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Yey more blue! And a reward for all the people who were curious to what is on top of the mountains
A glimpse of one of the two metaphysics systems cheederians use. Yves: O______O.
Anyway - please be critical on the English - I had no time to send it to the gang of betareaders...
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Cheederians are enormous felids; a horse sized mix between an Oriental cat, tiger and Eurasian lynx - see here some refs: [link] , [link] , [link] and , [link] , [link] .
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OOOOHHH! Now I think I know what metaflow means! Am I on to something? Cus i dont know lol
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Yves- the main character also don't really knows what that metaflow is...you will discover it together with him
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Oh okay. Hehe. -_-
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ha yeah bit of the technical side of the cheeds' powers
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One of my favourite pages yet - and you can NEVER have too much blue!
Love their faces in the last panel, and the way you've drawn the crystal textures here is amazing, you can really see the light and get a sense of the power emanating from them. ^^
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Lol - yeah as you see blue is my fav colour
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Haha, I don't have a favourite colour, but blue, black and white is my favourite combination of colours.
And now that you mention it, some of them remind me of bromeliads and aloe vera etc., can see the inspiration, and I think it works really well; I think one of the reasons this looks good is that the structures, whilst unusual, still look as thought they might be natural, and even though they're cheederian "technology", they still contrast with, and stand apart from, the grey concrete-and-metal technology/ "power stations" associated with humans.
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I would say "Are they dangerous?" instead of "Are they not dangerous?" it sounds more natural and you avoid any double negative confusion with the black one's answer (I forgot her name 
Nice page!
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Thanks! Yep I corrected it indeed
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Welcomes! and that's good!
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Hope it works now - sometimes DA is bugged
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Yes! Thanks so much
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ah good that was some really needed information for me Thank you Sasha! *and Mystic lol* and this is one of the most beautiful pages yet! wow! I like getting to see the extend of what the Crystals are and how they look. Awesome!
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Thanks! Ha but it seems that some readers drop ToM - the amount of views is decreasing with every page O.o Even in those tense moments I would expect readers to be curious. Hm maybe it's my irregular submission times. I will continue with ToM anyway - for a while. As long as it doesn't drop entirely to zero.
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I still keep up! I will till I 'drop' dead! Lol maybe ur right about the irregular submissions, but u are intitled to have a life. But I can't see it ever dropping to zero.
Did u go and re edit something on page 45? I noticed u uploaded it again.
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I feel like in the last speech bubble, the word "really" should be "incredibly". Same meaning, but incredibly fits the speech of that cheederian.
Also, when Yves asks if the crystal things are dangerous, it should be "Wow...what are these gigantic things? Are they dangerous?" or "Are they going to hurt us?" or something along those lines. "Are they not dangerous" with the reply of "not at the moment" implies that they are, in fact, dangerous at that moment.
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Thanks for the suggestion!! I corrected it now
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Great page... well, as always))
These powerplants are so beautiful **And they look so unusual and interesting...)
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Thanks! I actually am literally inspired by plants - take a look at 'desert plants' and you find some similarities
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Yay a new Page. Great as always, can't wait for the next,
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