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glitcher — SONIC RETOLD - Issue 1, Page 15
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Published: 2017-02-06 15:21:06 +0000 UTC; Views: 29595; Favourites: 264; Downloads: 91
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Funny story with this one. I was running at half-steam when I drew this page months ago, so I didn't catch a mistake I made in the third panel. I originally drew it from a level angle cropped below the knees, which you can see here:Looking back, I was unhappy with this angle because it wasn't clear that the Legionnaire fell down after being struck. (Remington's pose is also a little stiff.) With time to spare, I made the dramatic life-changing decision to redraw the third panel yesterday from an overhead angle, which displays the characters' relative positions more clearly. Let this be a lesson to everyone. You should always be mindful about varying the viewing angle in your comic panels for the best layout. It's easy to fall into the trap of taking the simple approach and draw the characters from a level angle every time - even for an old hand like me.
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at least he was able to save them but Komi doesn't look like she's in there.
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Going as far to not only imprison children but experiment on them, Robotnik and the Dark Egg Legion truly have reached an all time low!!!
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UGH The suspense! I can't wait 4 days for the next page ;_;
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I really like how the comic move the point of attention. First our attention was in Remington, later was is Lara-lee, then was in Lien-da, then was in Sonic (and Sally) and now we return to Remington (and Komi) to make so many changes of attention without feel force it (specially in 15 pages) is awesome!!
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Thanks. 
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Yep, I really do like this panel angle more than the original version of it. ^^
Poor kids though. They seem to have been there awhile given how dirty they look.
Overall, I think the comic is coming along great! Keep it up! ^^
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DUDE these pages are AMAZING!!! I love this comic sooooo much!
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These are words one doesn't say often in life, but I'll say it feels so good to see more than one echidna again. Thanks for that. I mean it.
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And I haven't even gotten around to Knuckles yet. There's plenty of echidna goodness left to come.
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The re-draw was a good idea, and it turned out very well
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Oh, i remember Komi-ko!!
Also good change on that panel! It definitely looks better than before
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Wait a minute.....aren't these prisoners the kids that Komi Ko was teaching before Lien Da attacked in the original comic? Maybe they know where Komi is.......
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Poor echidnas in the last panel look more frightened, but where is Komi Ko?
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Oh yeah, that edit is definitely more clear. Dang. I really respect you for taking all that time to redo that panel, since it was already colored and all. Must have been a pain.
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A couple hours - not too bad. Creating a comic gets you used to a heavy workload, so redrawing one panel is not as long or painful as you'd think.
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I agree, this angle looks better for Panel 3 than the original.
Looks like Remi's gonna get the prisoners out. Is Komi among them though...?
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Remington's love interest.
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