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Published: 2007-02-16 22:33:35 +0000 UTC; Views: 216; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 2
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Things I dislike about this page:Juliet's head on panel 4. Not sure why. Maybe it's a bit too small, or the angle didn't quite work, but whatever the reason, it's not quite perfect.
Flashback Rocket and Juu don't look young enough. I hate drawing children, it's really hard!
Things I like:
Panels 2 and 3. Very shoujo-manga, just snapshots as the conversation goes on. I especially like panel 2.
The overall flow of the page. It's greater than the sum of it's parts. It just seems to work nicely.
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Once again, beautiful marker work. I seethe with jealousy. x3
Your expressions are very nicely done, too. I particularly like Juu's look. I can't personally see anything wrong with her head, but then again, I'm not the artist, am I? You can see things that I can't. I have to say though, I love her antennae-bangs. xD!
And you're right, it does flow as a shoujo manga should, with the snapshots of their faces and the cup she's holding. And kids are never easy to draw. D: The anatomy is everywhere. XD!
The combination of traditional and CG background is seamless, and creates a nice contrast effect for the page. It really does look wonderful - those eyes seem doubly scary.
Gorgeous stuff as always. <3
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Thanks very much! I think sometimes as the artist, you start to see things wrong with your own pages because you've been staring at them for hours on end...
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It's very true. XD Most of the time, the only person that can help the artist to improve is themselves, as they can see more than other people, y'know?
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