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Published: 2016-11-21 17:35:37 +0000 UTC; Views: 30092; Favourites: 292; Downloads: 100
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Looks like Remington has got some help on his side. Maybe he stands a fighting chance after all.
I want to give a shout-out to for being the first reader to correctly guess that the person speaking at the bottom of the previous page is Lien-Da.
I'm actually quite proud with the way she turned out here. But who is that standing behind her? Hmm....VERSION EN ESPAÑOL
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Wouldn't be the first time.
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OK, how did Remington NOT hear that Legionnaire's gun going off with it was tripped over? 
Either way, looks like Team Sonic is here and Lien-Da's gonna be screwed.
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Who says he didn't hear it?
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Good point, maybe he KNOWS Team Sonic is here.
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Good job! Lien-da and Lara-le look great!
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Invincible, you say? Well, sorry to disagree with you there, Lien-Da. But I think the Freedom Fighters might say otherwise!
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If you think your army is invincible, why are they easily being beaten?
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Took me about a minute to realize that's Tails in panel 4. The character behind Lien-Da has a certain youthful appearance (possibly the ponytail?) that makes her seem really cute -- though I'm sure she'll split someone's skull wide open if pushed. I can't be sure, but it looks like she's holding a handheld computer of some kind. Too thick to be a paper. I like the architecture in the background of all these pages and hope there's a chance to see a better close-up of some more impressive sites.
But I regretfully have a little complaint. The format of the panels here feels too straightforward. Unless there's a specific reason the bottom 4 are side-by-side, it probably would have been better to use more variance.
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Well, the bottom four panels represent sequential movement, so it makes sense to show them from the same angle. It's not uncommon in comics.
Many readers mentioned Amy's hammer, but I'm concerned that you're the only one who identified Tails' tails. Are they really that hard to spot?
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Honestly, until I read these two comments, I thought it was Sonic spindashing him to knock him over because of all the blue in the motion blur thing. Took me a moment to notice the tails even after I saw these comments.
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Hmm... if multiple readers are overlooking it, I should fix it. I concentrated the speed lines more towards the tails to draw readers' attention to them. Do you think it looks better this way?
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LOL! If you get to this page by clicking on the link from the previous page, you can see the first version.
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Huh! That's really weird. 
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It's a dA bug in their coding that's been around for years. I doubt they'll ever fix it.
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Yes, that definitely improved the image. Now the focal point is where he's being grabbed instead of his whole body.
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that Hammer shot is perfect amazing job
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Looks like Remington has a few guardian angels to offset "Ms. Invincible's" troops.
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Amy's hammer?! whoosh of air? hmm I think this guy has backup with him.
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It's not just a whoosh of air. Did you see his legs? (I'm worried that too many readers are missing this.)
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Oh I didn't notice the legs but yeah I get what you're hinting at.
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Well that's a rare treat a female Echidna that isn't related to knuckles someway.
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By invincible you mean cannon fodder.
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People often get those terms confused.
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Even better ^^
Lien-Da and Lara Le look lovely in this.
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Lien-Da has an interesting perception of "great", considering that she's current stuck under the heel of an insane manchild by way of an explosive in her skull.
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"Once-great", dear reader. "Once-great".
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My point is that aligning with the DEL would just make Lara-Le's people fall further from their former glory.
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Always the thing with Lien-Da, she never could tell what's really gonna happen before it blows up in her face. (Almost literally!)
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The one behind Lien-Da, looks like Gae-Na. And in the last panel I think Amy will appear.
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