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Published: 2006-06-11 01:26:30 +0000 UTC; Views: 468; Favourites: 3; Downloads: 25
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Grr. This picture really doesn't want to upload...let's try it as a jpg.This was a quick CG, I'm getting faster at doing them now due to new techniques and experience. I went with bright, modern colours and relatively flat shading this time. Not much to say that I didn't say about the original sketch here.
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aaah... too late with the comment on the lineart... -____-
Now that I look at the pic colored it looks like she's falling.. plea~se make her feet look 3D!
I like it more colored than just lineart, but her feet are making me sad..
I like the colors, they're a bit too harsh on the eye, but maybe that's just me. Also, the fogginess looks great!
Again, sorry if i'm being harsh... *whistles away*
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Like I said, it can't be changed now. I'm on a full time Japanese course, in Japan, also in a play, a number of internet projects and running my own webcomic. I don't have time to agonise endlessly over a single part of one picture.
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I really like the rock XD And the swordhandle 
Maybe there could have been more shadow on the rock, from her legs. Or something
And yes, we are all brainwashed from anime-shapes and such. Please forgive us XD
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dude i cold rabbit on for hours telling you how awsome this is, but i have to go to work in 3 mins, so i leave you with ZOMFG MEEEEE LOVES ITTTTTTT TUTE ME YOU LEGEND!
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Erm....thanks! 0_o' Glad you like it!
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Wow! it looks even better after cg-ing! I just love the rock and the sky ^-^
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Thanks very much! Thanks for the fave too! ^_^
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dunno if you knew or not, but your grass is showing through her shoe. lol Iām being picky though, so 
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They're grass stains and grass stuck to the shoe. Nobody can walk on grass on a misty day and have pristine soles.
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lol, that makes sense... I don't think there is any way in which I can critique you and not be visually impaired doing so. lol. you disappoint me.
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Hmmm, well, a lot of other critics noticed that there's some anatomical flaws going on with the legs and stuff. It's not a perfect image. I have plenty of critics waiting to pounce on me, so don't worry if you can't think of anything.
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okay, as long as the hords still feast, then all is right in the world bwaha-bwahahahahahaah!
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oohhh... that green scarf + purple shirt + tan pants is a yummy color combo. I seriously don't know how else to put it. 
it's 
geez, if you keep coming up with characters and drawing them profile pics like this, my fav list is going to be something like 80% FanDanGo. XD
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Hahahaha, unless I do a new one for Rekki (which I might) this should be the last one of these, at least for a little while....Except I'll be doing group shots next, for making into a poster to sell on cafepress! ^_^'
Thanks for the fave!
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Just a thought...a shorter jaw line maybe? Or put in some more curve. She has kinduva manly face.
Overall like the composition. The mist is my favorite part though.
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Asian people have rounder faces than europeans. You're just used to all the crap anime and drawing in which they lead you to believe that women all look ultra feminine. Look at real people and you'll find that men and women don't look that different.
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Ah, what lovely colors! Such a beautiful color scheme ^^ I love the purple with the blue, orange, and green, it's a lovely shade. The pose of the character is really nice, both her and the rock she's leaning against show a good sense of form. I like the sketchiness of the lineart and all the details, especially the sleeve design... Very unique. The only critique I would have is the angle of the left foot. It's position head-on looks a bit odd... I think it would look more natural so that you could see a little of the top of the shoe with the sole in shadow since the viewer seems to be looking down at the character. I'm not entirely certain, though ^^'
I really like the simplistic sky and the fog you added on the ground as well as the soft shading on the character. An overall interesting character design and beautiful drawing. Keep it up!
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Thanks very much! The foot thing was noticed on the original sketch, but I continued with the CG anyway, because I'm short on time lately and I liked the feel of it despite the mistake. Thanks for the fave!
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