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If there was ever a mean spirited more spiteful Pegasus in all of the land it had to be Kicva. A master manipulator and actor, Kicva could make just about anyone believe her wild stories of glory, and most in Eair liked her, a few even remarked, that she would be exactly what Eair needed, those few where always thought of first, always spoken of fondly to her sire and friends. She made sure those who thought of her, were always aware that she was thankful. It created a unique follower, loyal to the bone, and willing to follow orders no matter how immoral they seemed.Born in Eair, as Brath’s first filly, he knew the moment he saw her, she was not his, and so did his closest friends, her dam died giving birth to her, and even though Brath was furious at the deception of her dam, he could not abandon the tiny little filly curled up at his hooves. Deciding to raise her as his own was something everyone warned against. He realised early on, that she was different, and had a mean streak but it was too late to pass her on to a nurse mare.
Just like her dam, she inherited her mind, Strength and determination. Kicva always worked towards one day leading Eair, but she realised from young that she was not Braths daughter, and felt resentment at this fact. She knew that no matter her strength or intelligence speed or ability to lead, if Brath sired another daughter, her chances at becoming lead mare of Eair would crash. So when her sister Cassibellawn came along she hated her from the start, everything about her was exactly as if script written perfect for Eair, her colour, her markings, nature and even her hooves told everyone that she was a daughter of Brath, and a direct descendent to the great Naithraxe.
Resentment wasn’t even close to what Kicva felt towards Cassi, it was cold hard bitter hate, and each minute alone with Cassi, her dear sister, she threatened and bullied, abused and beat her at each turn, it made her feel powerful, the way she deserved to feel. Cassi however was always that little bit faster or stronger, and never once did she turn to tell her sire or show resentment about what she was going through, it enraged Kicva even more, she never had the pleasure of denying the charges and making her sister look the fool.
Cassi was 6 years younger and Kicva knew that in time no Pegasus would compare to dear little Cassi. It made her livid, and her mind was often filled with ideas of murder. Eair was her clan, and she knew that no matter what, she would lead one day and to get there Cassi needed to be removed.
So this is Klimax who’s name is Cassibellawn (Cassi) in my story, archenemy and sister but not related.
Meanest mare you can find, always scheming and planning ways to get Klimax in trouble. This is Kicva.
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Comments: 21
Murasaki99 [2017-03-29 07:09:17 +0000 UTC]
Sounds like Kicva needs to get out and start her own clan in a new territory.
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YOB In reply to Murasaki99 [2017-04-01 06:40:34 +0000 UTC]
lol, she's too stubborn for that, and Eair is also the highest ranking clan of the land by default when there is a deadlock in decisions Eair has the final say. so she wont give up the chance to lead that clan and will do almost anything to secure it.
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Murasaki99 In reply to YOB [2017-04-03 02:45:42 +0000 UTC]
I dunno, how big is the planet? Are there unexplored lands?
Does she have any true friends? Or animal familiars? Are there enemy creatures or other clans that are unfriendly? For a species that flies, other flying predators might be out there...
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YOB In reply to Murasaki99 [2017-04-03 08:02:47 +0000 UTC]
as a species they are quite superstitious and bound by tradition, so they believe wholeheartedly things like, if you speak to a wingless (horse) your own wings will fall off and that's why there are so many horses around, so they avoid them and treat them as inferior. Eair is king of the clans, they make up the rules. they are the sovereigns of the land, the other clans abide by their rules.
There is however a fifth clan which Cassi leads now, but the 4 other clans want them gone, they are the misfits and have no rank in the land. also has a bunch of friendly horses Cassie talks to.
Kicva at the moment outranks Cassi and that has been what she has wanted her whole life. To prove in her own way that she is better.
she does have a few close friends, although I don't know if you could call them "friends" though, they are those who owe her, and are loyal to her. She thrives on having power over anyone, so she finds out things you don't want her to know, and uses that to get "loyalty"
as for unfriendly creatures, Naithraxe's brothers Aristad and Damascus, pretend to be Pegasus, and are actually the real cause of horses, by breeding with other Pegasus. the brothers are purely evil, where Naithraxe is purely good. the evil brothers have a horde of unfavorable at times and downright demonic creatures that live by no rules.
the Pegasus in the four clans have been at war with these creatures as far back as their histories go, although the only one who know the true cause of them and the wingless pegasus, is Cassie, and because her father found out that she spoke to a horse he banished her, and her knowledge so now her new clan Eigen are the only ones fighting a cause that could change their world forever.
the story may change though, Kicva might meet one of the brothers at some point and join in a dark alliance, but for now she is content at having power over Cassi
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Hymnsie [2011-10-01 07:47:10 +0000 UTC]
Oooh love the design Nice and simple yet interesting
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Dauntless-Gothika [2011-09-29 20:26:58 +0000 UTC]
Great background story and gorgeous new character. You changes Klimax's name on the story or is Klimax going to become a nick name later? Amazing as usual
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YOB In reply to Dauntless-Gothika [2011-09-29 21:11:18 +0000 UTC]
LOL yeah, the humans in the world name her Klimax later on, because they are unable to pronounce her name the way she says it, and the closest they can manage is Klimax
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Dauntless-Gothika In reply to YOB [2011-10-05 19:48:11 +0000 UTC]
Lol humans are so dumb hahaha
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SomersetRaven [2011-09-21 08:58:56 +0000 UTC]
Wow... Interesting character, not many people make characters mean, they might be depressed or evil but not mean
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