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NaterRang — Core of the Apple -Part 1

Published: 2012-08-26 13:59:18 +0000 UTC; Views: 162057; Favourites: 2359; Downloads: 1735
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Finally it's up!

This has been the culmination of a project months in the making! (Though it's also a project that should've been finished a months ago. )

As is mentioned in the title this is part 1 of a 2 part story.

-I hesitate to mention this but, for those offering critique I must make a clarification; This has been a project months in the making. I'm not asking you to hold back or pull punches, rather just be aware that my art has improved since I originally sketched this thing out. Please take a look at one or two of my other recent pictures before you tailor your advice based on this picture alone.

-Anyway hope you guys enjoy!

Be sure to check out the Comic Dub, once again provided by !

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Comments: 550

SilverSlinger In reply to ??? [2012-08-27 04:20:25 +0000 UTC]

no problem!

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Blockblast In reply to ??? [2012-08-27 04:08:15 +0000 UTC]

Why in hay was this comic put into the Fluttershy lovers group?I don't see F-shy anywhere. But a great comic.

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NaterRang In reply to Blockblast [2012-08-27 04:11:21 +0000 UTC]

What- didn't you hear? Applejack is the new Fluttershy.

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Northwestcore In reply to ??? [2012-08-27 03:34:55 +0000 UTC]

Feels inbound.

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alanjcastonguay In reply to ??? [2012-08-27 01:59:21 +0000 UTC]

AWWWW!!!!

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ChaoFlakaa In reply to ??? [2012-08-27 01:09:32 +0000 UTC]

that's so sad...

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awesomeguy888 In reply to ??? [2012-08-27 00:27:59 +0000 UTC]

love this so much. its sad, but its also just amazing artwork and a great story told in a few panels...

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templar127 In reply to ??? [2012-08-27 00:23:22 +0000 UTC]

WOW! This comic made me realize what Applebloom's parents look like. Nice job!

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DarkStrangerX In reply to ??? [2012-08-27 00:15:36 +0000 UTC]

congratulations, you succeeded in making me cry
excellent comic though... it just made me cry...

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NaterRang In reply to DarkStrangerX [2012-08-27 22:58:08 +0000 UTC]

Hopefully the next half will help.

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Delicate-Heart In reply to ??? [2012-08-27 00:02:43 +0000 UTC]

SO MANY FEELS

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Apple-Djaff In reply to ??? [2012-08-26 23:56:15 +0000 UTC]

Is it just me or does AJ's feet look a bit weird in the last 3 panels?
Anyways can't wait for the next part ^^

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NaterRang In reply to Apple-Djaff [2012-08-27 22:57:33 +0000 UTC]

They were some tricky poses to render.

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Apple-Djaff In reply to NaterRang [2012-08-28 12:44:28 +0000 UTC]

ah, fair enough ^^

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Ardail In reply to ??? [2012-08-26 23:45:11 +0000 UTC]

Oh great Veggie55 gets all going, and now this... damn today is pretty depressing

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Apple-Djaff In reply to Ardail [2012-08-26 23:47:47 +0000 UTC]

tell me about it.. ;_;

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Ardail In reply to Apple-Djaff [2012-08-26 23:57:20 +0000 UTC]

It also doesn't help when your mother tells you that she doesn't take you seriously and that my love of this show and it's fandom is an addiction tends to break your heart a little.

Sorry for the rant. I don't want to be putting my problems for someone I don't even know on the internet. But I really needed to get that off my chest

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Apple-Djaff In reply to Ardail [2012-08-27 00:03:53 +0000 UTC]

oh, no problem at all ^^
I can differently see where you are coming from.
If people seriously thought i watched the show, they would most likely be like that to me also. Tho they seem to just think that i am joking around when i mention it.

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Ardail In reply to Apple-Djaff [2012-08-27 00:42:20 +0000 UTC]

Well that's actually kinda hilarious actually.

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Apple-Djaff In reply to Ardail [2012-08-27 17:53:19 +0000 UTC]

haha, yeah i guess that is true

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Ardail In reply to Apple-Djaff [2012-08-27 20:28:43 +0000 UTC]

Well if you live with the biggest homophobic in the world even the slightest wiff of gay is pounced on like a cat

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Apple-Djaff In reply to Ardail [2012-08-28 12:44:16 +0000 UTC]

hmmm? was that a reply to a wrong person or something? x'P

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Ardail In reply to Apple-Djaff [2012-08-28 20:41:48 +0000 UTC]

dunno, lol
Just roll with it and smile and nod like I would

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Apple-Djaff In reply to Ardail [2012-08-29 11:21:29 +0000 UTC]

hah, fair enough x'P
Just smile and wave boys.. smile and wave...

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Ardail In reply to Apple-Djaff [2012-08-29 21:01:38 +0000 UTC]

Private just keep looking cute and cuddly

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Mylietus1991 [2012-08-26 23:29:40 +0000 UTC]

MOAR!

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NaterRang In reply to Mylietus1991 [2012-08-27 22:56:09 +0000 UTC]

SOON!

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Mylietus1991 In reply to NaterRang [2012-08-27 23:05:15 +0000 UTC]

k!

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SnowyZo3 In reply to ??? [2012-08-26 23:24:37 +0000 UTC]

Wow, this made me tear up. No joke. Very good comic.

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DollChick In reply to ??? [2012-08-26 22:54:19 +0000 UTC]

This is so sad

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123coolmania In reply to ??? [2012-08-26 22:50:43 +0000 UTC]

nice

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Mudpony In reply to ??? [2012-08-26 22:50:07 +0000 UTC]

Nice and cute, plate of burnt cookies was a good touch

Did notice one typo: filly's should be fillies.

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FanFictionForLyfe In reply to ??? [2012-08-26 22:48:26 +0000 UTC]

GOD DAMMIT!!! MAN TEARS!

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DWeegee In reply to ??? [2012-08-26 22:39:28 +0000 UTC]

That is sooo sad. but don't i remember that applejack's parent when applejack move to big town as young?

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RunikBlitz In reply to ??? [2012-08-26 22:36:56 +0000 UTC]

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FernCupcake In reply to ??? [2012-08-26 22:33:48 +0000 UTC]

why are there salt water falling down from my eyes?

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WAR59 In reply to ??? [2012-08-26 22:33:28 +0000 UTC]

Very well made ^_^

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Rain-Twister In reply to ??? [2012-08-26 22:31:39 +0000 UTC]

ARRRGGG My Heart! It feels like it just got crushed beneath a boulder!

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CourierDan In reply to ??? [2012-08-26 22:29:49 +0000 UTC]

I'm afraid I'm gonna have to call the police on you on account of assaulting my feels. (Translation: Good job on this fine piece of work)

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SergeantBuck In reply to ??? [2012-08-26 22:29:36 +0000 UTC]

I'll be honest. I'm a little teary-eyed right now.

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StunnerMan In reply to ??? [2012-08-26 22:28:45 +0000 UTC]

MY FEELINGS! ;A;

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CeldurDanel In reply to ??? [2012-08-26 21:33:40 +0000 UTC]

My feelings, take them all now.

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ChainedUPchicka In reply to ??? [2012-08-26 21:17:14 +0000 UTC]

This made me cry. I grew up for so long without my parents, because they couldn't take care of me. I missed them. But someone will always be there. Applebloom, you better believe the Apple Family loves you! <3

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Kobrakin In reply to ??? [2012-08-26 21:09:49 +0000 UTC]

This is deep sir. Deep, touching, and amazing well done.

This was well worth the wait.

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RingTeam In reply to ??? [2012-08-26 20:24:11 +0000 UTC]

Finally a wonderful comic about Apple Bloom, one of the best characters on this series! Good job.

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dragonfire238 In reply to ??? [2012-08-26 20:18:39 +0000 UTC]

and manly tears were shed

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Razed-Rainbow In reply to ??? [2012-08-26 19:55:25 +0000 UTC]

Aaaannd now I'm depressed.

Great job though

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anti-worlder0317 [2012-08-26 19:46:14 +0000 UTC]

it's great but I thought rainbow dash's and scootaloo's mom's name was firefly.

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Template93 In reply to ??? [2012-08-26 19:40:33 +0000 UTC]

tis sad

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NaterRang In reply to Template93 [2012-09-01 01:07:37 +0000 UTC]

But it will have a resolution.

(BTW, I love your STOB comics!)

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