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NaterRang — Core of the Apple -Part 1

Published: 2012-08-26 13:59:18 +0000 UTC; Views: 162038; Favourites: 2359; Downloads: 1735
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Finally it's up!

This has been the culmination of a project months in the making! (Though it's also a project that should've been finished a months ago. )

As is mentioned in the title this is part 1 of a 2 part story.

-I hesitate to mention this but, for those offering critique I must make a clarification; This has been a project months in the making. I'm not asking you to hold back or pull punches, rather just be aware that my art has improved since I originally sketched this thing out. Please take a look at one or two of my other recent pictures before you tailor your advice based on this picture alone.

-Anyway hope you guys enjoy!

Be sure to check out the Comic Dub, once again provided by !

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Comments: 550

cajobif [2012-08-30 01:32:29 +0000 UTC]

I felt the tears coming...

Very touching comic. Beautiful work.

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Smileyface229 In reply to ??? [2012-08-30 00:38:14 +0000 UTC]

D: Right in the feels. Go ahead, you can take my heart now

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Cushies [2012-08-29 21:24:34 +0000 UTC]

AWWWWWWWWWW
3:

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JCrocksX [2012-08-29 20:33:30 +0000 UTC]

Yes, Apple Bloom. That's right. Cry. All that sadness that's in you right now, just let it all out.

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littlegrayboots In reply to ??? [2012-08-29 19:07:56 +0000 UTC]

That's fine - i didn't need my heart anyway...

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ThundercrackerMLP In reply to ??? [2012-08-29 17:51:00 +0000 UTC]

*sniff*

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Bonaldo-Kun In reply to ??? [2012-08-29 17:49:51 +0000 UTC]

manly tears, dude, manly tears were shed here

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thebronynextdoor In reply to ??? [2012-08-29 16:35:21 +0000 UTC]

you can have all of my feels

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MasteroftheContinuum [2012-08-29 15:57:39 +0000 UTC]

you fucking bastard, you made me cry. nice job jerk......

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kaijinzero In reply to ??? [2012-08-29 15:30:24 +0000 UTC]

why must you bronies make me cry!

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PnFForever11 In reply to ??? [2012-08-29 15:21:08 +0000 UTC]


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Lomeo In reply to ??? [2012-08-29 14:46:34 +0000 UTC]

Damn... now I'm sad.
Good job on comic anyway... *sniff*

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tigreanpony In reply to ??? [2012-08-29 14:13:43 +0000 UTC]

That was real good it is a shame that AJ and AB had thier parrents taken away. It was very well done and touching looking forward to the second part.

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Keropokemon In reply to ??? [2012-08-29 11:27:45 +0000 UTC]

Manly Tears were shed

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YoshiArt24 In reply to ??? [2012-08-29 11:19:00 +0000 UTC]

*sigh* man...now if only the princess would allow the apple family's mom and father to rise alive for one day...just for Applebloom...

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DrewCopenhaver In reply to ??? [2012-08-29 10:14:48 +0000 UTC]

Absolutely adorable. Fantastic execution. Even had me tearing up just a bit, well done.

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Botchan-MLP In reply to ??? [2012-08-29 09:10:33 +0000 UTC]

Aw, so sad.
But well done.

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TempestRunner [2012-08-29 08:59:45 +0000 UTC]

Not sure if crying from sadness or tiredness. Probably the former.

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Dibullba [2012-08-29 08:14:59 +0000 UTC]

I do not read fanfics very much, but has this been done in any fanfic? I have an awesome idea that would focus around this kind of story that would even probably be on level or better than My Little Dashie, but unfortunately I do not have the time or patience to make it myself.

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ShallowNate In reply to ??? [2012-08-29 07:23:00 +0000 UTC]

Don't make us cry and leave us hanging.

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freelancerraiko In reply to ??? [2012-08-29 07:22:38 +0000 UTC]

i wonder if season 3 will explain this.

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peachy119 [2012-08-29 07:19:49 +0000 UTC]

Oh God.... Someone get me a tissue i don't wanna mess up my computer

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KitChanSan [2012-08-29 06:29:23 +0000 UTC]

It's nice and all, but the whole Appleparents sob story is a bit overdone. Can't we find something else to harp on about?

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Ahiam94 In reply to ??? [2012-08-29 06:14:06 +0000 UTC]

On this day, manly tears were shed.

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videogamehunter In reply to ??? [2012-08-29 06:07:50 +0000 UTC]

Poor Applebloom.

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Nevel7 [2012-08-29 05:26:24 +0000 UTC]

Poor Applebloom

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utakubeta [2012-08-29 04:51:25 +0000 UTC]

so sad...

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fullmetal426 In reply to ??? [2012-08-29 04:36:39 +0000 UTC]

Hey asshole! I hope you're happy about drawing this comic, cause you just made a grown ass man cry! Buck you and your talent good sir!

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AnsamMLP In reply to fullmetal426 [2012-08-29 07:12:57 +0000 UTC]

A complementary insult?

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K4nK4n In reply to ??? [2012-08-29 04:06:30 +0000 UTC]

This... is so sad... but it's a nicely-made comic all the same. Now excuse me as I go to a corner and cry a river of tears.

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technosis In reply to ??? [2012-08-29 04:05:09 +0000 UTC]

Wait, what is this salty discharge? Am I... crying?
You did this! Blast you for making me weep!

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desudesu52 In reply to ??? [2012-08-29 04:01:26 +0000 UTC]

great comic! almost brought a tear to my eye...

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EvieRuu In reply to ??? [2012-08-29 03:45:17 +0000 UTC]

Apple Bloom's face in the 6th panel broke my heart. Shattered it.

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K4nK4n In reply to EvieRuu [2012-08-29 04:07:17 +0000 UTC]

Broke my heart seeing her that way, too.

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JetPowerFIE In reply to ??? [2012-08-29 03:17:44 +0000 UTC]

*sniff*

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karkovice1 In reply to ??? [2012-08-29 03:10:53 +0000 UTC]

So this confirms my suspicions, their parents really ARE dead.

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drsonic1 In reply to karkovice1 [2012-08-29 14:58:42 +0000 UTC]

Because someone wrote a comic about it? :S

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karkovice1 In reply to drsonic1 [2012-08-30 12:08:18 +0000 UTC]

No. Because we never see them on the show.

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drsonic1 In reply to karkovice1 [2012-08-30 14:46:58 +0000 UTC]

So? You only seem to have written that and act like this is the final nail in the coffin. Just because you can't see something doesn't make it non-existent.

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NaterRang In reply to karkovice1 [2012-08-29 04:00:36 +0000 UTC]

Well, it is in line with a comment Lauren Faust made some time ago. Still, until the last episode of FIM airs, anything is possible.

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karkovice1 In reply to NaterRang [2012-08-30 12:08:59 +0000 UTC]

Indeed.

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FlapHedge In reply to ??? [2012-08-29 03:02:43 +0000 UTC]

awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww
:,-(
somepony *sniff* needs a hug

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mockingjay-fly-away In reply to ??? [2012-08-29 02:44:52 +0000 UTC]

my creys

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weirdnwild91 In reply to ??? [2012-08-29 02:35:12 +0000 UTC]

Awww... ;A;

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Fragnostic In reply to ??? [2012-08-29 02:27:33 +0000 UTC]

Ouch. Right in the feels. You owe me a box of tissues, I cried so much!

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FantasyBlade In reply to ??? [2012-08-29 02:22:59 +0000 UTC]

HNNNNGGG

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PaladinBrony In reply to ??? [2012-08-29 02:15:31 +0000 UTC]

Well, what do I do after 9 days of military field training and being a man out in the woods? I come home and look at little comics of ponies. They make me laugh, smile, and some bring a tear to my eye like this one. Ponies are a good way to destress. This is a very nice and touching comic and I really like how Applejack is an amazing big sister but she knows she can't ever replace their parents. Can't wait for number 2.

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annoyedlordloss [2012-08-29 01:59:46 +0000 UTC]

Dawwwwwww

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mattwo In reply to ??? [2012-08-29 01:50:47 +0000 UTC]

You know it is kind of weird that Sweetie Belle is the only CMC with known parents...

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metapsionic In reply to ??? [2012-08-29 01:42:50 +0000 UTC]

Now that's just sad

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