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NaterRang — Core of the Apple -Part 1

Published: 2012-08-26 13:59:18 +0000 UTC; Views: 162059; Favourites: 2359; Downloads: 1735
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Finally it's up!

This has been the culmination of a project months in the making! (Though it's also a project that should've been finished a months ago. )

As is mentioned in the title this is part 1 of a 2 part story.

-I hesitate to mention this but, for those offering critique I must make a clarification; This has been a project months in the making. I'm not asking you to hold back or pull punches, rather just be aware that my art has improved since I originally sketched this thing out. Please take a look at one or two of my other recent pictures before you tailor your advice based on this picture alone.

-Anyway hope you guys enjoy!

Be sure to check out the Comic Dub, once again provided by !

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Comments: 550

Template93 In reply to ??? [2012-09-01 06:01:50 +0000 UTC]

guess ill have to look out for it then. also glad you enjoy my comic ^_^

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tamanou In reply to ??? [2012-08-26 19:30:14 +0000 UTC]

Oh my so sad!

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thisistwig In reply to ??? [2012-08-26 19:30:11 +0000 UTC]

Very deep and emotional comic. Great work!

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Capt-Nemo In reply to ??? [2012-08-26 19:24:33 +0000 UTC]

Very nice. I can't wait to see part two!

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NaterRang In reply to Capt-Nemo [2012-08-27 04:38:46 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! ^^

I hope the wait won't be too unbearable. I've got a lot on my plate right now, but part two is on the priority list!

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Capt-Nemo In reply to NaterRang [2012-08-27 06:49:42 +0000 UTC]

No problem at all. I know how long comics can take. Watched, so I can see it right when you upoad it!

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Pink--Champagne In reply to ??? [2012-08-26 18:57:02 +0000 UTC]

Very sad

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Mylietus1991 In reply to ??? [2012-08-26 18:53:23 +0000 UTC]

wow thats deep.

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Silfe In reply to ??? [2012-08-26 18:48:18 +0000 UTC]

I can't remember my parent's faces either. At least I get to see them every day.

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Stratigenia In reply to ??? [2012-08-26 18:29:51 +0000 UTC]

Wait, how is that possible? I thought that AJ lived with just Big mac and Granny before Applebloom was born, from when she got her cutie mark as a filly?

What if AJ IS Appleblooms mother, and they just never said anything because AJ was so young at the time?

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thyrestful In reply to ??? [2012-08-26 18:29:50 +0000 UTC]

This is my favourite kind of comic. It is very moving.

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thyrestful In reply to thyrestful [2012-08-26 18:33:14 +0000 UTC]

Also, the shades, shapes and expressions - everything is exceptionally well done.

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SilasShield-Wing In reply to ??? [2012-08-26 18:19:58 +0000 UTC]

That was touching man, i just realized that i havent seen their parents throughout the show

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McLarenMP4-27 In reply to ??? [2012-08-26 17:47:44 +0000 UTC]

Nice, very good.

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derrickmac1 In reply to ??? [2012-08-26 17:39:23 +0000 UTC]

...........*sniff* I feel it.

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ArcCahlon In reply to ??? [2012-08-26 17:27:03 +0000 UTC]

poor apple bloom, I can relate to that feeling, never knew my grand pa very well but use to have so much fun when I was with em. hopefully granny will have a picture of them to give bloom so she can at least remember their faces.

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Valor-Force In reply to ??? [2012-08-26 17:24:22 +0000 UTC]

The FEELS!

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Lozziej In reply to ??? [2012-08-26 17:16:59 +0000 UTC]

you.. made...me..cry

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LemonZorz In reply to ??? [2012-08-26 16:43:04 +0000 UTC]

the feeeeeelllss maaaannn

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konics In reply to ??? [2012-08-26 16:39:10 +0000 UTC]

awwwww

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zachman23 In reply to ??? [2012-08-26 16:38:16 +0000 UTC]

I NEED CLOSURE!

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NaterRang In reply to zachman23 [2012-08-27 22:54:06 +0000 UTC]

Soon friend, soon.

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QAtheAuthoress In reply to ??? [2012-08-26 16:35:50 +0000 UTC]

Oh man I MUST see how this ends. PLEASE tell me when the next one comes out.

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yagyag In reply to ??? [2012-08-26 16:15:02 +0000 UTC]

I remember saying that I would like to see this plot in the actual show somewhere, but if this ends on a grassy hill under an apple tree at sunset when Applejack gives a touching story, I may have said that.

Great work, though, and I can't wait to see how it turns out.

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TomFraggle In reply to ??? [2012-08-26 15:57:27 +0000 UTC]

So much sadness this weekend. First long-time muppeteer Jerry Nelson dies.

Now a story of Applebloom and the lose of her parents. Pretty sad weekend.

Great story though, looking forward to the 2nd part.

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Greenrob [2012-08-26 15:48:56 +0000 UTC]

not bad i really want to see the next part.

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Alvin-Row In reply to ??? [2012-08-26 15:48:27 +0000 UTC]

I was in tears in the middle.

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seizureman245 In reply to ??? [2012-08-26 15:43:08 +0000 UTC]

its a very sad comic that hits you right in the heart, great job

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bunniesrule6 In reply to ??? [2012-08-26 15:32:49 +0000 UTC]

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lordzid In reply to ??? [2012-08-26 15:24:18 +0000 UTC]

GOT DAMN IT WHY DOES EVERYONE HATE THE APPLE FAMILY SO MUCH


every time i read a comic about them they make them cry


btw awesome work

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Karkatismine In reply to ??? [2012-08-26 15:07:13 +0000 UTC]

GODDAMMIT YOU APPLEBLOOM! YOU ARE SO CUTE. PLEASE DON'T BE SAD!

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Smileyface229 In reply to ??? [2012-08-26 15:07:07 +0000 UTC]

I would write a critique,but I think you would get mad at me if I wrote amazing 100 times.

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R-B-D In reply to ??? [2012-08-26 14:59:01 +0000 UTC]

So you've finally come 'round to uploading that monster hmm? Looks pretty good

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BB-K In reply to ??? [2012-08-26 14:54:54 +0000 UTC]

It's all too sad. I know how it feels when both parents are missed.

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jazo123 In reply to ??? [2012-08-26 14:48:34 +0000 UTC]

Awww...

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Ani-Sempai In reply to ??? [2012-08-26 14:47:54 +0000 UTC]

awww :C

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infernohedge In reply to ??? [2012-08-26 14:42:28 +0000 UTC]

Now I'm gonna cry. Goddammit

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FawksJay In reply to ??? [2012-08-26 14:36:33 +0000 UTC]

awwwwwwwwww <3

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applepie298 In reply to ??? [2012-08-26 14:36:10 +0000 UTC]

Really good with Winonna!

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EbonTopaz In reply to ??? [2012-08-26 14:36:01 +0000 UTC]

Aw, geez...

Poor Applebloom...

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hypershadic247 In reply to ??? [2012-08-26 14:24:25 +0000 UTC]

the only thing that can make me cry is My Little Pony and I just love my tears for My Little Pony

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039520 In reply to hypershadic247 [2012-08-26 14:31:38 +0000 UTC]

same here bro

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Catyclept In reply to ??? [2012-08-26 14:21:21 +0000 UTC]

Wow Awesome job!

Am i the only one who thinks it would be better if AJ's Parents where passed in the show, That sounds horrible but what i mean is it would make for an amazing and very mature lesson, Also it would be much better than them popping up out of nowhere in season 3 like some people speculate :/

Anyway great comic can't wait for part 2

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Librarium-Studios In reply to ??? [2012-08-26 14:19:14 +0000 UTC]

I don't cry.
I don't cry.
I mustn't cry.
I mustn't stain my floor.
I mustn't flood the room.
Oh God I'm drowning.

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Navyblu3 In reply to ??? [2012-08-26 14:14:28 +0000 UTC]

All of those feels I'm getting right now!!!

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wolfy987 In reply to ??? [2012-08-26 14:11:49 +0000 UTC]

Awww.. Sad but definitely could happen, awesome job on the backgrounds and shading and all, looks fantastic!

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PocketDemon In reply to ??? [2012-08-26 14:09:37 +0000 UTC]

-sniffles- ;o; That's so sad! Really nice work.

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Starbat [2012-08-26 14:06:03 +0000 UTC]

Why does everyone make Sad Applejack stories? DX

Great comic. Well done!

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Baphelon In reply to ??? [2012-08-26 14:01:14 +0000 UTC]

this was so beautiful and sad...
simply amazing!

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