sanity**
I'm getting rather impatient with people leaving comments that say "I don't need this tutorial because I'm a Naru-tard" or "I'm able to make perfect OC, so this isn't for me, but I'm sure others will use it". That's great that you've got it figured out. Since this doesn't apply to you, I don't need a huge textwall of you defending yourself. Not to be rude, but I don't care. This is for the people that DO need it. Those of you who make the big textwalls of self-defense make me think you DO need it. :/ I'm not trying to be rude, but I do lash out when I'm impatient with people like that.
Also, I might leave things you deem important, sorry, but I'm making this simple... also... dudes, I don't watch a lot of anime, but I do draw it out of sheer joy. I'm doing this to help people.
I don't even like Naruto, just my OC. Hahaaaaa.........Mongrelssister's "mathmatical" break-down on stats: [link] (A bit too much math for me)
My downloadable stats wheel .PSD: [link]
Other Naruto Character Tutorials:
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I just googled Mochi it looks really good! Yea and I see what you mean about tsohe small details(I really like the mochi idea). So do you see any flaws in my kekkei I really don't want it to be that powerful, and something I left out on my statistic sheet is that the her clan comes from uzushiogakure.
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You didn't know what mochi was!? Oh you poor child.
Go learn to make it. It's phenomenal the sakura kind is really sweet and is the greatest smelling anything in the entire world, but my favorite mochi is just the plain white.
I didn't see anything on the kekkeigenkai...
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I will have to try it ^.^ as for the Kekkeigenkai you'll find it at the bottom called "Akumanome" ^.^
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Can I have the link again, please?
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I'd say it's probably as much, or more so, over-powered than the Sharingan. It gets over-powered at about stage 2. Stage 2 should be stage 4; not all kekkei-genkai have 4 stages, almost none of them do, in fact. It requires a significant amount of brainpower to implant fake memories that are created, it would not only take a significant amount of brain power, but someone with this kekkei genkai would mostlikely be prone to headaches. This is very much a psyco-based kekkei genkai, chances are, brain hemorrhaging would be common at stage 4 or any time they want to make flawless fake memories.
Memories area also half-impossible to make realistic; small details are crucial and it would take an overly practiced mind to make them convincing, so if you have an intelligent, you're going to need some serious flaws. Chances are this character does almost no hand-to-hand combat because they're probably completely awful at it, due to the amount of practice needed for this jutsu to be anywhere near effective.
So basically, excessive brain usage weakens the brain over time (it would be almost like a suicide jutsu after a while), and the mount of concentration and practice needed for the entirety of it would make the user pretty incompetent at other forms of fighting.
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Thanks the feed back really helps. now all I have to do is fix my tablet and i can start ^.^
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One Question...
What Is Mary Sue?
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.... really? You don't know? How long have you been on the internet? :$ A mary-sue is a character that's too powerful, too perfect or too well-like, otherwise known as a character that's "too perfect" in being. 99% of OCs are Sues.
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Owh...
I'm Long At The Internet But I'm Not Always open Like This...
I'm Long At Internet Because Playing Game Online..
Well, Thanks!
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I would kill to have you be my teacher. Srsly. I was cracking up half the time I was reading this, and it had amazing advice, good job!
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Many people enjoy the way I articulate. It's probably 'cause I don't care who I offend.
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I'm having a problem with my OC and wanted some advice...
There are some things I wanted to add to them, but these things are stuff that are considered bad, cliche, and overused. And I personally don't have a problem with cliches, I actually like some of them.
Should I just do whatever makes me happy(even if tons of people start hating me) or try to make others happy? Or is there some way to balance it out?
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Erm, well, if you're roleplaying or making an OC.... you really should make it so others don't hate you... No one likes sues.
What clichΓ©s are you using? Sometimes there are ways around it. Like if it's an Uchiha, just make a new clan with another cool trait, rather than the sharingan. You can't add much depth to a character that's a Sue. In fact, there is no depth, or interest. :/
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Hm..I've decided to keep my OC private for now. I've never been interested in roleplaying and I usually prefer lurking so I don't think I have to worry about how others will react anymore. I can't think of any reason to show it to others and I don't really like attention.
And I think I'll end up being unhappy and won't have any fun if I do something I don't like. I honestly would rather make myself happy than make a bunch of random strangers on the internet happy.
So..problem solved, just ignore this if you want.
And for creating new ideas, most of the time I can't think of anything that hasn't been done. My imagination sucks. Every once in a while when I come up with something different I either realize that it doesn't suit my OC, or end up disliking the idea or lose interest.
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Have you thought about doing a tutorial with jutsus? :3 Like, explaining what genjutsus/ninjutsus/etc. are about. Your tutorials are really awsome and helpful
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Thanks. I can't say I have. Jutsus are more diverse and often character limited. All I can think of besides what jutsus are Mary Sue to add is nigh.
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Sure, I understand 
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I saw an oc last time possessing all three great Dojutsus. WTF ?! What is that b***h son of the legendary Sage of Six paths ?! So sir, you have my deepest respects.
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I have a vajayjay, I'm not a "sir", but I do serve people like a sir.
Thanks all the same~!
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Oh my god! Where were these when I made a Mary-Sue?! I haven't made a Fan-character for this series in years because of that whore I made. Thank you! I have faith in humanity again.
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I restore a lot of faith in humanity.
I'm also kind of an ass, so it sometimes doesn't seem so obvious.
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Lol. I know that feeling~
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These Naruto OC tutorials have really helped and I hope to be able to improve my characters. ^^
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This looks really helpful... But unfortunately, I have problems with the typeset... I can barely read anything D:... But still, I think it's amazing that you're doing all this work. Helping people with such tutorials... They must love you!
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This is the first complaint, so I don't think it's that bad. Sorry it inconvenienced you. Practice makes perfect with weird fonts.
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After a while I indeed managed to read it, so don't worry!
And yeah, I hope to improve with every picture. Skill comes with practice
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a few questions: would it seem mary-sueish if a clan's objective was to create callous shinobi for the ANBU, hence making them ascend in ranks at a young age? And, they're part of the village of lightning?
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What do you mean by callous, exactly? Ascending ranks young is getting MS, but when putting them with ranking up quickly? It's non-debatable that it is. I mean, it's not saying it COULDN'T work, but it's more than just a challenge to pull off. I managed to do something similar with one of my OCs, however, she has a ton of flaws and dies. *shrugs*
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And when I said ascending ranks quick, like, a little quicker than usual. My OC becomes a genin at age 9, and a chunin at age 12.
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like as in ruthless (trying to expand my vocabulary) like how ANBU are raised, like sai for instance.
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Your idea can be made to work, but this ninja needs to have hugeeeeeee flaws. Sai isn't attractive, his personality is odd, he beats around the bush and never says exactly what he intends to do because he's always plotting, like Kabuto. Kabuto was young, attractive, over-intelligent, highly skilled... but he was creepy as fuck and pretty much sacrificed his soul to a creepy snake guy.
Ya also gotta make a character that's unique.
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I was actually planning to make her less feminine than other girls, and her personality is quiet, she is antisocial and I don't know if this is a flaw, but I was going to make her flat chested too. Would being misunderstood and sensitive be a flaw?
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Quiet and antisocial would work best, for what you've described, if she was like Kabuto in the sense that, secretly, she's disturbed and maybe a little deranged.
I dunno, you could give her regular boobs, especially if she has short hair.
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she does have short hair yes 
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It's kind of strange she would be; hair grows back.
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no haha
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Depends. Being bothered by a flat chest indicates some sort of vanity, not caring could refer she cares more about other things, like her purpose as a shinobi.
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The part under the kekkeigenkai section, where you mentioned balancing the stronger stats with a personality flaw or a bad background? Could you please give an example or two of each? Sorry, but whenever I think of a bad personality trait, I imagine being clumsy or naive, which everyone always uses, and can be used to hype up the Sue-ness. And as far as the backround goes, it's already difficult to create a good backgrund. To add something bad without being over-angsty-emo-kid-Sasuke-wannabe...what sort of thing were you thinking to add into the background??
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See, I'm not so good with just "shoving" facts in. I'm one of the few people that they come up with a good story before they come up with a character and work on the story from there.... so I really can't help you much there. All of us artists and writers each have our own way of doing things, so we can only inspire each other and make each other wiser and think more. We don't actually learn from each other in the same sense as school children do.
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Yeah, i guess. It's just hard. My character (who im still perfecting before i post anything) has a kekkei genkai that i haven't named, and it's in the eyes, but it's not super powerful or anything, it just lets her see in the dark. Would i have to put in much to balance that out??
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Still gotta balance them like crazy anyways. A clan with such a weak bloodtrait wouldn't probably have a lot of power anyways.
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Thanks for calling it weak. lol but really, though, thanks. i'm glad the bloodtrait doesn't seem to make her a super-Sue automatically. I'll definitely get to work on balancing. I'm thinking maybent be the strongest, but she can be pretty?
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It's Kin Tsushi of Otogakure said to Sakura "what beautiful hair you have. It seems you spend more time on your looks than your ninjutsu" and blames that for Sakura's predicament. I wouldn't make her "a babe", but just simply pretty works. If she's going to be gorgeous, she would have to have a HUGE major character flaw.
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That makes a lot of sense. Of course, i wasn't going to make her a model or something (even if i could imagine that, i wouldn't be able to draw her very well, whether I used a base or not kekeke).
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maybve you could make another copy with clearer-font, couldnt get threw the whole thing cause of that but the first part was usefull ^^
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No thanks. No one else has mentioned having a problem with it, so I'm going to leave it as is.
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