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McReady was lying down on the couch resting. He was feeling guilty and stupid as fuck. Now no one trusted him, not even Childs. The only person still there for him was Kate, who was sitting on the armchair in front of him. She was reading "Macbeth" tentatively. “I remember reading this back in College” she remarked “I just love the tragedy in this book. I still love this one quote from this book, I think it went By the pricking of your thumb something wicked this way comes! ” she added. McReady looked at her, smiling. “Yeah, no wonder that book is well acclaimed" he stated. Then, he went back to Kate’s statement “Hey, say that again”.
Kate looked at him confused “Um, By the pricking of your thumb something wicked this way comes?” she said unsure. This made McReady's brain click. “What if we used that against that thing”? he said. Kate groaned “Not this again, McReady…”. “No, I’m serious!” he argued “That thing is evolving, but it always makes mistakes in certain areas”. Kate answered “Your point being?” McReady responded “There might still be some way to find out who is not human” he said. Kate raised an eyebrow “How? It already learned to avoid the blood test, along with copying organic material” the said. “But what if there was just one tiny detail it overlooked that the human didn't have in the first place? One minor, unnoticeable imperfection?” he stated. This was new for Kate, for she hadn’t thought of this. “I-it might be possible...but wheres the evidence?” she questioned.
“We don’t need evidence” he said “All we need is little bit of proof and a keen eye” he added. Kate was now taking this into consideration. But all of a sudden, a crashing noise was heard. The sound of rocks and wood smashing and breaking far away. McReady and Kate got up. They walked towards the group, who seemed worried as hell. “Everyone remain calm!” he said. “Childs, go get a weapon” he ordered. Childs made his way to the armory, and grabbed a rifle. “We need to stay at full attention” Boris continued “Keep all eyes and ears alert for any upcoming dangers”. Kate was looking up at Boris, but then noticed something strange. She remembered that when she was first brought in by the group, Boris had a long tattoo on the side on his elbow that extended a small bit to his neck. No one in the outpost paid much attention to it, but it had captivated Kate's interest when she had first seen it. She memorized exactly where it was, how it looked and what size it was, even the small bit that poked out of his shirt. Now it was gone, and that could only mean one thing...
She tapped McReady’s arms, motioning him to follow her. They retreated to the back of the room, where Kate told him what she saw in whispers. McReady swallowed every word as if it here water. “We need to warn the others” he said “You tell Childs and Dennis, I’ll tell Clyde, Ben and Kim” she said. Soon, Kate and McReady had told everyone they planned to that Boris was infected, and that action would be needed. They had come up with a plan; Dennis would call for Boris when he had left the room, and the moment he went back in, Childs and Ben would grab him and force him into a chair, while Kim and McReady tied him to it.
I worked perfectly.
Boris was furious, anger written all over his face as he squirted and tugged at the ropes that tied him to the chair. “Untie me this instant you bastards!” he demanded, spitting. The ropes had been wrapped all around his body, tying his chest to the chair. Hand and legs had also been tied together and connected to the chair. The knots had been tied 3 times, to assure no easy escape. “Your assholes, you're my fucking crew! This is mutiny!” he shouted. “Give up the act Boris!” McReady said “We know you're infected”. This infuriated Boris even more “You little shit, McReady! You're just doing this because you want my crew! You never liked me from the start, now you've completely brainwashed my men against me!” he argued. Kate responded “Then how come I saw your vein become green for a split second? Humans don’t have green blood!” she added. Boris looked at her menacingly “You filthy whore. I knew I should have never brought you in!” he growled. “Enough!” Childs blurted out “You will remain tied to this chair until you show your true form” he instructed. Boris looked up at him, then at everyone around him “Oh, I don’t think so…” he said mockingly “I will not die this easily, for I have a little friend coming this way to help me out…” he said right before a bullet went through his head.
“Thank you, Dennis” Kate said. Dennis put down the gun, still lying down. “You're welcome” he said, smiling. As everyone started to walk away from Bori’s dead corpse, Boris began to lift his head up. He let out a mighty roar, so loud that everyone covered their ears in disbelief. Before Dennis could get his gun again, Anthony hing burst through the floor, shielding Boris from danger. Anthony let out a battle cry, just as small, red tentacles emerges from different areas of the floor as well. Childs raised his shotgun, aimed, and was flung to the ground as a tentacle grabbed his shotgun and hoisted it away. Soon,everyone was scattered in different parts of the common room. Anthony made his way to the armoury, grabbing every weapon in sight and crushing it with his tentacle minions.
McReady was on the far left of the room, cornered by a wall of tentacles. 3 tentacles began to move towards him, one of the lurching towards his. McReady dodged it, grabbing it and tying it into a knot. Then he saw a knife sliding towards him. He grabbed it and cut the tentacle, making it screech and retreat immediately. He did the same with the other 2. He saw who had given him the knife, and it was Childs. Childs suddenly made a dash out the common room door. “CHILDS!” McReady shouted, disbelieved Childs would just leave like that. when he heard Denni’s screams.
“Oh God, someone please help me!” he pleaded. Boris was looking straight at him, his head splitting into two pieces. You could see what was inside it, brains, eyeballs, teeth, everything inside the skull was visible. Boris thing began to moan and growl, as his chest began to open. Different parts of his chest muscles were separating, revealing a hollow area inside his chest, no organs were to be seen. Bori’s shirt tore apart, as more arms were formed. Then, the ropes tore as the arms grew spikes on their tips, arrowing boris to free himself. His arms and also split in two pieces, his hands had become two large, fingers and his feet had grown two talons.
As Boris stood up, he roared once again, now in his full glory. Boris started to make his way towards Dennis. “No, NO, NO!” Dennis continued to scream. “Fuck, fuck SOMEONE FUCKING HELP ME!” he screamed, but it was too late. Boris has grabbed the defenceless Dennis from the ground and began to stuff him into the hollow area of his chest. Dennis screamed and cried even more, but began to choke as soon as he was inside the cage. Small tentacles had formed inside the cage, and were now wrapping around Dennis, one going for his neck. The arms began to close, sealing Dennis inside, The only part that remained outside of Dennis were his leg and his head. Kate and McReady had witnessed it all. hen, the Anthony thing lumbered over McReady. It’s face was menacing, orange pupils full of hatred. It opened it’s mouth wide, sharp teeth ready for flesh. McReady got his knife out, ready for what was to come.
Childs burst through the door, automatic shotgun in his hands, blasting he Anthony thing. It screeched in agony as Childs continued shooting it’s tentacle body. More and more chunks of flesh was shot off, until it was left thin. The Anthony thing fell into the ground, the rest of it’s body missing. It had been cut off from the rest of the tentacle with the shotgun, much like cutting a tree from it’s stump. CHilds then faced the Boris thing, but as he aimed towards it, a group of tentacles crashed through the ground, wrapping all around the Boris thing and pulling it downwards.
The Anthony thing was squirming on the ground, no longer capable of slithering away. Childs approached it, pointed the muzzle at it’s head and shot. Immediately every single tentacle in the room stopped moving. hey sulked and remained motionless. Childs looked at the Anthony thing, disgusted, then at McReady “Burn this fucker” he said angrily, yet calmy. “Night is approaching, and you can bet as hell it will be a long night”.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~END OF CHAPTER~~~~~~~~~~~~
Spending over 3 weeks in my drive, I finally finished it! Iv'e been more distracted on other projects, such as a fan-comic series of OddClyde and translating a 5NAF comic into Spanish. So, to make up to you dudes for the lack of THING (not that many people read this though) I combimed chapter 10 and 11 into one! I really hope this hard work one day pays off (but lets be honest, I'm just a smaller star in a galaxy full of enormous ones).
The Thing Evolution: Chapter 9: Discoveries <------Chapter 9 - Chapter 11------> The Thing Evolution Chapter 11: From bad to worse
What IS Anthony thing?- Anthony Thing
What IS Boris thing?- Boris Thing
The Thing 1982 (C) John Carpenter
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Comments: 6
LennonBlack [2015-03-25 03:13:52 +0000 UTC]
Hmmm... pretty good, I kinda didn't dig his veins turning green for a second. Seems too much of a flaw and someone would have pointed this out before. Maybe THE THING can't imitate tattoo's? Otherwise story is still very exciting and good!
I don't wanna seem mean either but the Da Vinci Code came out in 2006, I thought this was still like in 1980 something.
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Dangerdude991 In reply to LennonBlack [2015-03-25 13:55:02 +0000 UTC]
Oh shit, I actually didn't know that XD. That would make a hilarious mistake if this was an actual film, I'm going to have to change that
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LennonBlack In reply to Dangerdude991 [2015-03-26 05:24:28 +0000 UTC]
Change it too umm... let's see umm... Macbeth! It has a quote from it that I think fits perfectly for THE THING.
"By the pricking of your thumb something wicked this way comes!"
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Dangerdude991 In reply to LennonBlack [2015-03-26 14:43:26 +0000 UTC]
Hmm, I was thinking of a Sherlock Holmes book but this seems more adequate!
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LennonBlack In reply to Dangerdude991 [2015-03-27 06:14:29 +0000 UTC]
Indeed it is my friend.
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