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Shamelessly reusing scenes to make the updates faster. :3
What language the notebook is written in, you ask?
One of these: French, Serbian, German, Croatian, Italian or Hungarian. Doesn't matter which one, so I leave this up to your headcanon. But it will matter later on. (plot-driven coincidence) :3
In this comic, Equestrian Common and English are considered pretty much the same language, though they differ in some words and expressions. (Let's say Canadian English, since the show is made in there.) More will be revealed about the cause of this later in the story.
Yep, she's just jealous, Tavi is actually a nice girl.
Also, BonBon is wrong on another thing: Ponyville is getting a new librarian as they speak. :3
10 bits says she will get lost...
(I'm experimenting on a new format, doing everything (including the captions) in Inkscape.)
As always, MLP:FiM is owned by Hasbro and created by , please don't sue me.
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"*wonders if the start with smaller stars around it has anything to do with Twilight Sparkle*"
Nope, but Twilight will know what it is. :3
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The text hurts my dyslexic eyes ._. but great page, I look forward to more ^3^
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Tavi's nice, just pretentious. Berry told me that, and she wouldn't lie. Or exaggerate.
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These comics just have to keep me waiting for awesomeness, Why you make me wait? lol.
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BonBon be jelly!!!
Great update! Been wondoring about what's in that journal.
Its a myyyyysteryyyyyy..... or It was :]
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Now the text looks like it was taken from an analog TV screen for me. But if this reduces the time then I have nothing against it. A nice page once again ^^
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Bon-Boooon,don't be jeeeloooouuus.
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so... this takes place before the first episode of the show I guess?
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Great stuff! I hope Octavia doesn't turn out to be a jerk or anything I love her haha.
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At the time being, the only pony she's mean towards is Vinyl. xD
But that will change too, of course.
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- "Yeah, she's, um, trouble! Mares wearing bowties usually are! It's a sign that you are-"
- "Somewhere, out there, I am being insulted. I think I also caused an ear reaction to droop. What a shame."
So all this is taking place before Twilight shows up? Still... this makes me wonder. Lyra's been there two days and Pinkie hasn't thrown her a welcoming party?! Pinkie must be in a sugar-induced coma or something.
You still make Bonbon look so good when she smiles.
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Pinkie will show up later in this chapter. :3
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I do have a feeling Pinkie is going to be stunned, STUNNED, that she managed to miss a new resident for this long!
And you know what? Pinkie knows everything about her friends... she may be able to give Lyra a few hot tips on Bonbon.
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BonBon worked out a method to avoid Pinkie, since she quite dislikes her (of course, she's smart enough to know that showing it would only make Pinkie pay more attention to her, so she pretends. xD)
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She dislikes Pinkie?!
Why's that? Because of her hyper personality, and/or Bonbon and the Cakes are competitors in the sweets business?
Wait a minute... does Bonbon get along with ANY of the Mane 6? Oh dear.
Just...
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BonBon is a reclusive, antisocial genius. I guess that explains why she dislikes Pinkie. :3
She also dislikes Rarity, though in a more or less apathetic manner.
She kinda respects AJ for her hard working and honesty. Although she doesn't think that the latter is always a good thing, sometimes a lil' white lie can save the day. :3
She's neutral towards RD and Flutters. :3
They aren't really any special for her or to the other townsfolk, ATM they are just normal citizens living their lives and doing their professions.
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True, true. I can see how she'd be like that. Still, she's gonna learn to like 'em, because there's some musical numbers she'll join in. Smile, Bonbon!
- "C'mon, Bonbon, smile smile smile! You look so cute when you do!"
- *blushing* "C-cute?"
- "Sure are!"
- "... 
- "A'tta girl!"
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Actually... Nah, you'll see it soon enough. xD
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Just keep it coming! Your comic helps me write Bonbon and Lyra better in my fic! You're my headcannon!
You might say you are truly tugging at...
... the Heartstrings.
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On your tumblr, btw, Panel 5 and 6 are backwards.
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Yep, fixed, thanks. Tumblr does that sometimes...
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Tavi's going to steal Lyra away.
Out of curiosity how long does it take you to make each page?
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I'd say at least 40 hours of work. Harder pages (custom pose, self-vectored background) take more. Plus the script, this page's script took much more than the others this far... I tried to say a lot in only one page.
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shouldn't she get things to make the candies? Unless that is, she already has them.
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Last two panels, Bon Bon's forehead curl should have a dark outline throughout, I believe. Definitely doesn't look right, no matter what.
Very cute, though I think that there should be some sort of thinking on Bon Bon's part as to why she believes Octavia is trouble. Her thinking process would not only likely help the readers perceive she's just jealous, but seeing as we have little evidence of that, her made-up evidence could be revealed??
Do you read me?
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All her made-up evidence is pretty much just a feeling. Which she voices on the last panel. :3
Truth is, this love triangle isn't that significant in terms of the story to drag it out too much.
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Love triangle? How about we just "Scratch" that idea.
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Is the clock's hands Bonbon's colour scheme or Twilight's?
'cause... You know... Tardiness... Twilight's area of expertise XD
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that was great and bonbon how could octavia be bad news, don't be jalous she got DJ PON-3.
Btw i find this new text form harder to read (justmy personal opinion thought.
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Will try to improve it!
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"Tavi is actually a nice girl."
Oh, is she? Really? What are you hiding? :>
Nice one.
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Octavia seems like a sweet girl. Bon's just jealous.
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She dared to look at my mare! D:<
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Yes, I can see it already. Bonbons thinks that lyra might fall for tavi, cause they're both musicians, and tavi's fancy. Lyra does start to fall for tavi, LOVE TRIANGLE! DRAMA!
"Oh why does life have to be so IRONIC!"
--Sweetie Belle
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So,this was before Season 1?
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Keep an eye out for happenings in the background in this chapter!
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Looking for what you say, I can bet that THIS chapter happen in the same day as S01E01 and probably end in the same as S01E02
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You'll get to see the whole thing from a different perspective!
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And I bet 20 bits that Lyra lost... and end in Canterlot and meet Twilight on the bridge (If I remmember correctly) as E01
yes, I forget this part
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Well, that pony in Canterlot isn't Lyra. :3
Who is she? Stay tuned to find out!
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You deserve a pat on the back for this idea. Bravo!
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its pretty much the day before Twilight flies into town
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See that big giant tree in the middle of town? Follow it.
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