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Published: 2008-01-26 13:21:27 +0000 UTC; Views: 7366; Favourites: 102; Downloads: 70
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This is part 3 of my TF fanfic.Part 1 [link]
Part 2 [link]
Check out the conclusion here!
Part 4 [link]
For those of you who've been following along, part 3 was originally supposed to be the last part, but some scenes and transitions were really bad...which led to some story restructuring and 8 panels became 12 panels which became 11 panels and then finally settled in at 7 panels, with 7 more panels coming in part 4.
In panel 6, Thrust's screen has "Ancient Autobot" on it, which is a font by Jim Sorenson. He based it on the Monolith that appeared in the TV episode Cosmic Rust. Thanks Jim!
In several panels in part 3, Sideswipe is performing Jet Judo, which was demonstrated in a TV episode. View it on YouTube at the link below (jump to 17:30):
[link]
Thanks to for the link and information.
Breakdown sketches for part 3 are here ([link] )
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Comments: 78
ryuzo In reply to ??? [2008-02-11 10:32:13 +0000 UTC]
Thanks for the compliment and fav! Yes the transformation stuff is fun, I really haven't experimented with it but I want to more...
...and thanks for the storytelling compliment! Coming from an artist with a good eye for visual storytelling, it means a lot!
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NTLDR In reply to ??? [2008-01-27 03:48:55 +0000 UTC]
This is fantastic work! Can't wait for the next part!
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ryuzo In reply to NTLDR [2008-02-11 10:33:13 +0000 UTC]
Thanks for the fav! Yes I can't wait to finish this!! It's on my mind 24/7...well maybe not, maybe more like 16/5? LOL
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michelleybell In reply to ??? [2008-01-26 20:52:22 +0000 UTC]
you draw so well ryuzo !!!
the crash is excellent
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ryuzo In reply to michelleybell [2008-02-11 10:33:49 +0000 UTC]
Thanks! You draw well too and I MEAN THAT.
The crash took extra long, lol. Thanks, glad you noticed the hard work!
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ryuzo In reply to Kage-Jaganshi [2008-02-11 10:34:20 +0000 UTC]
Thanks for noticing Sunny's license plate!!
I love easter eggs...
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ryuzo In reply to lunardarknight [2008-02-11 10:35:00 +0000 UTC]
THANKS! I like that stretched out smile hehe.
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lunardarknight In reply to ryuzo [2008-02-11 13:29:13 +0000 UTC]
lol when i see a beautiful artwork I smile
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i-am-jacques-strappe In reply to ??? [2008-01-26 16:53:36 +0000 UTC]
Wow. The perspective and the speed lines in the first four panels are full of so much motion and keep you at the edge of your seat! Jet Judo for the win -- and, I love Sunstreaker's license plate!
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ryuzo In reply to i-am-jacques-strappe [2008-02-11 10:35:51 +0000 UTC]
Thanks for the fav and wow what a great compliment, I'm flattered. Yes speed lines are a big part of this comic. Part 4 will not be without I guarantee!
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Niara-Silverbreeze [2008-01-26 14:31:17 +0000 UTC]
damn awesome! JET JUDO!
instant fave of course
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ryuzo In reply to Niara-Silverbreeze [2008-02-11 10:36:36 +0000 UTC]
Thanks for the fav! Means a lot! And Jet Judo needs its own full length episode! They should reintroduce Sideswipe and Sunstreaker in TF animated just to do Jet Judo on Starscream!
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wordmongerer In reply to ??? [2008-01-26 14:19:24 +0000 UTC]
Absolutely bloody brilliant, the sense of motion is fantastic!
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ryuzo In reply to wordmongerer [2008-02-11 10:37:13 +0000 UTC]
Thanks for the fav! Thanks for the motion compliment, motion is definitely something I'm going for!
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wordmongerer In reply to ryuzo [2008-02-11 17:28:28 +0000 UTC]
It looks bloody brilliant mate, a fave well earned!
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jvgce [2008-01-26 13:56:20 +0000 UTC]
I like the 3rd panel where sunstreaker transforming and the last panel was just awesome.......another great work from U bro......
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ryuzo In reply to jvgce [2008-02-11 10:37:38 +0000 UTC]
Thanks! Your comments always tell me exactly what you like, that is so important to me!
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