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FennecSilvestre — Chapter 1: Page 3

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Probably not one of our best works...there were some problems while we were working on this page, but at least we learned a few things about the way we make the comic, starting from next page.


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Artwork © Rayo Guarneros 2017
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Comments: 12

Dowser-Verlet [2022-05-26 06:56:00 +0000 UTC]

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peridot894 [2017-09-13 14:11:02 +0000 UTC]

the story got better

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RikoSakari [2017-07-30 12:39:34 +0000 UTC]

I see, I was a little bit different from my lineart. But that's okay, it's my fault. I'm sure it won't happen again ;w;

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FennecSilvestre In reply to RikoSakari [2017-07-31 22:28:07 +0000 UTC]

Oh no, you did a great job with the lineart! The problem was with the order of the frames. I should have asked Rayo for the old page as a reference, so don't worry, it was 100% our fault this time XD
I will be editing some of your linearts for the next pages though, there are some anatomical mistakes from Rayo's part and she asked me to fix them. I'm thinking it would be better if she sends me the sketches first and I send you the revised versions to ink, so we don't have more troubles regarding the order or the anatomy. Sorry for the inconvenience, things will be a lot better next time

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RikoSakari In reply to FennecSilvestre [2017-08-06 13:07:18 +0000 UTC]

Oh, so that mean all the page I've lined have to be re-lined? Nah I just ask. I won't bother re-lining those. I think now I have a Wacom I will make it better (actually I must practice with my wacom more, I'm really bad at lining :v)
But yeah, I'll wait for your respone of the result

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FennecSilvestre In reply to RikoSakari [2017-08-07 05:14:54 +0000 UTC]

No, they won't be re-lined, just edited in some parts, such as the frames themselves and anatomical mistakes that may be present from the sketch. So don't worry about the paged that you already inked, Nihil and I are taking care of them. The Wacom will be of great help on the next pages tough, it does need a lot of practice, but you will eventually learn how to make the most of it I hope you like the results for the next pages.

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gewgawnovellist [2017-07-28 09:34:08 +0000 UTC]

That color looks so soft.

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BladeMaster122 [2017-07-27 14:59:13 +0000 UTC]

Very good

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Cocoroll In reply to BladeMaster122 [2017-07-27 16:57:55 +0000 UTC]

so nostalgic <3

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BladeMaster122 In reply to Cocoroll [2017-07-27 17:59:17 +0000 UTC]

Right

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Ritafaforine [2017-07-27 11:20:23 +0000 UTC]

This is so nice :3

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Marcelpoland [2017-07-26 23:55:49 +0000 UTC]

Finally! Nice to see progress! And of course great job. This page mayby isn't good, like others, but I personally like it .

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