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Published: 2011-01-24 05:21:02 +0000 UTC; Views: 667; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 9
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The next page of my comic. The last two panels came out really well, but the first one could use a little touchup. The second one is just a transition, and keeps the focus in the right place, so I'm okay with it.Poor Sarah. I'm really letting her have it in this story. She can't even have a good time in her dreams.
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Tundra-Sky [2011-01-24 06:31:10 +0000 UTC]
I like the line art and the way you colour; its also very detailed, nice work . The third panal (with her hair being tugged) really made me cringe; it's so well drawn I can imagine someone doing that to my hair! Poor girl.
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MrAverage In reply to Tundra-Sky [2011-01-25 05:28:46 +0000 UTC]
Thanks! As this is a dream she's having (to some extent, anyhow) I really tried to make the "feeling" come out right. I shave my head, actually, so I have no real idea what it would feel like to have someone pull my hair like that, but I imagine it'd be quite a shock.
--M
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