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Another strenuous heaving of his exhausted chest. The pain was permanent and excruciating. Had been for days on end. One agonizing sleepless day after another.

‘Won’t be much longer now’, he thought, almost listlessly. Which would have been a blessing, had the vicious curse chosen to track him down a few years earlier, like it had done for his dad and uncle. Both had been sturdy, hard working men, both had been buried in the little cemetery on the edge of the village before they were forty years old. The doctors – there were still doctors in those days, he scoffed inwardly – had been quite straightforward about it. ‘It’s a nasty strain we can’t cure at this point. Once it’s declared, it will wipe you out within two years at most’.

Jack had gotten the message then. He knew he was to be the next Rodgers on the dreadful list. When he turned forty and still felt like a Raging Bull of sorts, the thought started to creep into his mind that maybe destiny had taken an unexpected quirky turn…

But it hadn’t. It was just biding its time. So it could make its triumphal entrance at the worst possible moment.

Those incredible five years had been such a blessing. Even now, as what little energy that still remained was deserting him and their parting time was getting close, he kept an incredibly vivid reminiscence of the discordant tunes filling his ears as he ran looking for shelter on that ghostly day of doom and bliss. The absurd noises of war and destruction, shrill and strident and thunderous, kept at bay by the weakest lonely little birdsong fluttering in his ear. Her warm breath and her pounding heart as he carried her snugly wrapped in his arms through the smoke and the dust. That day when the mighty walls of the city came crumbling down. That day when a miracle child was born to him. Hailee.

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Comments: 15

LmAnt [2017-12-28 09:06:32 +0000 UTC]

jeez, that almost reads like the tale of a new saviours birth!
And that's meant in the most positive way!
It's really deeply moving!

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thomvinson [2017-12-28 07:30:38 +0000 UTC]

Wow! Heart rending. . . Very nicely done! 

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Rov65 [2017-12-22 19:22:12 +0000 UTC]

Great continuation my friend. Powerfull and delicate.

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DarkFall16 In reply to Rov65 [2017-12-22 23:53:25 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so very much  glad you like it  

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Kevlar31 [2017-12-20 23:03:20 +0000 UTC]

Another powerful image and just the words are just as powerful!

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DarkFall16 In reply to Kevlar31 [2017-12-22 23:55:09 +0000 UTC]

Thank You my friend  

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ronniebegoode [2017-12-20 21:24:01 +0000 UTC]

Absolutely wonderful writing, unbearably moving story.

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DarkFall16 In reply to ronniebegoode [2017-12-23 12:51:37 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much   

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berseh [2017-12-20 14:47:41 +0000 UTC]

A friend told me he once when he was in a hospital, in bed he saw his shadow disappear and understood the kiss of death was nearing. From there he fought to come back. And he did. That's what the terrible shadowlike form made me think. Great image!

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Laspe [2017-12-20 14:45:13 +0000 UTC]

"I'm ready, my lord."

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DarkFall16 In reply to Laspe [2017-12-22 11:06:00 +0000 UTC]

Thank You my friend  

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mrhungry56 [2017-12-20 13:03:55 +0000 UTC]

The text is beautifully composed and the artwork is excellent. Terrific work on this series.

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DarkFall16 In reply to mrhungry56 [2017-12-22 11:04:52 +0000 UTC]

Thank you my friend,and Thank you for showing me how to do the forward backward thing on my story  

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Torre7 [2017-12-20 13:02:16 +0000 UTC]

A very moving scene.    

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DarkFall16 In reply to Torre7 [2017-12-22 11:04:08 +0000 UTC]

Thank You so much my friend  

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