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TriteBristle — Heartstrings ch4/p3 - After breakfast time
Published: 2013-04-27 19:48:34 +0000 UTC; Views: 55678; Favourites: 421; Downloads: 370
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Shamelessly reusing scenes to make the updates faster. :3
What language the notebook is written in, you ask?
One of these: French, Serbian, German, Croatian, Italian or Hungarian. Doesn't matter which one, so I leave this up to your headcanon. But it will matter later on. (plot-driven coincidence) :3
In this comic, Equestrian Common and English are considered pretty much the same language, though they differ in some words and expressions. (Let's say Canadian English, since the show is made in there.) More will be revealed about the cause of this later in the story.
Yep, she's just jealous, Tavi is actually a nice girl.
Also, BonBon is wrong on another thing: Ponyville is getting a new librarian as they speak. :3
10 bits says she will get lost...
(I'm experimenting on a new format, doing everything (including the captions) in Inkscape.)
As always, MLP:FiM is owned by Hasbro and created by , please don't sue me.
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The first try was actually correct, but you mistyped the account's name. :3
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Bonbon, don't try to say Octie's trouble when you know she's not. >
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It's a good thing everypony is honest in Ponyville or else the library would have alot of books never get returned.
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I KNEW YOU WERE TROUBLE WHEN YOU WALKED INNNNN
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10 bits says she will get lost...
10 bits it is
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yep "pre-show", but what makes octaviah go back (to canterlot) is was it just tour? (best night ever).
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In the 12th panel, i see something wrong with bonbon's ear... in the drawing
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Bonbon has a feeling that Octavia is treble.
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i just started reading your comic and it's really really good!
also, that mark in lyra's log, I have that same exact design as starswirl the bearded's cutiemark. xD
I just found it an odd coinsidence.
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In another universe ASK PUN was the librarian before Twilight.
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Is that a Star with Sparkles around, Where I've seen it before?
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IIIIIM BACK, BABY! More of this awesome stuff. Great work as always.
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They don't have a librarian, wha-Oh right! Twilight... She has yet to appear.
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Minor canon nitpick -- I'm pretty sure that for whatever reason, Ponyville clocks only have eight tick marks around their circumference. Haven't really figured out why.
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She's from Manehattan. They use 12 tick marks too beside the 8 ticks. :3
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Could this artifact shown with stars be of any indication of coming events in the show story line?
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i never was a friend of shipping, but... MOOAAARRRR
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Whenever they are ready.
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This is just PERFECT...PEEEEEERFEEEEEEECT!!!
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.3. lower BonBons ears in the last pannels
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To put this comment simple....... IL FREAKING LOVE THIS COMIC!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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for some reason I can see the eyes through the coat of bon bon... is this an error or is it my imagination?
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the inkscape captions definitely have a noticeable difference in quality and that's unfortunate :\ they're a little harder to read than your stuff before. still good though ! i'm anxiously awaiting moar plot!
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It will look way better after some polishing.
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Great comic btw. Any way to set a button to view the last page if not on the last page?
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That would require me to go through all the pages every time I post a new page... So nope. :3
Unless you get dA itself to make a feature for this.
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So, I'm guessing you're not planning on making any reference to how Lyra was in Canterlot in the beginning of the first episode.
Unless 'Tavi was right about having heard of Lyra before... AND THERE ARE TWO LYRAS NOW!!!
Yeah, I may have gone a little crazy there.
P.S. - maybe...changelings? Presto, problem solved!
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"I'm guessing you're not planning on making any reference to how Lyra was in Canterlot in the beginning of the first episode."
Sure I will! >:3
The next few pages will be fun. :3
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Well, cool. I'll look forward to it!
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Nooo! I just found this comic today and went through the WHOLE thing. Why did I do that? oh right... I had to find see all the relationship blushing scenes. Love the comic, cute and funny. Seeing all the side character hanging out was really interesting to see, and all the poses made it feel realistic.
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you: i know! i 'll make a really good story and make it really long! then people will have to watch me to find out what happens quicker!
me: clever plan *watches intently*
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So in this timeline, after Twilight Sparkle became a Princess, she moved out of the Ponyville library to go live at a palace somewhere?
Canadian English can be confusing... especially with the "eh?" after every other word.
And when it comes to choosing a language, I'd go for French... OUI OUI! HON HOOOOONNN!
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So in this timeline, after Twilight Sparkle became a Princess, she moved out of the Ponyville library to go live at a palace somewhere?
Why would the moon look like that then?
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The moon???
OH! You mean this was BEFORE Nightmare Moon's return!?
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