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Published: 2006-04-01 12:37:43 +0000 UTC; Views: 214; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 24
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Description Chapter 3 is off to a...surprising start!
The script for this page was hard, and it still really doesn't capture the feeling I wanted. Then again, I'd been anticipating this page for so long, that even if I'd written on a par with Joss Whendon, I still wouldn't have been happy. Sarin's dialogue was going to be even more poetic sounding, but when I came to write it down, it just sounded hillariously emo, so I simplified it a bit.
I guess I should get on with the next page, seeing as most of the regular readers are probably sat going; "!!!?!?!?!?!?!!" After reading this one.
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Comments: 6

DrStrangebob [2006-04-04 03:51:56 +0000 UTC]

On with the show!

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ReiDavidson [2006-04-03 13:38:35 +0000 UTC]

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*hyperventilates*

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darthmongoose In reply to ReiDavidson [2006-04-03 23:03:39 +0000 UTC]

Errrr.....I'll just be getting on with the next page so you can breathe again....

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ReiDavidson In reply to darthmongoose [2006-04-04 18:29:52 +0000 UTC]

Yes. You do that.

*chokedie*

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Kxela [2006-04-02 00:13:13 +0000 UTC]

"!!!?!?!?!?!?!!"

Proceed.

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kross29 [2006-04-01 15:13:30 +0000 UTC]

the shadowed tress work well for this page. good job.

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