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darthmongoose — FDG ch3 page 05
Published: 2006-05-03 07:16:33 +0000 UTC; Views: 208; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 15
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I don't really like the drawing on this page. I had a busy week, so to me this feels rushed. I was influenced by too many vastly different things too, so the style feels inconsistant to me as well. The thing that does redeem this page is Juliet being...well, being Juliet....My copics are running low again. Guess I'll need new ones soon.
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I like it 
well, I'm off now to read some more of your stuff
I still think it's a great job with copics ^^
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Thanks for commenting! Just comment using what you know. The cels are a series of pictures telling a story, that's all you really need to know to comment on comics. If you don't think the pictures are doing a good job of telling the story, then you know it's not a good comic! If you want some suggestions for good comics to read (free online ones or manga or American comics you can buy) I'm always here to point you in the right direction!
If you have trouble following the story, or think some things interfere with the telling of the tale rather than adding to it, or a bit of the art looks awkward or something, that's what you generally comment on when critiquing a comic.
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ow.. that tree just had to be thier.. >.<
yay more fan dan go!!
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I love Juu's lines! "brutally assaulted by puberty", hehehe.
And, darn Subo, he's making my repressed inner fangirl act up. Gwah! *trying hard not to squee* />_<\
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I have come to the conclusion that Subo causes repressed fangirls to fangirl...making him a dangerous man indeed. Thanks for commenting!
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Banter is always fun! ^_^
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Thanks ^_^ The first panel isn't too bad, it's the others where it all got rushed and jarbled. Thankyou for commenting!
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Damn right it's hot!
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I'm single now! Yay, a benefit!
Subo, take off your shirt! *squee*
Oh and Juu's quote is... quotable.
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Everything Juu says is quotable! ^_^ Hehe...
Also, Subo is too sexy for his shirt. But I were to fulfil all my reader's wishes, the comic would involve Rekki fighting constantly and Subo standing around shirtless while Juu did a running commentary of the entire thing.
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*dies* YES! ... Wait no, I guess that'd get old... but it sounds cool!
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you did awsome job with the dialouge and the pants as he is flinged back love the detail keep p the stroys i love reading them!!
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I really love the dialogue in this one ^-^ Also, the Sol flying into the tree....
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The funny thing was that some of the dialogue came from the way the expressions came out. Originally, Juu was going to say 'Alas, poor Rocket. Puberty has hit you like an oversized comedy mallet!', but when I drew her, she ended up with a very flat, serious look that just hit me as 'news reader', it looks like she's talking to the person reading the comic haha.
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