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Here's something that I wasn't going to post, but I did.This is another piece that I did for my senior project class. I had a week to do the sketches, the pencils, the colors and the text. Not to mention all the other class final projects that I had to do along with work... It wasn't a fun momment of my life lets just say.
as you can tell my backgrounds need work as well as anatomy. But I'll improve on that.
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wow....very cool indeed. teenage MNT were never too hard ass for me. they needed to do a bit of slicy dicy.
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Impressive work conveying the movement of the cazzas, especially on the second last panel there.
A tip: The turtles tended to bulge more than humans do, so really push the muscles (especially in the bi's and tri's) out a bit more. You want them sticking out well past the normal circumference of their arms, if you knomsayin.
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holy crap thats fukin sweet. man i love those guys.
sweet ass picture. definate fav
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I am in love with Slash's teeth XD
Overall, the colouring and dynamic posing look great. I love your colouring and detail. Yeah, anatmoy's a witch to draw, especially when it's set in action O_O As long as one has the will to perservere!
I hope you don't mind this, but the panel in which Slash first punches Raph seems a bit weak, in fact it looks like he missed. Perhaps a few more definite speedlines or a reaction on Raph's face to the punch could help level that out.
I don't know why but Leo and seems to "floating" in the air rather than leaping, I'm not sure how to remedy it.
The water splash worked out well well Raph flying off ^^
I hope you don't my comments, and I knot it's very late since I highly doubt you'll dre-do this, perhaps something to keep in mind for the future?
ANyway, I love the colouring and ninja action going on here. A sure 
Hoep to see some more ^_^
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very good work my friend !!! good shading and action poses!
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You mean you WEREN'T gonna post it, right?
But yeah, this is hella fly.
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Very nice, if this wasnt going to be posted, who knows what other amazing stuff you have "D.
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Very cool, the angles chosen are really cool, and well, your color is always awesome, so no point in telling it again
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that is awesome-tastic! (lol..woo for creating new words o.o) I <3 TMNT!!! nice shot of Raph you got there <3
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You drew SLASH!!
Yay, eh's ma fav turtle!!! I like the panelling, nice easy flow, the anatomy is pretty good, but the coloruing is by far the best!!! Yo really have tapped the programs powers 
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Yeah Dan!!
In general I like it , but I have few things to say on that...
1. I think Raph's pose on pannel 2 fails a little (the are coming to the reader looks a little strange)
2. Maybe more evilness on Slash. A good way of doing it without deforming too much the face to do the expression, is by the perspective of the head. the way the mask affects his eyes is always a good way to get expressions for eyes.
3. Also I see a little strange Raph's pose on his last pannel (throwing his weapon).
Don't know if you have this trick as ref, but if you don't, I tell you >> every character must express it's pose JUST with the silouete, and on this pannel I donΒ΄t see it works with silouete.
Sorry for saying all this stuff, but that's what I say. I'm a great fan of your work , but yeah you do well training your pencils.
If you allow me, I can do a sketch to show you some corrections. Maybe it would help.
Nothing to say on your kick assing colors.
Hope this comment don't bother you.
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go right ahead. I'd like to see what you mean.
Thanks for the critique.
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wow...this is amazing. that is all i can seem to come up with since this piece leaves me speechless.
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Once again, amazing. And I can't help but marvel at your colors. Which I'm sure you have heard from many of your fans. But, gawd, I really need to work harder. XD My coloring skills are so cruddy. And this, this is so insperational.
And, of course, an obvious fav.
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very cooool!
so this is the 5th turtle e?!
impresiver colouring
i noticed that in some frames the muscles are bigger than othe frames
you should check that out
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actually I got a critique on that from Mark brooks when he saw that, unfortunately it's to late for me to edit this piece. also that's slash.
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slash looks really cool!
a bit big though but coool!
whats his story?
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jeebus dan. That's fecking awesome. Yeah I could see where you need some tweaking on your anatomy, but hey, it looks artistic enough for you to get away with it man. the medium isn't always perfectly anatomical... I mean... Look at guys like Lefield. Thunder thighs galore with muscles that have muscles! sheebus. Anywho... great work, my favorite panel has to be the long shit with all four of them standing in front of Slash. Very epic lookin. Anyway you can post a close up of that one?
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Really cool. The color is awesome as always
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kool , i alwayz loved slash , he was the best bad guy in TMNT , i alwayz wanted to draw him ....maybe some other time
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wow, ive actually got a crit for you after all this time 
always incredible. but.. im having a problem some things. one would be the fourth frame - the one where he's punching rafael -
a) i found it kinda hard to get how he was punching him.. in that in this frame, he arm behind rafael is blurred, but the bit of his arm you see infront of him isnt,
and for a couple seconds i thought that was his hand - so maybe that should've had a bit of the blur in it too to add to the dynamics?
b.) in the big middle frame (congratz btw im digging the big frameage, its sexy) - the 'other' hand of his is hitting the ground, the one with the blade. wasnt his other
one punching? hmm maybe im missing something but i didnt get the link between those two frames, that's all.
aside from that, no real problems, im muchly digging your color works in this, the very sewer-like greens keep this lookin' good, and your highlights and lighting in
general really add to it 
haha one last thing - wtf is this course
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trust me this class is not worth that much. I just lucked out and got to pick my own product.
any way, thanks for the critique.
a.) I totally see what you mean in this one, definitely should have connected the blur instead of hiding it behind the head.
b.) this one I think you're missing. He punches with one hand and throws a "slash" punch with the other hand which happens to be holding the blade. You punch with one hand and then punch with the other. I think it flows better then punching with the same hand?
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b.) this one I think you're missing. He punches with one hand and throws a "slash" punch with the other hand which happens to be holding the blade. You punch with one hand and then punch with the other. I think it flows better then punching with the same hand?
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YAY! Raphael wins!!! take that bastard slash 
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Your anatomy is not that bad dude, you progress very fast, and the colors of course as usual are inbelievable. +fav
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do u know Diablo ????? Is he your colleague ?
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yep, I work with him on most projects.
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if you ever actually print out the whole book, I want a copy.
Ducky
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here's hope in 5 years time. :]
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that first pannel need...NEEDS!!! sloper spitting out!! lol other than that its aweeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeesome, especialy the sie being thrown.
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that first pannel need...NEEDS!!! sloper spitting out!! lol other than that its aweeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeesome, especialy the sie being thrown.
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your colouring is out of this world. I can really feel the form. Great stuff as always!
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OMG!
Outstanding work...
The colors are... breath-taking... hmm... hmm...
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very cool man.....love ol' ralph in here.......nice to see you posting again dude
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Eastman and Laird would be suitably pleased.
Whats the motivation behind this battle? and who is that big turtle? Tokka? Backstory!
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cool!! aren't those the ninja turtles??
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woah, that is so awseome, hey man, you should make a TNMT Comic series. it would be awsome.
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LOVE IT!
-melanie
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Oh my GOD that is WIKID! +fav, I cant describe it!
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wow looks amazing to me. and look at those teeth!
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The third & fourth panels are REAL nice ...fluid even into the fifth.
Your colors aren't slacking ...and your pencils are great! If you're having any doubts about your penciling skill, 
Great stuff, Sir
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although I agree with you on the anathomy nd BG things, the color makes up for all of it, keep up the practice dude, is the only way to get to perfection
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Splendid! It's good to see raphael (he's my fave among the TMNT) doing
most of the action here...
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senior project? but you're done with school now right? where did you attend?
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this was for my final project last semester in may. I went to Farmingdale NY
Didn't help me much in the illustration track, it was an advertising college. :[
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Oh yeah, I know the tunnel on the 5th panel is showing on the right side but this kind of off sets the panel. It just blends into the panel border.
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