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Hailee had thought it out for a long time and she knew this was how she wanted to do it. They didn’t have much, a very modestly furnished little house, literally in the middle of nowhere, with a small piece of land in the back. But it was their own place. And that’s where Jack would rest. She wouldn’t let anyone touch him, let alone take him away to one of those sinister places where they took dead people these days. She would take care of him. One last time…
She’d packed his body into a makeshift shroud of sorts she’d stitched together and hidden in a corner so he wouldn’t see it. Then she’d pulled him out the back door and all the way to the end of their small garden. That part was not nearly as exerting as she’d expected. Jack used to be a muscular man with an athletic frame, but he’d gotten so thin in the last few weeks… And she was so keenly aware that this was the only right thing to do, which gave her unexpected strength.
She laid him tenderly next to her and started digging. She put all her energy and concentration in the task at hand. When you do a job, do it right. Yes, Jack. Her movements were precise and efficient. Find the best position and stick with it. Yes, Jack. Under the leaden morning sky, she dug and shoveled lumps of soggy earth. Find your rhythm, and you won’t have to stop before you’re done. Right, Jack. You know how to work, you’re a big girl now.
No, Jack. I’m not a big girl. I miss you Jack. I miss you so much…
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Comments: 26
LmAnt [2017-12-28 09:14:03 +0000 UTC]
Could you please stop making my cry, dears?
This was so touching!
So, this was what she needed to be ready. And I totally understand her.
Wonderful work from you both!
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SilkRoad57 In reply to LmAnt [2017-12-28 15:11:25 +0000 UTC]
Watch out! He's all kissy-kissy and will never mention the upcoming tears...
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emarukk [2017-12-27 17:15:10 +0000 UTC]
Now I have catch you with the story. Great work. Leads into the destination with great way! Renders are getting more and more advanced. Darknes and sadnes in this one are in new level. I had hard time to read the text since I needed to jump back to image and look new details and how it has been composed. One side is green - other is more gray-blue-dark and clouds are more mancing on that side. Flag is excellent idea. I was staring at the image and start to think if it is only to honor dead or is there message since it is in the dark side (but sun is coming out just behind the flag or lightening clouds). As military man i would have flag on half way up... but Laspe commented this already. (and uppss.. what has happened with my spell check? Need to read what I write).
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DarkFall16 In reply to emarukk [2017-12-28 11:27:51 +0000 UTC]
Thank You sir for your wonderful comment it is appreciated
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Rov65 [2017-12-27 16:04:47 +0000 UTC]
Amazing and moving story my friend. And the picture is one of your best. I totally agree with Laspe about the environment.
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AlexHellmann [2017-12-27 08:38:03 +0000 UTC]
A very touching text along with an excellently made image.
Bravo to both contributors.
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DarkFall16 In reply to AlexHellmann [2017-12-28 11:28:42 +0000 UTC]
Thank You so much glade you like it, we appreciate it
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Torre7 [2017-12-27 07:52:42 +0000 UTC]
I can only agree with previous comments, another wonderful and moving scene.
The writing complements the scene, the last line is the one that hits home.
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DarkFall16 In reply to Torre7 [2017-12-28 13:31:53 +0000 UTC]
Thank You my friend I always appreciate hearing from you
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Laspe [2017-12-27 06:40:58 +0000 UTC]
Heartbreaking and somebody once told me that I am heartless.
What also impresses me is the amount of work you put into creating that dramatic environment for the scene, starting from the sun breaking through the clouds, with lighting to match, ending with the house turned almost into rubble, and all the other signs of complete destruction in between. At first, I thought that showing the flag at half-staff would have been better, but I then realized that Hailee might not be aware of such custom.
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DarkFall16 In reply to Laspe [2017-12-28 13:35:07 +0000 UTC]
This one was a lot of work,the grave was the worst part.
I had to use the very old Morphing grave prop from about 10 years ago and re texture it, sometimes IRay takes to new textures well and sometimes it needs a bunch of dial turning,
this was one of those times.
Thank You for your wonderful comment my friend
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Laspe In reply to DarkFall16 [2017-12-28 18:01:21 +0000 UTC]
You are welcome, John!
I know what you mean about retexturing older items, although I find the results quite rewarding. One of the reasons being that older products usually have more material zone compared to those designed for Iray.
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mrhungry56 [2017-12-27 01:13:16 +0000 UTC]
I totally agree with the three previous comments. Awesome and emotional scene and words. Very well done.
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berseh [2017-12-26 23:20:16 +0000 UTC]
Hailee's side of the story starts pretty sad and tough. Great general overview.
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DarkFall16 In reply to berseh [2017-12-27 02:27:53 +0000 UTC]
Agree,there is nothing like having a 14 year old girl alone and on her own in Hell Hailee has a lot of growing up to do and no one to direct her
Thank you for your great comment
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ronniebegoode [2017-12-26 22:06:20 +0000 UTC]
Heartbreaking. Very intense and emotional from both of you.
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