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TriteBristle — Heartstrings ch4/p3 - After breakfast time
Published: 2013-04-27 19:48:34 +0000 UTC; Views: 55678; Favourites: 421; Downloads: 370
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Shamelessly reusing scenes to make the updates faster. :3
What language the notebook is written in, you ask?
One of these: French, Serbian, German, Croatian, Italian or Hungarian. Doesn't matter which one, so I leave this up to your headcanon. But it will matter later on. (plot-driven coincidence) :3
In this comic, Equestrian Common and English are considered pretty much the same language, though they differ in some words and expressions. (Let's say Canadian English, since the show is made in there.) More will be revealed about the cause of this later in the story.
Yep, she's just jealous, Tavi is actually a nice girl.
Also, BonBon is wrong on another thing: Ponyville is getting a new librarian as they speak. :3
10 bits says she will get lost...
(I'm experimenting on a new format, doing everything (including the captions) in Inkscape.)
As always, MLP:FiM is owned by Hasbro and created by , please don't sue me.
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I'll take your word for it!
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im sure it could if it put it's lumpy back into it...
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Hmmmm, whatever could it mean?
A star... ...a star surrounded by a swirl... ...a "starswirl" of sorts.
Nope, I got nothing.
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I've been following this comic like crazy, every new page I constantly wait for (is that creepy?), lawl I love it. Please keep it going
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50 bits says she'll use the signs to guide her way.
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What's up with BonBon's Ear? Just asking.
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It's not up, it's down. :3
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Sorry my English not so well x3... But doesn't it go into her mane?
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i see what you mean. it is usually layered below the mane, but *TriteBristle accidentically did the mistake of layering it above the mane.
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Actually, the ear-line ends where the mane begins, if you look at it closely. :3
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i know, but in that section, it just looks a bit weird that Bon Bons mane is below her left ear.
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heh, next your going to tell us the world is round...
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What if the world WAS round?
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"Shamelessly reusing scenes to make the updates faster. :3"
That's not a bad thing, Thx to it, we'll get your episodes faster! :3
I knew that Tavi was a good girl! I knew it from the first time I saw her (with Vinyl <3)!!!
Continue like that we all love your series ! ! !
PS : Lyra won't get lost
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30 bits that Lyra asks Derpy for directions and get lost.
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not sold on the idea of doing the text on inkscape , i understand the reasons but it looks different (kinda ugly, in comparison), keep up the great comic
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Yep, it needs tons of polishing.
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Lol well Bon Bon stop being jealous, have faith in your Lyra. Also yes I say she will get lost. Can't wait for more.
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Jealousy, Jealousy, Jealousy, Bon Bon wants Lyra for herself.
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You can reuse every image if it guarantee a faster update. I approve!
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30 on she asks Derpy for directions.
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Octavia trouble no no no XD silly bon bon, Although Vinyl on the other hand....Well done by the way i love following htis little series ^^
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10 bits? allright I'm in but...Tavi? Trouble? No way 
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the possiblity of a bad / evil or trubling - octavia? hmmm? interesting
but still love this story all the same ^_^
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Nah, Tavi is nice. BonBon's just jelly. :3
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no Im not (sqee)
wait?!...what realy?
and Iv just the song for the mood [link]
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Hmm, great update but the last panel, Bon Bons mane and ear...i dunno, somethings abit off bout that.
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And Twilight Sparkle the Librarian will make her appearance soon! WOOO! I love how you built the story up
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Tavi is a nice girl indeed. Vinyl, on the other hoof ...
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Trouble? Between Octavia and Lyra? Nonsense!
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As if Tavi could do anything malicious.
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you might think differentl after this [link]
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Yeah.. I love that video. But that's not 'malicious'.
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i never said it was, I am just saying that Octavia can kick some serious flank if she wants to
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Great delivery, as usual. I will point out, though, that in the last two panels, Bon Bon's ear on the viewer's left is placed too high on the side of her head, which makes it look like a part of her mane.
...Now I'm thinking of the flimflam brothers advertising "The Ear-Mane Bon Bon! Come one, come all!"
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Hell yeah keep up the good work i love this story
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Is this before Twilight arrives in Ponyville? I know they don't really matter much to the story but surly Bon-Bon would mention a pony living in the library if she knew.
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That was the only time I didn't read the description T_T I'm a bad person! Oh, okay that's cool.
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"since the show is made in the US." It's made in Vancouver, Canada. English, yes, but not US.
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