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EDIT: Fixed a few minor issues. Much better now.Character Application: [link]
Evolution Line: [link]
Part 1 | Part 2 | Part 3 | Part 4 (Viewing) | Part 5
Skullsplashmon is up against more than it can handle, and Devimon seems to be enjoying it a bit too much. Thomas is not happy with the situation at all...
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He decided to step in and do something about it. “Alright, Devimon!” he yelled loudly, hoping to catch his partner’s attention. “That’s enough! He’s beaten. Grab a fang and let’s go.”
But Devimon ignored him completely. Instead, he cackled madly as he brought his long claws raking across Skullsplashmon’s muzzle. The enemy digimon crashed to the snow, clearly still weakened from whatever attack Devimon had first used. “You’ll eat me, will you?” Devimon crowed triumphantly. “I think it’ll be just the opposite! I’ll slice you up and have you for dinner instead! You can die knowing this weakling tore you apart!”
Thomas’ eyes widened in shock, and then narrowed in anger. This is wrong. This isn’t what we’re about. “Devimon!” he yelled again, louder this time. “Enough! You won! You’re strong. Leave him alone or you’ll kill him!”
But his partner still ignored him. Skullsplashmon fired his Ground Zero missile attack, but the move was weakened by whatever Devimon had done, and the demon digimon was easily able to dodge it. One long, spider-like limb reached out and snatched Skullsplashmon by the throat, lifting the struggling digimon effortlessly into the air, while he began charging a dark, evil-looking energy in his other palm. The oily, cruel aura around him seemed to intensify, and Devimon smirked unpleasantly, fangs gleaming as he said, “Or maybe I’ll just let you dissolve slowly, piece by piece—”
Thomas had enough. They had been through too damned much, the both of them, for things to turn out like this. He gripped the digivice in his bad arm so hard he almost thought it would break, his shoulder twanged with pain. But he didn’t care about either of those things. Instead, he took a deep breath, and yelled at the top of his lungs, “Demidevimon!”
Shockingly, the incorrect name seemed to catch the demon digimon’s attention. Devimon paused in the act of charging his energy attack and looked over his shoulder, seeming surprised. “Thomas?” he asked slowly. His voice was much lower in his new form, but for the first time lacked the cruel, snarling edge it had previously every other time he talked. “I’m not Demidevi—”
“I don’t care!” Thomas snarled back, and he didn’t care that he’d interrupted his partner, either. “Is this what we were working so hard for? To get stronger, so you could evolve into a damn bully? So you could forget so fast all the crap you went through?”
He grit his teeth angrily—he rarely got so mad, but he could barely contain his rage now. “Well, if this is what you really are,” he grated out, “then I don’t want any part of it anymore.” And with a note of finality he hurled his digivice on the ground. Devimon’s eyes widened in shock, and the evil aura around him seemed to diminish, but Thomas didn’t care about that either. He just gripped his injury still harder, digging his fingers into the cuts he had earned for nothing, and turned to stumble off back the way they had come.
Demidevimon & Devimon © Bandai
Thomas Hadryn © ~VelkynKarma
Skullsplashmon © ~Rhydon
~VelkynKarma
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Comments: 16
Protodramon [2012-08-09 11:54:44 +0000 UTC]
That Splashmon is in a world of trouble if Devimon didn't let go
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VelkynKarma In reply to Protodramon [2012-08-09 21:24:51 +0000 UTC]
Yup, Devimon's attacks tend to be hazardous to one's health. Fortunately, this Devimon is on the nicer side...sort of.
~VelkynKarma
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ShadowAgu [2012-07-25 16:04:00 +0000 UTC]
Motordramon: Why am I not surprised seeing this from a Virus type.
Great story, love how Devimon is acting so much different in this form.
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VelkynKarma In reply to ShadowAgu [2012-07-26 02:44:59 +0000 UTC]
Motordramon doesn't seem to like Virus types much, huh?
And yeah...well...sudden power can do that to a person, make'em act different that is. Lol.
~VelkynKarma
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ShadowAgu In reply to VelkynKarma [2012-07-26 02:53:18 +0000 UTC]
It's mostly due to the bad rep virus types have. Most aren't the nicest Mons around. Though there are exceptions. Like Guilmon and Wormmon.
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VelkynKarma In reply to ShadowAgu [2012-07-26 19:46:11 +0000 UTC]
This is true. If a digimon is causing trouble, ten to one it's a virus type...
~VelkynKarma
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VelkynKarma In reply to NathanOM [2012-07-25 01:26:06 +0000 UTC]
Thanks! One more part to go, and the story will be complete.
I am curious, is bro a gender neutral term now lol.
~VelkynKarma
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NathanOM In reply to VelkynKarma [2012-07-25 01:36:32 +0000 UTC]
well, i aways used bro for women and men, untill now no one had bothered.
Cant wait to see!
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VelkynKarma In reply to NathanOM [2012-07-25 02:46:57 +0000 UTC]
Lol no worries, I don't really mind. Sometimes people confuse me for a guy online though, so I wasn't sure if it was a case of that or not
~VelkynKarma
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VelkynKarma In reply to Blue-Starr [2012-07-25 00:48:15 +0000 UTC]
Devimon was the first big bad of the first series. So a little drama is acceptable in this case methinks lol.
~VelkynKarma
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Blue-Starr In reply to VelkynKarma [2012-07-25 00:49:44 +0000 UTC]
Drama bomb approved then! pfft as if my vote counts
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sinnamun [2012-07-25 00:24:12 +0000 UTC]
This looks great! But the only thing that botthers me is the blood colour... I would suggest to use a more scarletish tone to it. Other than that, I love the artwork and the story with it!
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VelkynKarma In reply to sinnamun [2012-07-25 00:41:06 +0000 UTC]
Hrm, some of the lighting effects I added afterwards did sort of turn it orangey...I'll have to fix that in a bit lol. It was originally red.
~VelkynKarma
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