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"Within my realm, you may experience the height of bliss.", The entrancing voice intoned.He turned from the mantle to face her now, glowing eyes blazing in the near darkness. His fingers absentmindedly coiled into the folds of his cape with a growing tension. Now, as ever, he seemed every inch a feral beast trapped within the confines of his impeccable, perfectly civilized eveningwear.
She made as if to speak, but was immediately silenced by his deliberate advance toward her. Fear shown transparently through her widened blue eyes as her spine stiffened. For all of his obvious allure, she was still utterly terrified of the masked man.
Her eyes remained locked upon his as he swept past her, the aura of thinly leashed rage within him seemed to permeate the already charged, womblike subterranean chamber. She let loose a small sigh of relief after he had passed. So close, and yet a seemingly impassable gulf between them.
Suddenly he whirled upon her, cape billowing menacingly behind him as he bent toward her ear, the eyes below the mask glittering maliciously.
"But be warned, my glorious Angel, that with the slightest of disobedience, a thousand horrors shall replace every inlking of the former beauty!" He growled viciously into her ear, fingers gesturing as if to grab her shoulder. They never did, only stood flexing in the air, his elegant digits near spiderlike.
"I shall not be disregarded again. Neither as man or Angel."
With that, he was gone. An apparition once more.
: An excerpt from a little fic that I'm working on. I ended up illustrating the scene after stricken with writer's block.
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Comments: 78
phangirl91 [2008-01-21 07:01:29 +0000 UTC]
keep them coming! your works are something to look forward too. despite all of his menace, he's still mad for her.
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Opergeist In reply to phangirl91 [2008-01-22 22:52:52 +0000 UTC]
Of course he is, that's why the menace is quite so bad.
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cardowl [2008-01-21 03:21:37 +0000 UTC]
Oh! That is so, so, so beautiful! I love how Christine looks! She's just perfect. Her eyes are just as I imagined them in the book!
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Opergeist In reply to cardowl [2008-01-21 03:34:53 +0000 UTC]
Excellent!
Yeah, she should look like she's far away most of the time, I suspect.
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Angel-or-Phantom [2008-01-21 02:50:30 +0000 UTC]
Dah. You are far too talented for your own good. :: shakes fist :: It looks fantastic!
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Opergeist In reply to Angel-or-Phantom [2008-01-21 03:35:41 +0000 UTC]
Thanks kiddo.
That gets me in trouble every now and again.
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X-Unit In reply to ??? [2008-01-21 02:19:04 +0000 UTC]
Oh my, I'm very glad that you had a writers block- this is very awesome, esspecially Christines nose it is very striking.
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Opergeist In reply to X-Unit [2008-01-21 03:33:46 +0000 UTC]
Thanks! I always have a little trickery with noses.
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Opergeist In reply to GorillaEye [2008-01-21 01:41:11 +0000 UTC]
ah, thank you for saying so.
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GorillaEye In reply to Opergeist [2008-01-21 01:43:27 +0000 UTC]
your velcome. *that right, vampire compliment* lol
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Opergeist In reply to GorillaEye [2008-01-21 03:38:28 +0000 UTC]
Well. I'm doing quite well, thank you.
And yourself?
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GorillaEye In reply to Opergeist [2008-01-21 04:10:01 +0000 UTC]
ups and downs. lol usual stuff.
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Dropkick-Halfwit In reply to ??? [2008-01-20 23:49:23 +0000 UTC]
Cool. When you're done with the fic, I'd sure love to see it.
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Opergeist In reply to Dropkick-Halfwit [2008-01-21 00:38:58 +0000 UTC]
No problem. Like I said to Madame in an earlier comment, it'll be awhile ::smirks::
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NicoleMAbrahamson In reply to ??? [2008-01-20 23:31:37 +0000 UTC]
Absolutely, positively lovely!
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Opergeist In reply to NicoleMAbrahamson [2008-01-20 23:33:42 +0000 UTC]
Thank you very,very much!
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MadameGiry In reply to ??? [2008-01-20 23:01:37 +0000 UTC]
Is there anything you CAN'T do? This is a very eerie, but yet attractive image - and the writing is lurid and filled with descriptive goodies! Very nice work, my friend! *thumbs up*
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Opergeist In reply to MadameGiry [2008-01-20 23:09:40 +0000 UTC]
Erm... Statistics? Numbers in general?
Ah, yes, but you know me. I've started this damn thing but it'll be Judgement Day before I finish it.
Glad that it stands to your high standards, my dear!
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