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Published: 2006-03-19 00:23:52 +0000 UTC; Views: 229; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 17
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CLIFFHANGER!Yes, it's the last page of chapter 2.
Yes, I am pretty mean leaving it on a cliffhanger like that.
This page was really quick, which was nice for a change from the two pages before it. Woo, pencilwork, haven't done much of that in the comic for a while...
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Aggh, and I can't draw a good cover so I can continue the story! Agggghhh. I'll get off this cliffhanger soon, reallly ^_^'
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Ha ha. XD No worries you update more then me.
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aaargh cliffhanger -faints-
i'm really enjoying the comic so far ^^
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Good. Glad you're enjoying it! I'm working on the cover for the next chapter already, so I'll get people off the cliffhanger soon.
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w00t, so this is the triple-comic update! The action scenes are smooth as always, and I like the pacing on this last page. It gives me the impression that she's falling in slow-motion, and it's a really cool and dramatic way of finishing up the section.
I have one bit of criticism that I hope you won't mind me giving, which is the profile eye on the last page. I think it would be a more convincing side view if the eye didn't bulge in the middle but made more of a triangle shape. Like < instead of <>. I've noticed in many manga side views, the iris isn't drawn as a full circle either because it's pointed forwards, it's more like a really squashed oval. I'm doing a terrible job of explaining this without pictures, so maybe this will explain it better: [link]
Anyways, great three pages! but aah, cliffhanger! @_@; *can't decide whether to be happy or impatient*
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Yeah, I know what you mean, the problem is that Sarin's eye shape makes drawing her eye in profile rather hard. Plus this was actually rubbed and redrawn, I drew her with her eye shut, but it looked wrong, so I rubbed it out and did an open eye. In hindsight, I probably should have spent more time on this page, but I was eager to get the comic out.
Guess my next job is to work on the cover for the next chapter....
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Hahaha. I just used a photoshop brush I found online. I'll dig out the site url for you next time we're on MSN.
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RADCORE! I lost all my brushes with computer explode-y. D:
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very nice. filled with tragic emotion. i like the blood splatter.
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