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So, I added (a part of) Lily. I didn't add her entire body because, #1 I took mercy on poor Severus (too many Gryffindors at once) and #2 the glances and expressions would not fit with Lily in focus.Previous version : vizen.deviantart.com/art/Amusiβ¦
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droxy [2013-06-06 20:05:43 +0000 UTC]
the mauraders looks like a bunch of trouble making little shits.....
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Vizen In reply to droxy [2013-06-20 17:56:34 +0000 UTC]
And so they are... (even if I love them)
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Thlipsi [2012-12-30 00:45:10 +0000 UTC]
i like petagrew, he looks like a goblin. lily looks a little creepy tho...
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Thrumugnyr [2012-11-09 18:02:48 +0000 UTC]
Potter looks pretty badass here and I love Sevs face.
Though I think I like the non-Lily version a bit better. She does creep into my focus from time to time. A bit like a ghost, haha. In some way it kind o fits though, so it's hard to decide. *ponder*
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Vizen In reply to Thrumugnyr [2012-11-09 18:21:18 +0000 UTC]
You don't like her, or it's that you prefer your beloved pairing?
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Thrumugnyr In reply to Vizen [2012-11-09 18:34:14 +0000 UTC]
Ah, no I'm actually fine with Lily. I just think she is a bit distracting after all, even if she's only half in the pic. Though, I do like that you included her...so, as I said I am torn with which version I prefer.
But they're both pretty anyway!
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Vizen In reply to Thrumugnyr [2012-11-09 18:40:12 +0000 UTC]
There is also the very first version in my gallery, a James-Sev one. I liked that the meaning of the piece changes, depending on who is included in the frame. And yes, when Lily's was entirely in the pic, it was distracting because she was more in focus than Snape. Well, I supposed it could have been interesting as well, but I can't post hundreds of versions of the same thing after all.
Thanks!
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Thrumugnyr In reply to Vizen [2012-11-09 18:50:51 +0000 UTC]
Oh, I haven't seen the one with James and Snape before *checks it out*
This is actually really interesting. The meaning of the picture does change a lot over the course of the three versions. Nice.
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moonlitseverus [2011-09-24 10:47:17 +0000 UTC]
I love the style you did this in, also the way you did everyone is very good.
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cosmicecc [2011-09-23 06:57:09 +0000 UTC]
woow, this is brilliant. Love the expressions!
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MrMarshmallow [2011-09-23 02:34:21 +0000 UTC]
wow!! I really like it! there's something really interesting in the style, amazing!
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MrMarshmallow In reply to Vizen [2011-09-24 00:52:42 +0000 UTC]
(: there are not so much fanarts as yours
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joeyv7 [2010-01-12 16:38:39 +0000 UTC]
I'm glad you entered this. It's hard to look at, which makes it all the more realistic in my eyes. The face on Severus . . .
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Ellygator [2010-01-09 15:53:58 +0000 UTC]
There is so much hidden in the different expressions in this drawing! Best of luck for the contest!
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chiburaska [2010-01-08 04:20:31 +0000 UTC]
Adding Lily is perfect...to me it givesa whole another meaning to Severus expression(restrained, mortified, humiliated?.. ready to throw hexes? )
Perfect!
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greeneyes-17 [2010-01-07 17:55:00 +0000 UTC]
Love the addition of Lily! Her eyes are brilliant and they're looking so intently( and slightly apprehensively) at Severus! Perhaps she is expecting either the marauders or Severus to start hurling hexes at each other!!
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mybreathingselfagain [2010-01-07 15:24:32 +0000 UTC]
I get scared when I see their nasty faces...
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ls269 [2010-01-06 18:45:04 +0000 UTC]
I love Lily's fiery hair in this! I also like how you've positioned her halfway between Sev and the Marauders, as though she's still trying to make up her mind where her loyalties lie (And, finally, I'm so happy you were merciful to Sev and didn't paint her laughing! That would have been painful to see!)
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MagicoffMusic [2010-01-06 16:58:01 +0000 UTC]
It's awesome
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Good luck in the contest .
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yzrosner [2010-01-06 16:18:20 +0000 UTC]
I know this pix but I don't think Lily was in it before... right? she is so lovely that I don't think I could haver mist her.
god I love how they all look
Potter the most -evil bastard
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AnCatDubh [2010-01-06 15:47:15 +0000 UTC]
could you add Harry, Ron and Hermione in a corner? (pensieve trip? )
just joking. But it's funny how it keeps getting bigger! I think it works even better with Lily mirroring Severus now though. Actually, yeah, it gives a whole new meaning to it.
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Vizen In reply to AnCatDubh [2010-01-06 16:43:13 +0000 UTC]
However, I should add a brighter light on the lion in the middle of the pic now. No way Sirius's hand would remain on focus in the center like that. A pity my computer doesn't work well today
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Vizen In reply to AnCatDubh [2010-01-06 16:36:15 +0000 UTC]
BTW, I do hope you're planned to fanartize a little bit for Sev's birthday on saturday. Are you ???? .... *highly interested*
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AnCatDubh In reply to Vizen [2010-01-06 20:18:32 +0000 UTC]
Yeah, I definitely am !! However I don't know what I'm going to do. I'm a Snape birthday virgin!!! one year ago I didn't have a clue who the hell Snape was (or very, very vaguely. I used to think Hagrid was Dumbledore for some reason, LOL). And I don't have that much time so it'll likely just be a sketch but a good one I hope. Time is running out!!
What about you?
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Vizen In reply to AnCatDubh [2010-01-06 20:50:16 +0000 UTC]
I haven't any idea of Snapely Birthday gift for weeks, and now (since yesterday) I found FOUR of them. And only a little time.... I don't know, maybe I won't do it in time
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AnCatDubh In reply to Vizen [2010-01-06 20:53:48 +0000 UTC]
Wow... Well, better too much than not enough! I'm looking forward to it!
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Vizen In reply to AnCatDubh [2010-01-06 16:34:27 +0000 UTC]
Yes, and Dumbledore and Minerva, too. They are missing.
I actually do imagine the pic being OK with Lily as whole as Severus, with a very fierce expression. Kind of : not amused at all with all the guys. It would be balanced indeed. However there are some required changes in the expressions, that's true, especially for Sev. They can both be upset at each other, though
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AnCatDubh In reply to Vizen [2010-01-06 20:27:46 +0000 UTC]
What about his expression? Are you afraid it might look like he's casting a dark look at her rather than at the marauders?
James look so evil! But I think I like how you drew him best of all actually (the more I look at it the more I like it). Sirius does draw a lot of attention to himself, how in character [insert random repressed insult here]!! But I guess it's fairly inevitable given he's at the center of the picture (and in front of the window). Maybe getting the lion lighter will help, as you say. Whole Lily would be definitely nice too! Good luck with your computer!
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Vizen In reply to AnCatDubh [2010-01-06 22:30:38 +0000 UTC]
I do prefer James, too. Especially in the very first version, the one with only the three of them (James/Peter/Sev), when he is in focus. Remus and Sirius are better if seen in a singular pic, when you can see their features in close-up.
Mmmk'kay. If I add the full Lily's face, I would tend to a more carefully miserable (rather than angry) Sev then ...
Unfortunately, I really can't work anymore on it for now - just the lion, then, maybe. The full Lily is for a further time (haha, it's really my most-extendable-pic , I'm afraid... I did paint her today but the result was not satisfiying. I had to crop her for a better balance of the whole scene.
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AnCatDubh In reply to Vizen [2010-01-07 14:02:35 +0000 UTC]
I admire you for being able to work on something over such an extended period of time and not being tired of it! I generally become tired of my stuff before I finish it and I have to push myself to not stop and start something new without finishing... But the last touches can sometimes take the whole thing to a new level.
As for Sev's expression, I like this one a lot but the narrative is what matters most I suppose. Do you think he would pretend not to be too horrible in front of her?
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kykywka [2010-01-06 15:24:38 +0000 UTC]
Wow! This is very nice--I love the expressions and color pallete.
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