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Published: 2008-09-16 19:36:52 +0000 UTC; Views: 371; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 1
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Okay, I'm updating again! Yeesh, my readers are persistent! Still, nice of you guys to care. I can never stay emo and bummed and 'nobody cares about this comic' because somebody always messages just to say 'hey! Where's the update, dammit!?' Haha.
...I did think of scaring you guys by saying the words all webcomic readers dread; "I'm thinking of starting this comic over". Hahaha, but that would be mean.
Aaaanyway. Yes, it was Sarin, in case you somehow didn't guess, what a surprise.
I don't actually like this page very much. It was done in bits over a very long period of time, and I've improved since I started drawing it. Ah well. Next page should be better!
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I hadn't realized how tall Sarin was until that last frame! (Or maybe I should say how short Rekki was?) Is it hard to get them in the same panel because of their height difference?
I like how you draw Sarin's face so that she's pretty but not in an un-androgynous way-- if that makes any sense. Also, my eyes keep getting drawn back to the star effect in the background. I love how serene it is (especially next to all the BLAMF! GRAAAR that's going on in panel 2, haha.)
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Haha, yeah, Sarin is six feet tall, while Rekki's 5'3", it can be really hard getting them in the same panel sometimes, though Rekki talking to Subo is worse!
I think I'm slowly improving at drawing Sarin. She's meant to be the prettiest of the girls, the pages after this one I think she starts to look better, closer to how I imagine her.
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hello I was browsing and came upon your manga ^_^ I run a new club on DA for people who want to show off their manga and get comments for constructive criticism or who just want to get the views because they feel like they need more. Just let me know if your interested. ^_^
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I like the concept of the club, but the idea of sending over all of FanDanGo, which is over one hundred pages long now makes my brain hurt (I mean, I could send the early pages, but there's no point getting crit on these since they're two years old now and they don't show my current abilities as such). You could try asking some of the guys over at:
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well we only submit the first 30 pages of someones manga and then they have to go to that persons account to finish the manga 
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Wheeeeee, finally.
I'll agree, it's not your best page, but by no means is it bad. Personally, I'm just glad it's here and we can move on with the story, heh.
I never get tired of the pattern on her kimo-- er, "dressing gown." <_< >_>
Looking forward to the next one!
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It is actually a yukata which Sarin happens to use as a dressing gown, so you're not wrong. She just doesn't like Juliet to win hahahahaha!
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Aww, thanks! Nice to be back!
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u__u;; I feel stupid. I guessed wrong. for some reason I was expecting a new character or something. But Sarins appearance it cool too ^^
and thank you, Subo
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Haha, girls have this habit of talking about multitasking as if it's universally a good thing. I thought it'd be nice to have Subo tell everybody, quite rightly, to focus on one thing at a time!
I'm really surprised you guessed wrongly, I was thinking 'man, why am I even bothering to not show her face? It's so obviously Sarin!' Hahaha.
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maybe I just forgot about Sarin some how. its kinda been a while...plus I didnt recognize her with the new outfit at first
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Well, judging from fanart, Sarin is probably the least popular and memorable main character, so I can't blame you hahaha.
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lol
but this page does impact her image to some degree ^^
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