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I changed the text to a much better readable font, thanks to the suggestion of .
Nigras also seems to calm down a bit thanks to the blue-eyed guy.
Opinions, critique and tips are welcome!! Let me know what you think about the page as it comes to panels, bubbles, readability of the text, colours, composition, atmosphere, story plot whatever. Help me improving the quality of the novel XD
And I have to explain something; the white one is a male! He looks rather fine build and is relatively small, because he's a south European (Alpine) type, while the others are Russian cheederians; bigger and stronger build - also the females (like the green-eyed black one).
Cheederians are enormous felids; a horse sized mix between an Oriental cat, tiger and Eurasian lynx - see here some refs: [link] , [link] , [link] and , [link] , [link] .
Special thanks to , as beta-readers, my cats Jayto, Neo and Nintu, the many other cats, tigers, Eurasian lynxes as models and of course all the people on DA for helpful tips!
Art, Cheederian species, character and story by me. Please don't copy and/or use it without my permission!
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Oh my, this looks lovely! The font is so clear now! And of course the artwork is amazing 
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Thanks! Good to hear you like my cheederians too! They are a rather unusual feline-mix. I changed the font and in all the pages btw. I still have to correct the margins in the first few pages, but that is more work I need to find time for soon. Just let me know what you think about it if you have time
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I thought it was obvious he was male. Oh well..
Loving it so far. Looking forward to seeing what he has to say for himself!
I've been wondering how long it takes you to do one of these pages? I'm always in awe of the artwork.
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Oh good!! Yeah Yves is not exactly the most impressive manly man, but he's still definitley a guy. Anyway I increased the speed of drawing this pages lately - I draw two pages (I draw them two by two) in 5-6 days, within a week at least and I only have the half evening to draw, so it goes pretty fast. But it took me a very long time to learn the optimal efficiency to draw this. But time pressure helped a lot to find the most efficient way 
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Oh my gosh i can't get over how awesome this is!!
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Thanks! Good to hear hehe!
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Oh you are more than welcome
And yes, marry (Indeed)
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Me too! Got a crush on him!
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He is very attractive. I like his lynx ears. x3 I've always liked Lynx.
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lol yes Yves is a small Cheed boy but that makes him all the cuter, more hugglable and loveable! 
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Yeah indeed - hopefully he's still a little larger than Sasha - otherwise he would really look gay XD
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his face is a bit to square, he has a heavy chin to look THAT feminine. 
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Ha yeah somehow he looks manly to mee too XD Btw - I think I'll time to answer your letters and such in the weekend on next week but it takes me pretty long time so it might go sllooooow - but I promise (and I rarely promise because I know I forget too much) I will answer - once XD in a few weeks
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again take your time. You know the letter used to be 8 pages long? lol. I said....no I can't do that to her so I cut it down to five.
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Love the second panel, all those muscles
The layout works great here! Almost all boarders lead to that important speech bubble of Nigras.
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Thanks! yeah it's how they appear; lean with all bones and muscles pretty clearly visible XD. About the panels - I tend to make them more dynamic when the scene is more dramatic and chaotic...and for Yves..this is just chaos and he feels really stressed i how to get out this bloody situation, so maybe therefore I make the panels that chaotic too XD
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You're welcome! Love your species
Arw, poor Yves. It must be hard to fullfill all those expectations, the ones of the hyenas and the ones of the other cheederians. I wouldn't want to change places. I'd rather stay in front of my screen and watch the action from a safe distance ^^
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Sounds like I was right; the hyenas are like family to Yves. That must make it even more painful as Nigras views him as a traitor
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You will see - its rather complicated XD
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First of all, thanks for your answer. I know a war is happening, but I really see Nigras' reaction as a father one more than anything else.
Now I hope that the others will believe Yves, although it's not win yet.
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not yet no 
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it says "before you you push him into lies" sorry it's was kinda bothering me, just thought I'd mention it, love your comic by the way ^_^
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Thanks for saying! I didn't see that hehe. Im awefull with such typos
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N.P. this is a great comic, i was happy to help ^_^
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Nigras doesn't look like he liked Yves's truth-telling just as much as he hated the lie-telling xD Can't wait to see what happens in the next page - will he snap again, or listen like a good kitty?
But god I love your art - so beautiful, with the flowing fur and the personality that can almost be seen in the builds of each character! Ooooo I can't get over Yves's tail, either. So... fluffy...
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Thanks! Haha you will see. Yeah especially the three other cheederians surrounding Yves are characters I have in over 10 years - so they have all a pretty special and well-developed appearance and personality. But actually all of my (even minor) characters appear as individual and unique persons in my head XD - I got an addiction to the light brown lynx-one again....
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This is amazing art work and story line 
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Thank! Good to hear you like the storyline - hope it's not too comlicated or chaotic.
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nah, just got to read through it completely
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yeah indeed - I got already somebody who got lost in the complexity of the story O.o - but its neccesary to pay attention to details XD
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Well, I've been reading books the size of bricks since I can remember, so it's easy for me to keep track ^-^
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I very much approve of the font change! It's so much more comfortable to read now
Also love the paneling at the bottom. Great job!
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Thanks! Yeah I was not satisfied with the previous one too- but maybe a certain portion of lazyness and timepressure prevented me from investing into a better font
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I'll try and be even more critical about the pages as it seems to help you improve by leaps and bounds :>
I'm planning my own comic as well as a second RP comic with Rednightt.
I'm looking forward to seeing you on MSN then! :3
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Yes sure!! One can always improve more
Oeh sounds interesting! I maybe have time for msn this evening - I've been very busy lately with keeping the submission rate of ToM on once a week, but now it's fine for a few days
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I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOOOOVE IIIT!!!!
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I love where this is going! I can't wait to read more!
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Thanks! ha a lot will hapen - chapter 1 goes up to page 40-42 XD
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