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DarkFall16 — When Angels Cry page 11

Published: 2017-12-28 11:23:07 +0000 UTC; Views: 2154; Favourites: 15; Downloads: 72
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It was a backbreaking job, quite literally speaking. Hailee was brave and used to hard work, but her slender teen-aged frame was hardly that of a seasoned gravedigger. After a while, she had to step down into the hole to get more leverage, but the shovel felt heavier with every load of sticky clay. Her shoulders and thighs were killing her, and the skin of her hands was blistering, chafed by the tool’s coarse handle. Yet she gritted her teeth and scooped the muck unrelentingly, her breath rasping in the morning fog.

Finally, she pulled out a last massive chunk and was satisfied that the grave was deep enough. Just wording it in her mind triggered a renting sob, but she knew she had a job to finish first, the sobs would have to wait. She climbed out of the hole and tugged on the shroud as gently and considerately as she could at first. She soon realized that this was not an occasion for gentleness and consideration though. She pulled harder then and clumsily rolled the unwieldy sheath into the trench.

She didn’t want time to think about it, not yet. But she dreaded for it to end. She couldn’t bear to see that empty stretch ahead of her…. And she grabbed the shovel again… With a vengeance… Until all that was left to see was that tiny little cross…and her scarf…. The scarf he’d given her and told her to wear at all times…until she knew…

She sat facing him now… his cross… her scarf… Hailee was an orphan…Again…

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Thank You to everyone following the story, you are appreciated,   Sincerely  DarkFall  and SilkRoad  


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LmAnt [2017-12-30 11:03:29 +0000 UTC]

Very emotional again in both, writing and illustrating!

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kamerijk [2017-12-29 14:53:39 +0000 UTC]

Now young Hailee will have to fend for herself. Wish I could help !

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DarkFall16 In reply to kamerijk [2017-12-29 15:12:57 +0000 UTC]

Hailee will have to grow up even faster now,she is going to be forced to behave in a way that she is not used to,being scared and alone will turn her personality for a while, Hurt and anger will be the dominate force that drives her   

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thomvinson [2017-12-29 09:46:29 +0000 UTC]

Wonderfully painful story and perfect art. 

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DarkFall16 In reply to thomvinson [2017-12-29 14:52:54 +0000 UTC]

Thank You my friend  

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thomvinson In reply to DarkFall16 [2017-12-29 20:52:13 +0000 UTC]

Certainly sir! 

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Rov65 [2017-12-29 07:55:02 +0000 UTC]

Great follow up my friend. I love the detail of the scarfe. It's definitely the finishing touch.

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DarkFall16 In reply to Rov65 [2017-12-29 14:52:41 +0000 UTC]

Thank you I always appreciate your opinion  

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emarukk [2017-12-28 20:09:19 +0000 UTC]

Great writing! Great render.. again. Laspe made alredy good quote... but I'm from the North. Odin is my faher and in the thunder I hear Thor. I hold my hammer high. In the Valhalla we will drink and dance.

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DarkFall16 In reply to emarukk [2017-12-29 14:52:14 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much  friend  

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emarukk In reply to DarkFall16 [2017-12-29 15:29:12 +0000 UTC]

You are very welcome.I rise glass of Akhtamar brandy for you... Then I hit my way to norh.

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DarkFall16 In reply to emarukk [2017-12-29 15:30:34 +0000 UTC]

A man of my own taste shall I propose a toast, and raise a glass   

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emarukk In reply to DarkFall16 [2017-12-29 20:05:10 +0000 UTC]

Skål!

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Laspe [2017-12-28 17:39:57 +0000 UTC]

Reminded me of:

Here is your cross

Your nails and your hill;

And here is the love

That lists where it will

 

May everyone live

And may everyone die

Hello, my love

And my love, Goodbye

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DarkFall16 In reply to Laspe [2017-12-28 17:45:21 +0000 UTC]

What a Beautiful Comment  Thank You so much   

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Laspe In reply to DarkFall16 [2017-12-28 17:47:28 +0000 UTC]

You are welcome, John!

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Kevlar31 [2017-12-28 12:44:48 +0000 UTC]

Another heart string tearing picture and words.

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DarkFall16 In reply to Kevlar31 [2017-12-29 14:51:58 +0000 UTC]

Thank You my friend  

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ronniebegoode [2017-12-28 11:43:39 +0000 UTC]

Again the two of you combine to create a very intense and emotional story. If the angels aren't crying by now, there's something seriously wrong with them.

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DarkFall16 In reply to ronniebegoode [2017-12-29 14:51:47 +0000 UTC]

Thank You so much  

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