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darthmongoose — FDG ch2 page17
Published: 2006-03-06 00:01:32 +0000 UTC; Views: 225; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 29
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Ok, this is probably the most dramatic page I've done in a while. It felt like a whole heap of obstacles to draw, mainly because Sarin and Sol are the hardest characters to get right.Dialogue wise, I wanted Sol to sound reasonable, but to still sound like an arrogant prat at the same time. I know some guys like this, so he was relatively easy to write. As for Sarin, well, she's just an angry eighteen year old, she feels ridiculed and guilty, and the probably is being kind of irrational, but she's also being admirably brave and honourable.
Favourite panel? Definitely Sarin Saying 'No.' Originally the dialogue for that panel was 'I don't think so', but a simple 'no' was just cooler.
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Definately a great climax, I love where this story is going. The expression is very well captured with the panel 'No'. Amazing.
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Thanks a lot. That's one of my favourite panels of the comic so far.
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It's looking really good 
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Thanks. This page was inspired by the panelling style of American comic books rather than Japanese ones. I love experiments!
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Awesome. One part of me wants her to kick his ass, but another part of me loves dah-rama and wants to see Sarin take the fall.
Oh indecisiveness... *just watches*
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I'd better get the chapter finished quickly then so you can find out!
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Oooo.... Sarin is so noble!
I definately like how the characters are becoming more and more developed. Earlier on ( when I read the comic the first time ) it was a little like "Umm... who is this one again?" but now it's alot easier to keep track of the characters. ( Did that make sense? )
Anyway, drawing wise... I like the last panel, the stance is pretty powerful.
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Haha, yes, it's funny since Sarin and Subo are the characters who aren't from Noble houses are often the most noble characters! Trying to introduce the characters is pretty tricky, but I hope that by the end of the first storyarc everybody will have the characters tied down.
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