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It's all very interest-OH LOOK, A BUTTERFLY!
Lore time. :3 Luckily, there won't be many more pages like this for a while, these take a long time for me to write. :/ But nevertheless, here's my clumsy attempt at having Tavi explain everything.
Lyra's question of ponies singing may sound strange, if it involved only singing. But when somepony starts singing (at least in this universe), it gets an instrumental backup, sometimes without any visible band. (I declare that to be a pony thing, just like the "lyrics-empathy" or something like that.) So why do you need to hire a real band when you get it anyway? Tavi explains why. :3
Also, Tavi calls her miss Lyra Heartstrings instead of miss Heartstrings, because Heartstrings isn't Lyra's family name. (At least in this universe.) So I treat the whole of her name as a given name.
Also #2, yep, the two musical ponies mentioned will be(/are) characters as well.
Next on Heartstrings:
Let us continue our journey to our headquarters!
It feels like all I did today is going somewhere...
Pardon?
N-nevermind!
As always, MLP:FiM is owned by Hasbro and created by , please don't sue me.
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A really nice comic. I do admire your work, especially the contrast of characters that you paired up
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Looks wonderful, really show accurate!
And I really like how she watches the butterfly!
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Good thing that she's the kind of pony who can share her attention, so she can avoid the awkward moment when she'd supposed to be acting like she was paying attention the whole time.
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OH my FCKING GOD! They have Butterflies here too.
[BackgroundPony] If I don't move maybe noone will see me....
but srsly Y U SO much TExT?
Because I'm building up a world over here. :3
Which is hard if I'd try to put only 2 lines of text on every panel.
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legit, fair enough, but still
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Let's look at the bright side: there be another such part for quite a while.
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FCKING YAY!
How long does it take you for one page?
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It depends on many aspects: how text heavy it is (this one was particularly tough), how complex are the poses on it and how hard it is to get the backgrounds (either by making them myself or find a suitable scene, from which I can crop out the ponies and use it as a background).
So it should be 2-7 days per page, if I'm not on a deadline job or have to study for something imminent.
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duuuude ... that's like ages xD shit man.
Well not everyone sits at home all day with his lifespan as freetime like me
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IKR.
I wish I could upload one every 2 days or so. :/
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I try to do one page per day. but some days Im just to lazy.
today I watched 3 movies instead.
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Ow, I smell a Luna in some future comic!
Ponies doesn't have family names.
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We never did get to see Fluttershy's performance...
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Ye, Lunas return (as Nightmare Moon) kinda spoiled it.
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I just realized something: why hasn't Pinkie thrown a party for Lyra yet?
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Because she's busy running around and preparing for Twilight's party ATM. :3
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But Pinkie have always had a sense for infinite multitasking. Lyra must be a very special pony to be ignored be Pinkie for so long. Ow what madness hehe.
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Pinkie will notice Lyra later that day, and gets frustrated Pinkie style since now not only she has to prepare for the Princess's welcoming celebration, throw a party for the Princess's no.1 student, she also has another pony to welcome... xD
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When Pinkie Pie gets frustrated reality shatters. It will be cool
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HOLY MOTHER OF TEXT BATMAN!
Very nice and informative. it Felt a little bit like exposition that would be better with more characters of the guild explaining about how it came to be but it was very good one.
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Robin I've said a thousand times that ponies are for girls, dont see it!, Now go and prepare me a sandwich, I have hunger.
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Always happy to see this comic updated, especially now we have some Octavia.
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5th panel grammar mistake: "one instruments"
I'm liking this comic so far, though.
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That blue pony in the background in the first few panels must have really been torn about whether to buy some honey (or some other bee related product) from that stand
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I can't r3ad this on my phon3 goddammit
Oh w3ll, ill g3t on th3 compurrt3r lat3r
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I'm really enjoying this, but it's a little too heavy on the exposition imho.
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4th pannel, from bottom to the top. Layer issue with Octavia's right ear (our left).
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It's like that on purpose. :3
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If you say so, I believe you.
It's just that it's weird to see the color "bleeding" without a line to "keep it in place".
Apologies for the illiteracy of my statement, I'm an amateur artist of sorts (even though the only thing I do is retrace vectors).
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I'm pretty sure I'll refine her vector a lot of times in the future, so problems like that will vanish slowly
(I'm not an artist myself at all, so perfection was and will never by my personal goal 
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well, thats an interesting mane style she got there
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Lyra (kinda) distracted by a butterfly. XD
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This has been one very very VERY long day for Lyra x3
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*gasps* Butterfly! *chases* X'D
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Some say she still haven't closed it till this day.
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Was I the only one who had trouble reading because of the butterfly
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After hearing Beauty Brass from 'The Vinyl Scratch Tapes', I've always wondered what she looked like. I don't know if she has any official art or not, but it will be interesting to see your spin on her~
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Watch the S1 finale again. You'll see Octavia playing her cello, a pony on piano, and a blue pony with a brown mane and tail, playing a tuba. (at least I think it's a tuba... might be a sousaphone...) [link] That would be Beauty Brass.
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WHO CARES ABOUT THE GUILD... BUTTERFLY! xD
Another awesome part.
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oh... butterfly!! huh, pardon can you repeat yourself?
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