HOME | DD

TriteBristle β€” Heartstrings ch4/p19 - It was alright

Published: 2013-08-21 21:17:49 +0000 UTC; Views: 45225; Favourites: 439; Downloads: 369
Redirect to original
Description
Next page -- Previous page -- First page


After a lengthy summer break, the comic is back on track! It took me weeks to figure out the right camera angles and actions on each panel, not to mention the dialogs... but at least we finally have a digestible page as a result. :3 The backgrounds may not be perfect, the pony proportions are messed up some places, but it's close enough.

The system Octavia is explaining is based a loot distribution system that we applied in my old guild (not invented by us, we just used it).

Next on Heartstrings:
Finally, I'm back!
I'll have to play the lyre yet though...
WHA- SERIOUSLY?!


As always, MLP:FiM is owned by Hasbro and created by , please don't sue me.
The effect's font type is "Badaboom BB", made by Nate Piekos, and used for non-profit means.
Related content
Comments: 209

xiSugarRush In reply to ??? [2013-11-09 22:41:24 +0000 UTC]

I love Beauty Brass's DesignΒ  Β 

πŸ‘: 0 ⏩: 0

aMadCutie In reply to ??? [2013-10-24 15:33:25 +0000 UTC]

So, being a guild member is like .. A VIDEO GAME?! Cx

πŸ‘: 0 ⏩: 1

FALG31 In reply to aMadCutie [2013-11-01 21:29:24 +0000 UTC]

I was about to ask the same thing.


Now wouldn't it be awesome that jobs in real life had a similar system?

πŸ‘: 0 ⏩: 0

KitsuneHavoc In reply to ??? [2013-10-16 05:12:14 +0000 UTC]

Brass and Fiddles make such a cute couple. ^ ^

πŸ‘: 0 ⏩: 0

chocolatepony157 [2013-10-05 15:49:38 +0000 UTC]

WHY IS BEAUTY BRASS IN FREAKING LOVE WITH FIDDLESTICKS!

lol i'm not mad! XDDDDDDDDD Β 

πŸ‘: 0 ⏩: 0

Wilson8787 [2013-09-22 08:56:40 +0000 UTC]

Fiddles' expression in panel 16 is just adorable.

πŸ‘: 0 ⏩: 0

AlexKazhdan In reply to ??? [2013-09-19 22:23:57 +0000 UTC]

I have to say I wasn't expecting Octavia (with her apparent classiness) to play along to a rock ballad.

πŸ‘: 0 ⏩: 1

TriteBristle In reply to AlexKazhdan [2013-09-19 22:26:44 +0000 UTC]

She's also a rebel on her own way. :3

πŸ‘: 0 ⏩: 0

InspectorGadget25 [2013-08-30 23:08:24 +0000 UTC]

That sounded like the tutorial for a videogame...

πŸ‘: 0 ⏩: 0

Randomreader-001 [2013-08-27 22:36:49 +0000 UTC]

YEEEESS!! I've finally caught up to the current page. I'm looking forward to the next page. Keep up the awesome work.

I'm surprised that no one asked Lyra/Laura about her magi-hands.

Maybe you could have somepony notice that and they would be curious about that.

πŸ‘: 0 ⏩: 1

TriteBristle In reply to Randomreader-001 [2013-08-28 00:56:52 +0000 UTC]

BonBon saw it, other ponies are not likely to see them unless she makes them clearly visible (only a few ponies can see magic auras, judging from the show).

πŸ‘: 0 ⏩: 1

Randomreader-001 In reply to TriteBristle [2013-08-28 08:25:00 +0000 UTC]

Yes I remember that. Though I think that most of the ponies can see the auras that are used on objects. Though that's just my opinion.Β 


πŸ‘: 0 ⏩: 0

Orchid-Knights [2013-08-26 02:31:22 +0000 UTC]

Ok I was hooked on Lyra Hartstrings the moment I came across it. I must admit that Ponies with hats got me diggin Lyra, then I found this. My Lyra addiction keeps getting fed. Keep up the good story line.

πŸ‘: 0 ⏩: 0

LycanTech In reply to ??? [2013-08-26 02:20:32 +0000 UTC]

Holy cow! I'm new to deviant art and found your comic on accident. i immediately hunted down the first issue and steamrolled through all of them to now. This is amazing! I know that Lyra is a fan made pony but most of the stuff i find on her is generic to what i already knew, but your comic gives her the depth i was looking for, as well as for other ponies i was curious about. Did you create any of them or are you just a genius at this?

πŸ‘: 0 ⏩: 1

TriteBristle In reply to LycanTech [2013-08-26 20:27:31 +0000 UTC]

Well, for most of the characters I used whatever canon features were known, and many fanon features that were already out there, then mixed them with my ideas. Some lesser known characters required way more of course, but the ponies whom we saw this far (except the clones/agents) are canon ponies, in the sense that they appeared in the show at least once.

πŸ‘: 0 ⏩: 0

Acacia-Rabbit-Desert [2013-08-24 20:27:57 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful hazel eyes, beautiful music, with a golden Lyra with a beautiful colored pony mint. Everything is perfect!, Excellent work as always TriteBriste.
I thought I would play the song: Walk This Way
XD

πŸ‘: 0 ⏩: 0

Cirestherogue [2013-08-23 17:46:10 +0000 UTC]

your point system sounds and awful lot like the old DKP system many WoW guilds (everquest before that) use to use. was a flawed loot system then might still be here but im sure pony's arent as greedy as we human are... right?

πŸ‘: 0 ⏩: 1

TriteBristle In reply to Cirestherogue [2013-08-23 18:53:20 +0000 UTC]

>>description xD

I don't see how it is a flawed system though. Care to elaborate?

πŸ‘: 0 ⏩: 1

Cirestherogue In reply to TriteBristle [2014-03-22 07:45:24 +0000 UTC]

oh wow i feel dumb didnt even see i got a response to this comment. sorry for the very late reply. but its hard to put how it's a flawed system into text (im not a good speller/ writer) but for the most part the system rewared ppl that have been around the longest vs. ppl that need the the money (or gear in my case). in my case i didnt care to work on progression because i knew being new to the guild meant i was not ganna get any loot till way later. i even stoped showing up on progression nights cuz i didnt see a point. whial the ppl with the most dkp just sat back and let the loot role in because they knew no one could compet with them in dkp. it was also bad for teh guild cuz it slowed progress cuz player A got that new ring and whent from 103 dps to 104 dps whereas Player B could have gone from 81 dps to 93 dps.

now i know that don't directly apply to music and concerts but that basics are the same this person is new and great but cant play at gigs because the veteran member keeps taking them. and because the veteran member get payed the most for the gigs he has more time to help out the guild and get more "points" whereas the new guy might have to get a second job to make sure ends meet, witch reduces how much he can help the guild and earn "points" to spend on gigs.

now im not saying i know a way to fix this but so dont ask me for a better method.

sorry again for my very late response

πŸ‘: 0 ⏩: 1

TriteBristle In reply to Cirestherogue [2014-03-22 09:05:59 +0000 UTC]

the system rewared ppl that have been around the longest vs. ppl that need the the money

Because Tavi forgot to mention (or rather, I did) the point decay. Which involves decreasing the points of all members periodically by a certain percentage. Being a member alone also doesn't give points, only actual participation so ponies who need money would participate more.

Without that you are absolutely right, but with that I believe it's a relatively fair system. According to Symphony of course, who's known for loving to fiddle with numbers.

πŸ‘: 0 ⏩: 1

Cirestherogue In reply to TriteBristle [2014-03-22 15:49:34 +0000 UTC]

ah yes a point decay would balance it out pretty well.

πŸ‘: 0 ⏩: 0

GAC-N7 [2013-08-23 09:50:45 +0000 UTC]

Yayness!Β 

πŸ‘: 0 ⏩: 0

Mikkillerib [2013-08-23 07:42:10 +0000 UTC]

Why are the other members not freaked out by Lyra's magical hands?

πŸ‘: 0 ⏩: 1

TriteBristle In reply to Mikkillerib [2013-08-23 11:15:39 +0000 UTC]

Because they can't see them. :3
Unless she materializes them, only the ones with expertise can see the magic glow.

πŸ‘: 0 ⏩: 1

Mikkillerib In reply to TriteBristle [2013-08-23 12:05:08 +0000 UTC]

Well, how about the unicorn mare that manages who gets which instrument? Is her magic expertise high enough to see them, because they are visible to us.

πŸ‘: 0 ⏩: 1

TriteBristle In reply to Mikkillerib [2013-08-23 12:47:44 +0000 UTC]

Using magic and knowing/understanding it is two different things quite often. :3 But even so, her reaction would be surprise, since this is a very rare kind of magic, but not entirely unknown (like BonBon noted one time).
Also, we (the viewers) can often see things that ponies can't or see differently, like the case of the "clones", fromΒ  a couple of pages back. :3

πŸ‘: 0 ⏩: 1

Mikkillerib In reply to TriteBristle [2013-08-23 12:55:59 +0000 UTC]

But not the same kind of reaction as when Lyra let those black arms turn visible to Bon Bon.

πŸ‘: 0 ⏩: 1

TriteBristle In reply to Mikkillerib [2013-08-23 13:27:54 +0000 UTC]

If those were to appear/materialized in a bright golden color, they wouldn't be anywhere near that frightening. She will practice on that later.

πŸ‘: 0 ⏩: 1

Mikkillerib In reply to TriteBristle [2013-08-23 14:21:28 +0000 UTC]

The golden aura would make them more comforting, but still a bit disturbing to other ponies.

πŸ‘: 0 ⏩: 1

TriteBristle In reply to Mikkillerib [2013-08-23 14:44:57 +0000 UTC]

Why? Hands aren't as much of a curiosity as most fanons think they are. This world has monkeys, minotaurs and other beings with arms, so for them magic arms would be nothing more than a cool spell.

πŸ‘: 0 ⏩: 1

Mikkillerib In reply to TriteBristle [2013-08-23 14:49:44 +0000 UTC]

Well, unless they look freaky as hell.

πŸ‘: 0 ⏩: 1

TriteBristle In reply to Mikkillerib [2013-08-23 15:12:47 +0000 UTC]

Like black mannequin arms? I agree on that. xD
She will only use those if she needs to intimidate others, which won't happen often. As of now, I have only 2 scenes planned with them and they are dozens of chapters away.

πŸ‘: 0 ⏩: 1

Mikkillerib In reply to TriteBristle [2013-08-23 16:20:27 +0000 UTC]

One of which could be for Halloween?

πŸ‘: 0 ⏩: 1

TriteBristle In reply to Mikkillerib [2013-08-23 16:40:45 +0000 UTC]

Nope, she will be dressing as a mummy. :3

πŸ‘: 0 ⏩: 1

Mikkillerib In reply to TriteBristle [2013-08-23 17:13:43 +0000 UTC]

*cue mummy moaning*

πŸ‘: 0 ⏩: 0

BleyeStudios In reply to ??? [2013-08-23 04:59:47 +0000 UTC]

This is seriously playing out like a video game.

πŸ‘: 0 ⏩: 0

Shiningbrightpony In reply to ??? [2013-08-22 22:46:30 +0000 UTC]

I love how when you to have a monologue or a lot of dialogue you always put something small in the background to keep it interesting!

πŸ‘: 0 ⏩: 1

CosmicTail42 In reply to Shiningbrightpony [2013-08-22 23:27:48 +0000 UTC]

Indeed.

Another reason why I like this artist.

πŸ‘: 0 ⏩: 0

CaraCitrine [2013-08-22 21:08:49 +0000 UTC]

That's a 50 DKP minus!

I have some experience with... point systems.

πŸ‘: 0 ⏩: 0

bigshot94 [2013-08-22 18:22:14 +0000 UTC]

So, how important i this information about the guild exactly? It seems a bit irrelevant.


You see, to me this sounds like the kind of stuff I would want to know if I was playing a video game, it tells me the ins and outs of the system, and how to navigate it.


In a comic though, it feels like a wall of text.

πŸ‘: 0 ⏩: 1

TriteBristle In reply to bigshot94 [2013-08-22 18:50:09 +0000 UTC]

It actually is, it's the main cause of whom do we see playing at which event. :3
And for those who don't like the wall of text, there's the background event. Noone is forcing you to read.

πŸ‘: 0 ⏩: 1

bigshot94 In reply to TriteBristle [2013-08-23 02:00:47 +0000 UTC]

Haha, alright Trite you have my trust on this. Wouldn't have followed you and kept up with this story this long if I didn't(and the background was pretty cute).

πŸ‘: 0 ⏩: 0

tclego [2013-08-22 18:09:28 +0000 UTC]

Oh noes! Fiddlesticks lost her hat!...Oh, wait, there it is.

πŸ‘: 0 ⏩: 0

WaveofArt [2013-08-22 16:29:51 +0000 UTC]

YAYNESS!


Thats my fave part!

πŸ‘: 0 ⏩: 0

silvermoon442 [2013-08-22 15:03:07 +0000 UTC]

Awesome! But how was a guitar made if almost nopony could play it? xD

πŸ‘: 0 ⏩: 1

TriteBristle In reply to silvermoon442 [2013-08-22 15:47:59 +0000 UTC]

Unicorn magic and pegasus wings. 'nough said. xD

πŸ‘: 0 ⏩: 2

silvermoon442 In reply to TriteBristle [2013-08-22 17:58:26 +0000 UTC]

Fair point.

πŸ‘: 0 ⏩: 0

kabhes In reply to TriteBristle [2013-08-22 16:14:08 +0000 UTC]

pore earth pony's they almost never can play any thing

πŸ‘: 0 ⏩: 1

TriteBristle In reply to kabhes [2013-08-22 16:25:56 +0000 UTC]

Sure they can, they can grab something similar to picks for the strings on one hoof, and holding down the strings with the other hoof like Tavi and Fiddles do. :3

πŸ‘: 0 ⏩: 1

kabhes In reply to TriteBristle [2013-08-22 17:27:19 +0000 UTC]

but why did you say only unicorns and peagusen

πŸ‘: 0 ⏩: 1


| Next =>