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Prev: [link] // Next: [link]Moonlight is thought to transform some people into strange creatures to drive others mad...
......Does the moon actually possess such strange powers or is it all just....lunacy?
Inspired by Godsmack's "Moon Baby"
Info:
*Slight Chichi bashing*
References to Yaoi pairing. Goku x Vegeta. This is about Veg (full name Vegeta Jr.), their child.
This storyline takes place about 6 months after the Cell Saga. Goku didn't stay dead and Veg is about 3 1/2 years old...
Welcome to the madness that is "This Time Imperfect"
Author's Note:
This isn't the best page in the world but the lack of dialogue really portrays the depth of Gohan and Chichi's emotions.
Dragonball Z, Gohan, Chichi © Akira Toriyama
Veg © me
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Comments: 35
wait why did gohan leave chichi she looks like she's going into labor? WHY GOHAN WHYYYY!
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Its nice to see gohan speak his mind to chichi, great job. If i ever spoke to my mother like that she would smack the living hell out of me.
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she's in shock, maybe she just realized what she's done.. she totally deserved gohans shameful glare in the 3th panel
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o.o OMG I LOVE THE SKY BACKGROUND ON THIS! ^_^
Can't tell their not stars now can ya! Points at people who thought there were bugs and what nots... XD
Egh... gotta say, poor chichi pregnant with twins just falls to the floor, that can't be very good.
I gott also say, i LOOVE your wood grain texture. That bust have taken a while, but its welll worth the effort, huh?
The moon glow is an excelent touch on this.
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i do not like chi chi so this was actually funny to me that he stood up for himself...but it pains me to think of goten as a rape-baby lol (cuz hes so cute) but is a good story anyhows not a fan of the pairing gokuXveg but i love the way you portray the tenderness of the coupling of saiyans (i mean hey who wants more halflings anyway so i usually just say to myself that this coupling helps repopulate the world with more full-saiyans so hey who cares?)
i LOVE the way you draw gohans hair i want to learn your secret its so cute!
sorry rant
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Uhm, Gohan exceeded a bit with Chichi, but besides, his teory is not so unreal!
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I don't think Gohan overdid it with Chichi because all I ever see that woman doing in the series is bitching about everything he does. The woman never lets up on him and he can't seem to catch a break from her.
This is also based on a part of my story that isn't even written yet so I don't expect you to totally understand what's going on.
The thing with Gohan is that this version of him is actually standing up to her because frankly I'd get pretty tired of my mother ridiculing everyone when she has her own skeletons in the closet.
I'm exploring this side of a story because it's something that needs to be said... and frankly I hated the fact that in the series gohan and goku allowed her to scream and yell and pretty much put them down for what comes naturally to them.
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So all that strict attitude must be because after all Chichi did not love Gohan, his son, so much! Or after all, that's my point!
Anyway, I will follow this story, so I will see if I can understand well the fact ^_^
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Poor Chi-Chi tough... But I think, that she did deserve it if that's true what Gohan did say...
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I totally love Chi-Chi's expression in the first panel~ <3
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It's getting tense O_O
This page gave me chills... I love Gohan in the thrid page, that really hit me. But I also liked how you drew Chichi, she has that terrified and shoked look - I like that.
Maybe Gohan's hair should've been a little more... "Windy" in the last page, but that doesn't really annoy me anyway...
Otherwise, I like this page 
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It's brilliant so far don't worry about the markers I used to have that problem all the time myself
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don't go into labor there chichi
Love panel five with the night sky and veiwpoint.
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I love the first and last panel. You're so talented when it comes to portraying emotion without even using words.
Prismacolor markers are all I use to color, and they take some practice, especially when you're trying to color a large area. I've always done my night sky with a heavy black pen, or I cut out my drawing in Picture It! and then paste it onto a night sky background I found online ^.^'
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I really like how you handled this! Wish I could draw this well!
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Wow! Thus far I love this comic so much ^_^ You go Gohan!!!
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I seriously love Gohans expression in the third panel. Its really "And now I'm gonna check on my little brother who NEEDS me, so THERE!"
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I absolutely LOVE the last penal in this. Very, very good! 
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Aww... I feel really bad for Gohan. It's rare to see him so assertive, which really emphasizes how distraught he is. Good work.
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Whoa...O_O
This shows Chichi not to piss off her son.
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WOW! Gohan looks so awesome in that last panel. X3
Will Chi-Chi going into labor from the shock? That'd be unfortunate timing for her. O_O
The little details like those on the door make it just so much more real to me. :3
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I feel that if this were on the show...there would be dramatic music playing right here. You know..that low, drawn out, suspenseful kind!
Panel three and give are definitely the strongest when it comes to view point, in my opinion.
Your sound effects amuse me so much. x]
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does that mean my sound effects suck?
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Hah! No, not at all. They're perfect. I enjoy the "KSHOOO" most.
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^_^; well, it's my first attempt at sound effects in comics and I really try to think about how something would sound, especially chichi sliding down against the cupboards and onto the floor.. sorry if I was snappish it's late and I should've been in bed for work 3 hours ago...
going to sleep now. gnite hun and I appreciate the comments.
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the sound effects themselves are not a '
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I noticed that too and I don't like typing it in as much as I like to draw it...I'll try to make a point of doing that in later pages. You'll have to forgive me, I'm not an expert at comic art and I think it'll take a long time to accomplish something as good as I've seen you do.
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lol 
it's ok! ^^
if you don't want to draw on/over your art (I can understand!) you can always just add them in after you scan them. Erm... although it's easier with a tablet than a mouse...
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five. I totally meant five. :<
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You did an amazing job. Gohan especially. I really feel his stuggle over this!
I think the prisma lines look pretty darn good. They add a very different kind of depth to it.
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