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ryuzo β Transformers Fanfic 1 - part 3
Published: 2008-01-26 13:21:27 +0000 UTC; Views: 7358; Favourites: 102; Downloads: 70
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This is part 3 of my TF fanfic.Part 1 [link]
Part 2 [link]
Check out the conclusion here!
Part 4 [link]
For those of you who've been following along, part 3 was originally supposed to be the last part, but some scenes and transitions were really bad...which led to some story restructuring and 8 panels became 12 panels which became 11 panels and then finally settled in at 7 panels, with 7 more panels coming in part 4.
In panel 6, Thrust's screen has "Ancient Autobot" on it, which is a font by Jim Sorenson. He based it on the Monolith that appeared in the TV episode Cosmic Rust. Thanks Jim!
In several panels in part 3, Sideswipe is performing Jet Judo, which was demonstrated in a TV episode. View it on YouTube at the link below (jump to 17:30):
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Thanks to for the link and information.
Breakdown sketches for part 3 are here ([link] )
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right??? mine are definitely gonna be G1SUN or something to the likes of that.
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Thanks so much! Anything in particular that you liked about part 3 more than the others?
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The lines. It looks so real. I wish they're were real. ;.;
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Now that I look at it, I'm not sure how I drew all that in Photoshop!
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I'm so glad that many people noticed the license plate, hehe. It HAD to be done...
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And it was a fantastic touch. ^^
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Better and better 
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Thanks. Part 4 just came out!
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Optimus statue! He looks almost like chocolate *w* Mmmmmmmm~~~~ Gorgeous drawings as always
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Thanks for the fav! Prime really is your play thing isn't he? This time he's chocolate! haha What next??
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oversized strawberry of course~
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Thanks for the fav!
To answer your question -- Photoshop! I love Painter and I WISH I was good at it...maybe someday.
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so muuch detalis *__* i absolutely adore it :3
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Thanks! Yes I am zooming in ALL the time, sometimes to a fault...
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Thanks! I work my butt off but it's worth it when people enjoy it!
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It was Aric's idea! LOL
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Amazing
The details, the style, everythingβ¦just love it.
Canβt wait for the next part
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Thanks for the 3 favs and thanks for the compliments! I worked really hard on this comic and the support really motivates me!! Part 4 coming in March--
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And it made the weapon on the monument break...Sideswipe is soooooooooooooo fired!
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Yeah that's going to be really fun to draw...a really pissed off Ultra Magnus!
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Holy cow! So much good stuff in all that, I could write a book about it! The detail in the cockpit POV...whew! The angles...whew! The motion...whew! Keep it up, man!! Why are they attacking an Optimus Prime statue??
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Thanks for the fav! Glad you liked it cuz I spent tons of time on it!
Sideswipe basically changed Thrust's flight path and unintentionally caused him to ram into a monument of Prime!
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holy f------ s------ amazing! artwork is fantastic... that last panel really takes the cake (better than I imagined)
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Yo! Thanks for the fav and compliment! Yes the last panel was made only thanks to your input. The way you said "flip the angle", and the way you showed the Sideswipe jump off and Thrust crash in one panel (whereas I originally had it as two panels).
More critiques needed for part 4 as the panels get finished!
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Hah! Got some dialogue for you...and btw, I love the way you draw Magnus XD He looks fantastic!
p1: Magnus: Quickly! We've got to get Sideswipe before Thrust shakes him off!
Smokescreen: I dunno...looks to me like he's doing just fine up there.
Sunstreaker: Can you let me down now, plz? I'm feeling better...
p2: Sunstreaker: Whoo! I think my bro can use a little help!
Magnus: Don't do anything brash, Sunstreaker!
Thrust: (distant) &%#$*@!!
p3: Sunstreaker: Don't get your wires crossed, Magnus. I'll be right back!
Magnus: ><
p4: Thrust: I'm losing altitude!! Let go of me, you stupid Autobot!!
Sideswipe: Like I'm gonna listen to you!
Sunstreaker: Hey! Don't hog all the fun, Sides! Leave some for me!
p5: Thrust: Aarrgh!! No! We're gonna crash!!
Sideswipe: That's where you're wrong, my cone-headed friend...
p6: Sideswipe: This is where I get off.
Thrust: !!!!
p7: Thrust: AARRGHHH!!
Sideswipe: Score. XD
hope you find it amusing enough XD good luck with the third part!
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Well done! 
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i'm so happy u like it! 
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I'll say it again -- I love the dialogue! Keep it up and keep your six-shooters loaded for part 4!
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totally will! XD can't wait for it!
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Yess the transformation.... rulez! And the plate too!
HAIL G1!
fantastic work
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Glad you noticed the plate! hehe Thanks for the compliment!
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Waiting for the next one...
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Yay! Third part!
Yet again your art amazes me!
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Thanks!! I try hard to amaze...glad you were amazed!
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I was indeed, oh wow! Thursday is the trip O_O
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did Thrust just run into a statue of Prime? hehe, looks like I'm gonna be doing more dialogue soon... ^^
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Yep, that thing in the distance this whole time was a Prime monument! Can't wait for your dialogue!
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hehe, my next comment will have some...I just have to study it a little bit longer...*stares real hard*
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WOW... this is amazing! I love the transformation sequence... great visual storytelling!
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