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Published: 2006-06-08 22:39:33 +0000 UTC; Views: 320; Favourites: 4; Downloads: 23
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It's a bio pic for Sarin! Of course, I'll be CGing this one later to put on the site, but I like them when they're pure pencilwork too. This one was done on regular A4 printer paper with a 0.5mm HB mechanical pencil...oh, and a rubber. Nothing fancy here! ^_^This is about the tenth attempt at a bio picture for Sarin. She's more subtle than the other main characters, and so harder to draw. I wanted to get a picture where she looked tall, even though she's not next to any other characters. I think I want to emphasise her lankiness in the comic too, it makes her look more interesting. She's lanky, but kind of elegant as well.
Oh, and yes, her Katana has changed a little....again. I want it to look more like a Katana.
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darthmongoose In reply to scarlet-wings [2006-07-13 12:43:13 +0000 UTC]
Thanks a lot! Glad you like it.
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Hisshi [2006-06-20 18:42:17 +0000 UTC]
I really like it! I like her clothes and th rock. Also the style is easy recognaisable (spelling?!)
But just one thing... actually 2: HER FEET ARE FLA~T! and it needs a little more grass, but you can add it when cging. But her feet... pleea~se, make them look good. it really brings down the pic when you look at her feet...
Sorry if i'm being to harsh... hope you fix them... cheers!
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darthmongoose In reply to Hisshi [2006-06-20 22:26:17 +0000 UTC]
Err....I don't think I can be bothered to go back to a past work to fix the feet. It's kind of irritating to change a sketch. I prefer to look forward. I'll do them better next time.
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un-determined [2006-06-11 10:00:05 +0000 UTC]
Wow, lovely drawing! I just love her shirt! Especially the sleeves ^-^
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Asuka-san [2006-06-11 07:41:14 +0000 UTC]
thats awesome ^ ^
aah, you managed to pull off that foot pose i couldnt lol XD
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darthmongoose In reply to Asuka-san [2006-06-11 08:24:33 +0000 UTC]
Thanks for the fave! Actually the proportions aren't perfect on the foot, so I didn't pull it off perfectly myself per se. ^_^'
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aoikiwi [2006-06-11 00:05:56 +0000 UTC]
Heh, great pose! (Is that what you spent so many drafts trying to figure out for her?) I love her sleeves too, and the smiley face on her shoe is a great touch. One of the things I love about your pics is how you always throw in cool little details like that, hehe.
w00t, can't wait to see the CG'd version!
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darthmongoose In reply to aoikiwi [2006-06-11 01:08:31 +0000 UTC]
I wish the CG'ed version would upload... It's already done.
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ananien [2006-06-09 20:04:46 +0000 UTC]
oooooooooooooooooh... love it, the reclined pose, the sword contrasting to the pose
wah,,, very well done
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xtl [2006-06-09 12:07:17 +0000 UTC]
Cool pose XD, but the left leg is not very well proportioned abd the right shoe's bottom is a little strange (sorry, i didn't find the word... lol) and the right hand is too small. I hope that you will not take my critic for evil
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darthmongoose In reply to xtl [2006-06-09 12:24:35 +0000 UTC]
Aah, yeah, I see what you mean. I was pretty tired by the time I got to that part of the picture (busy week) and I wasn't sure if that leg looked ok or not, but I'd fussed over the image so much by then that I just wanted it finished.
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xtl In reply to darthmongoose [2006-06-09 15:19:38 +0000 UTC]
lol, I understand XD. I am always lazy to correct my errors so i always want to finish it quickly without correcting the errors of proportion lol
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darthmongoose In reply to xtl [2006-06-09 23:09:20 +0000 UTC]
Not so much laziness, as I was too tired to notice the mistake was even there. When you've been working on the same drawing for a total of three hours, and you're on a full time Japanese language course...in Japan, while simultaniously running your own webcomic...
Basically it was right before bedtime, on a night when I'd just written a draft for a Japanese language speech about social problems in England, and revised for the next day's kanji test for a few hours. Lazy isn't the word I'd use. 'Freaking exhausted' covers it better.
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sarenokai [2006-06-09 07:35:19 +0000 UTC]
Oooooo really nice job on that rock and the pose is really cool too
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aluminiumdonut [2006-06-09 03:53:53 +0000 UTC]
omfg I love her outfit SOMUCH ;0; and the smiley on the shoe. Heeeeeeee.
LOVE.
<3
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Melon-Man [2006-06-09 01:40:26 +0000 UTC]
wicked, yeah got to love those clicky pencils. there what I’ve been using the past little while. so quick to restore when they get dull, it's love. lol.
i think you captured her "tallness" quite well for her not being next to someone, the rock i think adds a nice background and actually adds to the perception of lankiness in her. wicked job
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LocoLola [2006-06-08 22:41:58 +0000 UTC]
LOL! I want her shoes soo much! The scenery's very nice, too
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