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Shamelessly reusing scenes to make the updates faster. :3
What language the notebook is written in, you ask?
One of these: French, Serbian, German, Croatian, Italian or Hungarian. Doesn't matter which one, so I leave this up to your headcanon. But it will matter later on. (plot-driven coincidence) :3
In this comic, Equestrian Common and English are considered pretty much the same language, though they differ in some words and expressions. (Let's say Canadian English, since the show is made in there.) More will be revealed about the cause of this later in the story.
Yep, she's just jealous, Tavi is actually a nice girl.
Also, BonBon is wrong on another thing: Ponyville is getting a new librarian as they speak. :3
10 bits says she will get lost...
(I'm experimenting on a new format, doing everything (including the captions) in Inkscape.)
As always, MLP:FiM is owned by Hasbro and created by , please don't sue me.
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This is really shaping up into a great comic. I'll admit I've stuck around for a while only because I'm a Lyraholic, but I continue to grow curious what will happen next.
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Uh... I'm sensing a distinct lack of sweets from the flank of one Bon Bon.
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Tavi IS a nice Filly but she has an agenda.
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Thats Starswirl CM... Interesting...
I'm officially Addicted to your comic...
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Interesting build up. Thanks for the timely update.
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OH man i do love this Comic series
Cant wait for you to make the next page
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I thought Tavi liked Vinyl D: or maybe its a love ... (Counts to herself) square! Those are real right?
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No librarian? Lyra is the catalyst for Nightmare Moons return!!!
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Oh god I firkin love that movie.
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BonBon mysteriously has the ability to read titles in English: "Lyra Heartstrings"
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Equestrian = English. :3
>>description
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"Shamelessly reusing scenes to make the updates faster. :3"
I'm okay with this! I approve, even! I can't wait to see what happens next.
(And I secretly hope that the notebook is in french since it's my primary language. 
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Wonder why BonBon is worried about... and yeah, Twilight will be appearing, that I know. Wonder what the symbol means.
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Dj-pon3 should come in one of the comics!
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She'll make her entrance in about 7 pages.
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She is just jealous? and i just was spectating that Octavia will try to sell Lyra in the black market, way to crush all my hopes and dreams
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I would pay big money for Lyra!
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Now that you mention it, organs sell well and I just saw a magnificent vintage chello in the antique shop...
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I think Bon Bon is jealous of Octavia XD
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AH! So this is pre-Nightmare Moon?! This is an interesting development! I got a little confused by the language thing, thinking of the fandom representation of Equestrian language as heirogliphics. But your comments in the description helps a lot! Can't BonBon recognize the written languages from Prance, Istallion, or Germaney? (lol)
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There are lots of texts in the show written in English ("Welcome Princess Celest"), so I take that both that and the hieroglyphs are the standardly used written language.
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I personally believe the hieroglyphs in Equestria are for magic books and old tomes.
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That makes more sense indeed!
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Woo, to the library! ^^ A star surrounded my bore stars...Star Swirl?
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So, from the context, I'm guessing that this is before Twilight's arrival to ponyville. Makes sense, we need a break from the mane six sometimes. . . now to try and get Bon-Bon to tell her feelings.
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Lyra is amaizing, she can read both English and Equestrian common...and it's natural to her.
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English IS Equestrian common... xD
But she can read another European language too, yep.
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Does anyone else think that the wink smile is really creepy looking?
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I'm going to take a wild guess and say that the 'symbol' is perhaps Starswirl the Bearded's cutie mark. I can't say it is because for sure, because I don't believe that his cutie mark has ever been shown.
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I wonder what she thinks Octavia is up to. ^_^
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I'm really glad you still have time to make your comic though one page takes so long
Thank you !
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I'm pretty sure "anypony" is the equivalent to "anybody".
Saying "anyone" should be acceptable.
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From what I understand from other comics, when you say "Everypony" you are refering only to the pony crowd, but when you are talking about more general population (For example, ponies and cows) the correct term is "Anybody". If you want my opinion, am with you, it is the same to me.
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Oh? I assumed that this narrative took place during the main series (perhaps explaining why Octavia is now living in Ponyville, instead of Canterlot as her appearance in the Season 1 Finale suggests), but instead its chronology begins a few days before the first episode? Huh. It would have been nice knowing that a little earlier, but considering the comic's sheer breadth, it shouldn't be too much of a problem~
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"It would have been nice knowing that a little earlier"
I remember saying it in descriptions a few times, and the moon a few pages before is supposed to imply it. :3
Also, Tavi lives in Ponyville all along. Which does not stop her to do gigs everywhere else in Equestria.
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Oh? I must have skipped over that particular description or failed to notice the Mare in the Moon. Sorry for sounding like a broken record. ^_^"
Good point. She is part of an assortment of fellow musicians, so that increases the probability of her traveling home to Canterlot for a gig.
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great comic
and loving the story line!
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Is that symbol Twilight's cutie mark?
Or representing the elements of harmony?
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Oh. ok. That was quick...
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Aww...
I'm gonna try to find what the symbol means!
(Right now searching on google images
Just guessing is that Luna's star with Celestia's rays?
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The symbol was made by another artist (I'll credit them after I revealed the source of it). I believe the pic is on DA. :3
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Intrusting...cant wait fo the next one!
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*wonders if the start with smaller stars around it has anything to do with Twilight Sparkle*
Well Yay, another new comic. That's really all I have to say. Now I understand what you meant in your reply to me.
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